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Demons
Tight corsets
Hugging thin waists
And short skirts
Barely covering dignity.
Cooing sweet nothings
And distorted truths
From twisted smiles
And sharp tongues.
Talons piercing hearts
And ripping morals
Drawing crimson diamonds
And offering eternal torment.
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demons
Anonymous
7th Oct 2011 4:20pm
i liked this poem so true about those damn demons
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8th Oct 2011 8:20pm
demons
8th Oct 2011 4:08pm
re: demons
8th Oct 2011 8:20pm
Demons
8th Oct 2011 8:27pm
re: Demons
9th Oct 2011 8:30pm
Brings to mind a Henley song
28th Oct 2011 10:45am
Thanks for sharing! "Miss Ghost" comes to mind. Henley didn't do a video for it and I haven't seen him talk about the inspiration but I think it was covering similar ground.
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re: Brings to mind a Henley song
3rd Nov 2011 5:06pm
Miss Ghost, eh? I'll have to have a little look at that. Thanks for reading, though :)
Mm
21st Jan 2012 8:52pm
It is indeed a great piece. So short, but tells so much. Very dark - I like it a lot.
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24th Jan 2012 9:59pm
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yeah!
31st Mar 2012 3:34pm
I like the sinister edge to this. It's almost erotic yet still disturbing.
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Anonymous
22nd May 2012 9:58am
Very cool piece.
Strider
Strider
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Re: Demons
21st Jun 2012 2:35am
Angels
Tighter corsets
Hugging thinner waists
And shorter skirts
Barely revealing dignity.
Heating sweet nothings
And displaying truths
From twisting smiles
And serpent tongues.
Talons plucking hearts
And declining morals
Drawing azure diamonds
And offering eternal confection.
……………………..+ by rt87
Tighter corsets
Hugging thinner waists
And shorter skirts
Barely revealing dignity.
Heating sweet nothings
And displaying truths
From twisting smiles
And serpent tongues.
Talons plucking hearts
And declining morals
Drawing azure diamonds
And offering eternal confection.
……………………..+ by rt87
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