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Happiness
An unsuspecting flick of the hair
the blues inhaling my being
standing strong alongside oblivion
unconsciously unaware
lustful adoration for more than a mindset
lost with time at a standstill
nothing better one shall find
he looks out through the open window
shadows dancing together reach the floor
not hesitating for a moment
swooping her up
as happiness walks right in the door
the blues inhaling my being
standing strong alongside oblivion
unconsciously unaware
lustful adoration for more than a mindset
lost with time at a standstill
nothing better one shall find
he looks out through the open window
shadows dancing together reach the floor
not hesitating for a moment
swooping her up
as happiness walks right in the door
Published 13th Jun 2018
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13th Jun 2018 4:29pm
13th Jun 2018 4:37pm
13th Jun 2018 5:20pm
I like how you walk the line in this poem. Lots left to imagination, very evocative and not in your face.
13th Jun 2018 5:37pm
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13th Jun 2018 5:38pm
13th Jun 2018 7:15pm
Thank goodness - something cheerful - most other poems today seem at first glance doomy or gloomy - thank you for the smile
13th Jun 2018 7:27pm
My mind was set on writing an uplifting piece today. Glad you got a chance to share in the happiness 🙂
Anonymous
13th Jun 2018 9:18pm
You should see the smile that stole me away at the end of this poem, Tim. Lovely lovely lovely :-)
...Willow
...Willow
13th Jun 2018 10:04pm
Thanks Willow. Smiles are important to share...glad you could lasso one or two 🙂
14th Jun 2018 2:33am
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