Ashore

Holy Blue Lagoon!
Makes me want to be shipwrecked on a deserted Island with a poetess luke you.

Ah, thanks snugglebuck. I'm thrilled you liked it!

take thy hand as two hit the shore
for a smooth landing as softness of my hand holds you up
nice write

I thank you so very kindly, my friend.

This is beautiful Pandora!

Glad you liked it Miss Bonzi!!

Whoa, nicely written and with an inventive use of imagery. Well done!

Thank You, Miss Luna. Guess I'm dreaming about the ocean in Jan already. Lol

Classy, well written eroticism, Pandora.  You leave much to the imagination.  Excellent...

Thank You, Mr Crowfly. I appreciate the wonderful compliment so very much...you made me smile.

This is spectacular! Lovely flow and just beautiful👏👏

Thank you, Hunterapsych. It's so nice to see you in my commentary with such a generous one!!

There is something quite romantic about this thought.  I surrender to such glistening waves.  I like the ship motifs used to illustrate this.

Thank you, T. I remembered an old piece from my newer days here, The Muse and My Sea and these few lines came to mind.

I may have to seek that out from the back catalogue.  

I thought that's what I called it here, it was that name elsewhere. Wow, brings back memories. We truly were in sync while writing...

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/315625-my-sea-of-love/

His part was in reply to this piece...

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/312837-his-ocean/

Pandora,
Beautiful. Fantastic use of the beauty of the sea to display the beauty of romantic love. (You keep getting better. It took me 25 minutes to scroll to the comment section! Lol).
Keep going.
Love,
Matthew.

Heehee, thank you as always. I left links in Tenderloins comment above yours. Read it and look back if you wish,  to those old pieces. Hugs

I will, thank you(after I ice my thumb from scrolling so long).😜😎.

It's great being on here with you. You really make it nice.

Matthew.

Thank you. I absolutely agree with you on that account! I've written about the sea in erotic pieces many times. I had a run in with nostalgia regarding an old piece , in which my then, muse played a part and this popped in my head. You don't have to read if you don't wish but here's the links.  

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/315625-my-sea-of-love/

His words were inspired by this  

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/312837-his-ocean/

Beautiful poem, Pandora! Nice work!

I thank you ever so kindly;)