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Radiant Tonight
Her skin shines in the bathroom light
Glistening in a shower's glow
The pulsing spray shared with her love
His hands sliding where they may
Soaping her breasts and shapely ass
Slipping his fingers deep inside
Hygiene complete, and verified
They hasten to the hotel bed
Ravage each other in the dark
Their mouths tasting gleaming sweat
The fine sheen of a perfect fuck
She claws his back, and tends to bite
But she looks radiant tonight.
Glistening in a shower's glow
The pulsing spray shared with her love
His hands sliding where they may
Soaping her breasts and shapely ass
Slipping his fingers deep inside
Hygiene complete, and verified
They hasten to the hotel bed
Ravage each other in the dark
Their mouths tasting gleaming sweat
The fine sheen of a perfect fuck
She claws his back, and tends to bite
But she looks radiant tonight.
Published 8th Jul 2018
Author's Note
The title is from a line in the Blondie song "Tonight". Forgot to click the "extreme content warning" incidentally. That option isn't available in "editing", far as I can tell. Hope there's no offense.
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8th Jul 2018 11:05pm
8th Jul 2018 11:07pm
I like the matter of fact "hygiene complete and verified" CHECK! Sensual piece Sir Crow, delicious imagery. Brava!
9th Jul 2018 1:20am
9th Jul 2018 2:13am
9th Jul 2018 5:42am
Radiance and lusty love go together, Crowfly. Glad they took a shower before hand:) it can be a sweaty endeavour....great read,
9th Jul 2018 7:11am
Noticed the 'Blondie' song inspiration - a sexy few steps further on from another song, 'The Way You Look Tonight' (Eric Clapton).
In this weather at moment in England, good time for a shared spray down for couples. Might write a poem based on the pic.
In this weather at moment in England, good time for a shared spray down for couples. Might write a poem based on the pic.
9th Jul 2018 1:14pm
Oh. Delicious, would be an understatement.
Um. Definitely, no offence taken in my eyes !
Adoring, are such glimpses of you, and those passionate gripping moments of pleasure ~ 😎🌹🌞🎈🌻
Um. Definitely, no offence taken in my eyes !
Adoring, are such glimpses of you, and those passionate gripping moments of pleasure ~ 😎🌹🌞🎈🌻
9th Jul 2018 5:45pm
