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He Speaks To Me
How beautiful thou art
My precious love
An angel's face shining
As the morning dove
No pain be in your heart
No tear be on your cheek
Thy somber mission granted
I hold thee, small and meek
The frailest of the flock
The smallest grain of sand
My commands you keep
Till thy victory's at hand
Do not be in fear
Behold me on mine throne
Hear now my calling
And I shall lead thee home
My precious love
An angel's face shining
As the morning dove
No pain be in your heart
No tear be on your cheek
Thy somber mission granted
I hold thee, small and meek
The frailest of the flock
The smallest grain of sand
My commands you keep
Till thy victory's at hand
Do not be in fear
Behold me on mine throne
Hear now my calling
And I shall lead thee home
Published 11th Oct 2018
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11th Oct 2018 5:30am
11th Oct 2018 5:42am
Anonymous
11th Oct 2018 5:37am
Meddy,
You've really got a creative, beautiful mind, my friend.
Love your writing!
Matthew.
You've really got a creative, beautiful mind, my friend.
Love your writing!
Matthew.
11th Oct 2018 5:43am
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Anonymous
11th Oct 2018 8:32am
Very beautiful. Have faith. Faith shall always be your anchor. Very good ink my dear. J
11th Oct 2018 9:09am
11th Oct 2018 3:47pm
Your tender spirit you reveal to us in this piece.
I was moved by the last lines.
I just experienced some brief fear recently as the Holy Spirit gave me some revelations,
Hence why I wrote my last verses.
Thank you for sharing this
I was moved by the last lines.
I just experienced some brief fear recently as the Holy Spirit gave me some revelations,
Hence why I wrote my last verses.
Thank you for sharing this
12th Oct 2018 00:46am
13th Nov 2018 5:24pm
The images that fly at me...
angel's face / morning dove / mission granted / small and meek / frailest of the flock /
grain of sand / my commands you keep / throne / I shall lead thee home
...reveal a strong spiritual connection. These are Biblical images. The sentiments remind me of the voice of the prophet, "How lovely on the mountains are the feet of him who brings good news..." (Isaiah 52:7). King David or his son King Solomon could easily have written these thoughts among the Psalms or the Song of Songs, respectively. I really like your poem.
angel's face / morning dove / mission granted / small and meek / frailest of the flock /
grain of sand / my commands you keep / throne / I shall lead thee home
...reveal a strong spiritual connection. These are Biblical images. The sentiments remind me of the voice of the prophet, "How lovely on the mountains are the feet of him who brings good news..." (Isaiah 52:7). King David or his son King Solomon could easily have written these thoughts among the Psalms or the Song of Songs, respectively. I really like your poem.
13th Nov 2018 7:10pm
Thank you so very very much. I didn't know if this one would go over that well here. Thanks again
