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The Soft Explosion
She smiles and knows he understands
The practiced talent of her hands
Shining with a scented oil
Bringing him to a full boil
She fingers 'til he's hard as rock
Teases his now pulsing cock
Pre-cum dripping from the tip
Shining in her gentle grip
A brief pause then she travels south
Takes him fully in her mouth
Her tongue and lips do what they may
Still keeping the surge at bay
He comes with a final moan
Being well and truly blown
Liquid pearls on her chin
The soft explosion in her grin.
The practiced talent of her hands
Shining with a scented oil
Bringing him to a full boil
She fingers 'til he's hard as rock
Teases his now pulsing cock
Pre-cum dripping from the tip
Shining in her gentle grip
A brief pause then she travels south
Takes him fully in her mouth
Her tongue and lips do what they may
Still keeping the surge at bay
He comes with a final moan
Being well and truly blown
Liquid pearls on her chin
The soft explosion in her grin.
Published 13th Jul 2018
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Anonymous
13th Jul 2018 1:28am
Liquid Pearls ...
no other gentler way to describe
what inhibits the insanity of men
when touched by a single finger;
I enjoy the readings
of classy erotic poetry and
the imagery it brings about
~Devlin
13th Jul 2018 1:46am
Great comment, Devlin. "The insanity of men." Wow! Fine way to describe the masculine libido,, sex drive or madness. Thanks for the kind words and RL entry!
Anonymous
13th Jul 2018 2:03am
You`re so welcome!
Anonymous
13th Jul 2018 2:38am
My dear Crow you hit the nail with a perfect tap. Word wise it's fantasticly composed and Vision wise it's a perfect picture. I agree with Devlin. But I believe that many women share the compulsions not any less than men. And in all fairness, I am pleased they do. Well done dear friend. J.
13th Jul 2018 11:25pm
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13th Jul 2018 11:24am
Oral delights that elicit soft explosions... are a gorgeous thing ~ 🤩😎🎈🌞🌹
13th Jul 2018 11:34pm
13th Jul 2018 3:32pm
dearest Sir Crow
lusty pages feeling my mind with sexy images...
I think you have found your calling
in erotica...
a beautiful turn on...
love Crim
lusty pages feeling my mind with sexy images...
I think you have found your calling
in erotica...
a beautiful turn on...
love Crim
13th Jul 2018 11:34pm
13th Jul 2018 3:51pm
Crowfly you perv you! I always knew you had it in you, you beast!
some pretty provocative stuff in here!
love it!!!
Jackie xoxox
some pretty provocative stuff in here!
love it!!!
Jackie xoxox
13th Jul 2018 11:36pm
Anonymous
13th Jul 2018 5:44pm
So hot the way you describe it.
13th Jul 2018 11:38pm
I try. I'm not usually adept at erotica, but once in a while I come through. Hopefully. Thanks Catman!
Anonymous
14th Jul 2018 11:59am
You are very welcome.
14th Jul 2018 8:56am
