pilgrim’s goodbye

Brava Rachelle! Wonderfully sensual piece. For whatever reason my favorite passage is "As if it were what it was. "

Thank you so much!  That line stuck to me, too, even though I first wanted to get back to it and tie it in a bit more cleverly. :). R.

Excellent, Rachelle.

Thanks so much, Avahati!  :). R.

But at least something to remember each other by until the next time you meet. ;-)

Perhaps :). Thanks for stopping in!..

now that's how you say goodbye...

:).  Doesn’t always work out that way, but when it does....

Love the play with contrasts here.  And of course, the observation.  Excellent!

Thank you for the comments and the add! Glad you enjoyed :).

Thanks, Adam!.. 🙏🏽