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You Make My Heart Sigh
down a path of serenity our luv guides us
holding hands while heavens light
gracefully shines upon our souls
passion flows warmly thru our veins
shared under soft moonlight
with purple stars sparkling above
hush and be still now sweet sexy luv
lay your head upon my pillowy breasts
hear our hearts whispering sweetness
just a thought of you makes my heart sigh
this dead soul that you’ve luved back to life
luvs you with all that I humbly am
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
holding hands while heavens light
gracefully shines upon our souls
passion flows warmly thru our veins
shared under soft moonlight
with purple stars sparkling above
hush and be still now sweet sexy luv
lay your head upon my pillowy breasts
hear our hearts whispering sweetness
just a thought of you makes my heart sigh
this dead soul that you’ve luved back to life
luvs you with all that I humbly am
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 9th Apr 2018
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9th Apr 2018 9:49am
Dear Flowergirl,
It's a great poem supported by a lovely picture. However, such a great and sure love must lead to a permanent lock, marriage.
It's a great poem supported by a lovely picture. However, such a great and sure love must lead to a permanent lock, marriage.
Hey Joseph........honored you’ve smiled upon my ink......the pic gave me great peace when I saw it.......thank you for making me smile and leaving such graceful words........purple luv & hugs xo :)
9th Apr 2018 12:12pm
11th Apr 2018 2:47am
Hey Epic........thank you very much for leaving me beautiful words.......happy you’ve enjoyed it.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
9th Apr 2018 12:27pm
Overflowing with purple goodness down your lovely violet pathway... beautiful verse G!
JJ
JJ
11th Apr 2018 2:53am
Awe JJ.......always a blessing when you visit my ink and leave a heart print behind.......thank you my sacred friend.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
9th Apr 2018 12:58pm
11th Apr 2018 2:55am
Hey PS........I’m happy you’ve enjoyed this.........honored by your thoughts........purple luv & hugs xo :)
9th Apr 2018 4:11pm
Yes, very good choice on the picture and inspiration. Your heart again on your sleeve! What a gift of love ou have, and to share.
11th Apr 2018 3:01am
Hey TIG.......appreciate your support on this ink........luv letting my heart breathe luv and passion.......it’s beautiful to feel inside.......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
9th Apr 2018 8:17pm
This was just simply beautiful my honey..... Now you left me feeling lifted and warm inside..... I am loving the picture you posted with it....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
11th Apr 2018 3:05am
Awe Lady Savvy.......I’m so happy you’ve felt deep between the words........the pic peacefully inspired me.......happy you enjoyed.......thank you for making me smile.......purple luv &hugs xo :)
9th Apr 2018 10:54pm
So sweet...
a beautiful heart & mind portrayed..
with those lovely words!
I am sweetened....
Much love & respects,
H
a beautiful heart & mind portrayed..
with those lovely words!
I am sweetened....
Much love & respects,
H
11th Apr 2018 3:16am
Hey H........thank for stopping my way....... wry happy you’ve enjoyed my ink.......honored by your thoughts.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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11th Apr 2018 3:19am
Awe Sista Lily.......you always make me blush and smile.......thank you for leaving a heart print upon my ink.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
11th Apr 2018 4:49am
11th Apr 2018 5:23pm
Hey Robert........I’m always thrilled when my words connect with another soul........thank you for your thoughts........purple luv & hugs xo :)
I also just noticed by reading mine again for any mistakes , that you wrote ‘purple stars ‘ and I wrote ‘the half moon , purple with glee ‘ neat !
Hey Robert.......it’s not uncommon for anything I write to have a mistake here and there.......LOL! I notice the purple imagery in yours.......you wrote very beautifully. Most my inks have something purple......usually the pic......sort of a trademark of mine as “luv” is......it’s me........thank you for another visit to my page.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
12th Apr 2018 8:20pm
"Serenity" is the feeling I experience reading your lines Flower. There's passion here but comes in gentle form. And I love the humility expressed in your last line, but you have every reason to be proud of this. Fine work!
14th Apr 2018 3:27am
Hey Crow........thank you for making me smile.......I always feel proud reading your responses.......glad you’ve enjoyed this ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)
12th Apr 2018 8:53pm
YOU dear purplish make your trademark in purple ink some day i may also try looking upwards towards the sky why is it blue it must have purple hue flowery poetry from the only purply is due who would like to see the sky or ocean blue and see this time for the purple flower one again has sacrificed his pen and erased the erotica therein as purple is composing poetry how dare can again
14th Apr 2018 3:32am
Hey Bro.......thank you for wonderful words you leave me.......if you let your imagination lead your heart........you can see all things in a different way........purple luv & hugs xo :)
14th Apr 2018 11:57am
15th Apr 2018 2:36am
Hey Bro.......you write how you do cause it’s YOU! To write with your imagination.......you invision things not as they really are.......you see the sky blue......I imagine the sky purple cause it would be beautiful to me........stop out of realms of normal......try it......purple luv & hugs xo :)
15th Apr 2018 7:48am
shall try to bask in the setting sun
enjoy a slow walk
when I can't run
smile at others
when I can have no more fun
yes it's a pun
purple eyes would do
for a poet only like you
I am the distant dim star
still glittering from afar
you say I'm near
no not ever to fear
it's the Internet which has captured
all miles and kilometers
why it has now created wonders
shields no one's blunders
enjoy a slow walk
when I can't run
smile at others
when I can have no more fun
yes it's a pun
purple eyes would do
for a poet only like you
I am the distant dim star
still glittering from afar
you say I'm near
no not ever to fear
it's the Internet which has captured
all miles and kilometers
why it has now created wonders
shields no one's blunders
19th Apr 2018 3:15am
Excellent Bro!! I really like this.......am honored to have such beauty upon my page........thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
19th Apr 2018 7:35am
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17th Apr 2018 3:08pm
Hey Beautiful Lady.......so happy to see your smile upon my ink.......thank you for your luving words......honored by the RL add on......purple luv & hugs xo :)
19th Jul 2018 3:27am
20th Jul 2018 1:42am
Hey X......an honor to see you smiling upon my ink.....hoping the river forever flows......thank you my friend for visiting me......purple luv & hugs xo :)
