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seX Factor....X (part 1)
Biting of the skin, tearing of flesh
Long nails dug deep into my back
Hedonistically, extroverted, unadulterated Sex
(......we are so completely Amster-Damned)
Ur spine so radically bent until it looks like it's gonna' break
Pelvic thrust so strong, so hard
I feel the earth move, I can feel the room shake
When the seX Factor x sets in
Lovemaking ends
and Phucking begins
X-ponential erotic cravings
we become animals in heat
Floods of sexual juices
Mutual beating of torrid hot sex-meat
Huge, blood engorged phallus
Buried inside your hot molten vagina so deep
Crashing together like waves against the shore
with such force, skin tissue begins to tear; sex organs begin to bleed.....
Bodies twisted, a sexual Cirque de Soleil
Contractions, tension, release and moans
Lurid sexual positions
Evolving in some deep, dark, grotesque artistic way......
…..and it feels so damned good
like a raging hot fire
Like molten, hot magma deep within the earth
consuming, raising our erotic sensibilities higher and higher
Pleasures so intense, screams of erotic delight
Echoes into darkness
Sex sounds dissipate into early morning light
seX Factor x ….........can you but say the words
“Fuck me, rape me, deeper, harder, OH Shit!, Fuck it harder, eat my pussy baby-mmmmmmmm....get it in!”
Love making as we know it- all gone.........pleasure-cubed, exponentially
it begins........................
….....within the seX Factor x
Published 12th Nov 2011
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12th Nov 2011 3:33pm
12th Nov 2011 4:01pm
Wow! What a great way to start the morning!
I'm ready for the seX Factor x to set in! ; )
I enjoyed reading this write. The picture alone, sent electrical waves through out my body!
I'm ready for the seX Factor x to set in! ; )
I enjoyed reading this write. The picture alone, sent electrical waves through out my body!
13th Nov 2011 00:41am
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13th Nov 2011 6:19am
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14th Nov 2011 11:11am
Anonymous
6th Dec 2011 4:50am
Oh My...got me all Hot and Bothered now ;) what a steamy read! Loved it :)
6th Dec 2011 5:02am
thank you : ) I'm glad I was able to melt your "butta' creme" just a little bit
8th Dec 2011 6:29am
Loved the way you mixed pop culture in your masterpiece. I could see this working juxtaposed some serious P-funk, Rick James, or Ohio Players. Forgive me for not suggesting more modern music magic makers but I tend to favor old school! Great visual art piece!
2nd Jan 2014 3:41pm
Oh boy I think someone needs a stretcher after this encounter.All the lines were my favorite .
