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It's Independence Day and I'm up Early Deleting Poems
Some poens aren't meant to be around long
Bukowski never deleted anything
When he died they found boxes and boxes of unpublished work
This is what he did, in between drinking and whoring
Some people compare my style to his
He got there first
Felt no shame about his content
I feel shame all the time
I write a lot of fuck and suck
In your face, direct no filter
I enjoy writing them at the time
They will not live in infamy, couple of days, maybe ....
Bukowski never deleted anything
When he died they found boxes and boxes of unpublished work
This is what he did, in between drinking and whoring
Some people compare my style to his
He got there first
Felt no shame about his content
I feel shame all the time
I write a lot of fuck and suck
In your face, direct no filter
I enjoy writing them at the time
They will not live in infamy, couple of days, maybe ....
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Re. It's Independence Day and I'm up Early Deleting Poems
4th Jul 2018 12:19pm
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4th Jul 2018 12:26pm
Re. It's Independence Day and I'm up Early Deleting Poems
Anonymous
4th Jul 2018 12:57pm
Love this. I have a friend who on the first of January, ceremonially burns the previous year's diary. Couldn't do that myself, the need to sometimes reconnect with the past mess, distress & good.
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4th Jul 2018 1:00pm
I agree, a diary should be kept for reference.
Some of my poems are like fast food, good going down but makes you sorry later on. Those need to go ...
Thx for your comment
Some of my poems are like fast food, good going down but makes you sorry later on. Those need to go ...
Thx for your comment
Re. It's Independence Day and I'm up Early Deleting Poems
4th Jul 2018 1:09pm
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4th Jul 2018 1:15pm
Thanks Kate
Not exactly cleaning up, just straightening out my drawers, if you will ....
Not exactly cleaning up, just straightening out my drawers, if you will ....
Re. It's Independence Day and I'm up Early Deleting Poems
4th Jul 2018 4:11pm
I see your poems as truth of the moment in some way or another, nothing more...great way to bleed the lines before too much pressure builds up and blows your head I guess. I enjoy it for the most part. I think Bukowski was one of those who dared to say what others where keeping hidden deep inside. So he offended the hypocrites and gave satisfaction to the cowards. He was a glorious man and yet he was very missunderstood. He for sure drank a lot...I don't know about the whoring. The more one talks about it the less it goes on...
It's all good...
Write them
Spill them
Fuck it
Kill them
The poems.....
It's all good...
Write them
Spill them
Fuck it
Kill them
The poems.....
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Re: Re. It's Independence Day and I'm up Early Deleting Poems
4th Jul 2018 4:47pm
The poems come to me and I write them. I never go looking for them. Somehow they found out where I live. Bukowski was a pioneer and a barn burner, that's for sure. More than his content what impresses me most was his quest and thirst to write. I like his novels a lot , Post Office and Factotum are my favs.
Thx
Thx
Re: Re. It's Independence Day and I'm up Early Deleting Poems
4th Jul 2018 4:53pm
Buk jumpstarted me on the whole poetry thing. I listened to him and read his stuff a lot before I found the underground. I owe to him.
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4th Jul 2018 4:58pm
He was introduced to me late in life. I get compared to him a lot so I take it as a compliment. I've been lucky in my short writing career, I've had inspiration and a few mentors and lots of readers. What more can I ask ?
Re. It's Independence Day and I'm up Early Deleting Poems
4th Jul 2018 4:29pm
I wish I could be as honest as Bukowski...love his poetry. I try not to delete poems,
I like your style...keep writing - no filter.
I like your style...keep writing - no filter.
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Re: Re. It's Independence Day and I'm up Early Deleting Poems
4th Jul 2018 4:50pm
Writing is in my core. I wrote when I was in college and then not again for many years. I'm glad it morphed back to me. I do greatly enjoy the process.
Thx
Thx
Re. It's Independence Day and I'm up Early Deleting Poems
4th Jul 2018 7:17pm
Wow but if you can write in such an interesting way don't delete any. Let your files and folders fill if you can always write as awesome as this. Gotta read more. Kudos.
Hi I'm quite a newbie here, but have been writting and interacting for ages. Pleez do write your thoughts/comments under my newest poem titled, "play it on your lips", I like meeting poets and poems.
Hi I'm quite a newbie here, but have been writting and interacting for ages. Pleez do write your thoughts/comments under my newest poem titled, "play it on your lips", I like meeting poets and poems.
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4th Jul 2018 10:56pm
Re. It's Independence Day and I'm up Early Deleting Poems
5th Jul 2018 11:46am
Good ink, Poet.
Felt no shame about his content
I feel shame all the time
I don't know, Poet. Listen to him read his poem 'Bluebird'. That right there shows you all you need to know about how he truly felt, and why he did what he did.
Felt no shame about his content
I feel shame all the time
I don't know, Poet. Listen to him read his poem 'Bluebird'. That right there shows you all you need to know about how he truly felt, and why he did what he did.
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Re: Re. It's Independence Day and I'm up Early Deleting Poems
5th Jul 2018 11:54am
You've mentioned "Bluebird" before, will take another look
My shame is ironic. I think of myself as a gentleman, raised with good manners and the like. Yet I am just a core Man, with all the trappings of desire, so I write them, leave most but take down some. So in my own head, I can remain a gentleman. Does that make sense ??
My shame is ironic. I think of myself as a gentleman, raised with good manners and the like. Yet I am just a core Man, with all the trappings of desire, so I write them, leave most but take down some. So in my own head, I can remain a gentleman. Does that make sense ??
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5th Jul 2018 12:13pm
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5th Jul 2018 12:35pm
Re. It's Independence Day and I'm up Early Deleting Poems
7th Jul 2018 1:24am
I am a big fan of the "delete" option for certain things, such as my poems as well. Thank somebody, it is available. =)
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Re. It's Independence Day and I'm up Early Deleting Poems
7th Jul 2018 2:44am
As you know I like to write a lot of man/woman fuck and suck. That stuff is fun for 24 hours but then a lot of it has to go. I still think of myself as a gentleman, twisted no doubt but with good manners.
Re. It's Independence Day and I'm up Early Deleting Poems
7th Jul 2018 2:46am
dearest Poet I like your fuck you style
but I know about regrets
aren't we most honest when we're drunk
we should never be sober
I think that's what Bukowski did :)
love you..
Brenda
but I know about regrets
aren't we most honest when we're drunk
we should never be sober
I think that's what Bukowski did :)
love you..
Brenda
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7th Jul 2018 2:52am
I hardly ever write when I've drunk too much. Most of my ink comes in the early morning. I used to drink more because I was angry or depressed. Now I drink to relax, it's better ...
Thx Babe
Thx Babe
Re. It's Independence Day and I'm up Early Deleting Poems
Anonymous
11th Jul 2018 3:50pm
Save us some of your favorite pieces. Gotta have some PoetSpeak to savor. Don't kill them all
...Willow
...Willow
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