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Good Morning
Breath startled and sustained me this morning
My ziggurat embraced and entombed me
In a estacically painful cycle
Encircled by my lover and progeny
Animation is an unwavering math
With Inhalation as a karmic illustration
And my elements the illustrator
We continue
But this is not my preferred medium
My ziggurat embraced and entombed me
In a estacically painful cycle
Encircled by my lover and progeny
Animation is an unwavering math
With Inhalation as a karmic illustration
And my elements the illustrator
We continue
But this is not my preferred medium
Published 5th Nov 2018
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You have some nice imagery here... off to a good start.
Not perhaps, preferred, but...
will you not
become more proficient as you learn to use...
your new tools?
follow through is important too. Ely
Not perhaps, preferred, but...
will you not
become more proficient as you learn to use...
your new tools?
follow through is important too. Ely
5th Nov 2018 2:40pm
14th Nov 2018 3:40am
