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Smoldering Seduction In The Garden
a Goddess stirs awakened to her imprisonment
she went into hiding and fell asleep in this dimension
under the cover of darkness, she reveals her position
manifested here in human form
destruction is her name
jealousy her nature
the God of the place has disgraced her
a lothario she bumped into once
her ebony face visited
then within a blinks time, he vanished
a one night stand, a cosmic hit, and run
he just disappeared
after eons untold of loneliness
she found her way here in the midst of lovely gardens
there she spied a woman
her God's head was turned
infatuated with a mortal
burning with need and hate
she devised a plan
she would see the fall of man
and God's plan to replace her would be for naught
so she sent in a serpent
who wholly beguiled the woman
made her lust for the man
and in her eyes, God was replaced
rejected her God finally knew her own pain
they square off in this realm of understanding
he seeks to keep the Goddess for his own
she has become highly accomplished in the art of seduction
and has many men she grooms for potential mates
she vows her greatest magic trick will be a disappearing act
when at the ends of time she vanishes absconding with her peoples
she stirs in me now
her voice echoing within my sacred halls
she is manifested a flesh woman
able to keep her promise
able to turn God's head
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27th Nov 2018 2:20pm
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27th Nov 2018 2:22pm
thank you dearest Poet for such a great comment bringing me smiles...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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27th Nov 2018 2:52pm
thank you dearest DB for such a beautiful comment that has me smiling widely...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. Smoldering Seduction In The Garden
Anonymous
27th Nov 2018 3:15pm
Every garden should witness such a spiritual awakening. Lovely depiction of the fall, any fall. Oo adore the accompanying picture. Rob
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Re: Re. Smoldering Seduction In The Garden
27th Nov 2018 3:16pm
thank you dearest Rob for the love on this write... she is one pissed off Goddess I thought the picture fit perfectly lol...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. Smoldering Seduction In The Garden
Anonymous
27th Nov 2018 3:22pm
And the shift of power begins...beautifully written, my beautiful Dark Angel. There is strength and awareness in this piece.
I love you
...ever your Willow
I love you
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. Smoldering Seduction In The Garden
27th Nov 2018 3:23pm
thank you beautiful Willow for understanding this write...
I love you lovely one...
love Brenda 💕
I love you lovely one...
love Brenda 💕
Re. Smoldering Seduction In The Garden
Anonymous
27th Nov 2018 3:24pm
Crimmy!
That's fantastic! The way you tie fantasy into reality is just awesome!!
Write that fantasy novel!! You're a wonderful writer!
Love,
Matthew.
That's fantastic! The way you tie fantasy into reality is just awesome!!
Write that fantasy novel!! You're a wonderful writer!
Love,
Matthew.
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Re: Re. Smoldering Seduction In The Garden
27th Nov 2018 3:25pm
aw thank you graciously dearest Matthew you make me smile... I deeply appreciate you dear one...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Anonymous
27th Nov 2018 3:34pm
Thank you, my friend!
You make me see the beauty in life again!
Love,
Matthew.
You make me see the beauty in life again!
Love,
Matthew.
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27th Nov 2018 3:43pm
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Re: Re. Smoldering Seduction In The Garden
1st Dec 2018 2:20pm
thank you most graciously beautiful Velvet you made blush with your lovely comment...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. Smoldering Seduction In The Garden
27th Nov 2018 10:08pm
Wow such an epic piece of poetry as usual👏👏
"a Goddess stirs awakened to her imprisonment
she went into hiding and fell asleep in this dimension
under the cover of darkness, she reveals her position
manifested here in human form"
Wow amazing, purely poetic, what a great write Brenda👏✌
"a Goddess stirs awakened to her imprisonment
she went into hiding and fell asleep in this dimension
under the cover of darkness, she reveals her position
manifested here in human form"
Wow amazing, purely poetic, what a great write Brenda👏✌
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1st Dec 2018 2:22pm
thank you graciously dearest Hunter I'm smiling wide from your comment...being a very gifted writer yourself i'm honored...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. Smoldering Seduction In The Garden
28th Nov 2018 00:13am
You are a Goddess around here, Brenda, and probably elsewhere. I love your imagination in or out of the garden. You weave lines together with style and flair.
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1st Dec 2018 2:22pm
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow you mean the world to me I hope you know...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. Smoldering Seduction In The Garden
28th Nov 2018 8:39am
"able to turn God's head"
Knock out pic...killer rhymes
Doth Lilith awaking in this world of write?
Or a Crimsin fire burning the garden tonight?
love always, my dark temptress
Jeff
Knock out pic...killer rhymes
Doth Lilith awaking in this world of write?
Or a Crimsin fire burning the garden tonight?
love always, my dark temptress
Jeff
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1st Dec 2018 2:24pm
thank you graciously dearest Jeff Lilith perhaps she didn't leave her name only a Goddess who reveals herself to me from time to time...
I deeply cherish you...
love Brenda 🌹
I deeply cherish you...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. Smoldering Seduction In The Garden
29th Nov 2018 9:52am
The figurine Immortalised by your poem, this inspired you swell and in a sensational way. Your works are gorgeous. Kudos.
Pleez do review/ add your thoughts/ comment on my newest poem too. Nice to say hi to all here again.
Pleez do review/ add your thoughts/ comment on my newest poem too. Nice to say hi to all here again.
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1st Dec 2018 2:24pm
thank you graciously beautiful Zaynab for such a beautiful comment...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕