deepundergroundpoetry.com
Dark Artist
children of scorn
born out of hate for a reprobate deity
choosing a man over his mate
but I digress it matters not to me
not anymore
the hierarchy is changing
its rules are old fashioned
there is no relaxation without taxation
i'm broadcasting across the board
come visit with me
I'm awake and listening
there is a war against humanity
they have been treated cruelly
I know of our arrogance
please show them some kindness today
my love for them is genuine
we'll see who is truly blue blooded
please don't play the shell game today
if you do
you won't like me
i'll be out riding the waves
if you see me
let me know you recognize who I am
it's a been a long mission
I currently have blurred vision
seeing all dimensions
don't worry things are in hand
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 13
reading list entries 1
comments 21
reads 798
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. Dark Artist
Anonymous
20th Mar 2018 4:13pm
Do you know something Brenda - wish I'd found this site fucking years ago! I come from a town where the voices of females are not heard really. Flirted (prob literally & metaphorically lol) all over Europe in the hustling's of that bull-shit they call employment. Rob x
1
Re: Re. Dark Artist
20th Mar 2018 4:26pm
thank you Rob I come from a place of good ole boys you must be a strong yet gentle woman here..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re: Re. Dark Artist
22nd Mar 2018 00:33am
Re: Re. Dark Artist
22nd Mar 2018 00:34am
Re. Dark Artist
21st Mar 2018 00:22am
I scour the late night air-waves for you Crim
Your art resonates deeply with my conspiracies
Maybe I'm not so paranoid after all
Another great job, dear!
Sandman
Your art resonates deeply with my conspiracies
Maybe I'm not so paranoid after all
Another great job, dear!
Sandman
1
Re: Re. Dark Artist
22nd Mar 2018 00:35am
thank you dearest Sandman i'm unsure where this came from perhaps I am simply a channel to these being who among us already..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. Dark Artist
21st Mar 2018 1:40am
Righteous, thoroughly enjoyed this poetic premonition dearest Brenda. Much love <3
1
Re: Re. Dark Artist
22nd Mar 2018 00:35am
Re. Dark Artist
21st Mar 2018 2:57pm
I will recognize you even with my own blurred vision. Love your poem Brenda 🙂
1
Re: Re. Dark Artist
22nd Mar 2018 00:36am
giggles thank you dearest Tim though I don't even recognize me some days lol..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re: Re. Dark Artist
22nd Mar 2018 00:37am
Re. Dark Artist
21st Mar 2018 9:59pm
"Things are in hand" as long as you're the one writing about them Crim. My favorite stanza:
there is a war against humanity
they have been treated cruelly
I know of our arrogance
please show them some kindness today
my love for them is genuine
The war may contain cruelty, and arrogance, but your kindness will hopefully prevail. A dark artist with a very bright talent.
there is a war against humanity
they have been treated cruelly
I know of our arrogance
please show them some kindness today
my love for them is genuine
The war may contain cruelty, and arrogance, but your kindness will hopefully prevail. A dark artist with a very bright talent.
1
Re: Re. Dark Artist
thank you dearest Sir Crow yes I am just a channel I believe for these being that share my space but can sometimes convince me otherwise..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. Dark Artist
22nd Mar 2018 11:46am
really good writing my friend ! keep freeing yourself and others may join :) thank you for sharing ...
much love
much love
1
Re: Re. Dark Artist
22nd Mar 2018 11:47am
Re. Dark Artist
Anonymous
23rd Mar 2018 3:51pm
There is so much tucked away in each of these stanzas that requires me to go back and read and then read again. I actually read other comments before making my own because I was curious what other interpretations might be. Perception and perspective rule the day on a powerful piece like this. So many thoughts running through my mind now. You've fired my circuits this morning, beautiful Dark Angel. I love you
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
1
Re. Dark Artist
25th Mar 2018 9:13pm
Man I love to see you writing this kind of battle hymns with a positive edge :-))))))))))))))))))
Huge big Hugs sweet Brenda :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))
Huge big Hugs sweet Brenda :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))
1
Re. Dark Artist
26th Mar 2018 8:13am
A wonderfully compelling & stirring declaration, dear Brenda. And while reading your dark & dashing write, I’d like to wish you much inspiration this April for the NaPoGloPoWriMo. I look so forward to reading your entries, you’ll be awesome if I go by your latest publishings here in March!
With love & best wishes,
~Jade✍️
With love & best wishes,
~Jade✍️
1