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Baby, Why U Giving Me.............................
.......Head? Man I wanna' know. What are getting from this?
Why do you love it so?
On my back, pressed deep into my bed
You straddle my legs, now spread wide open
Balls tight and constricted
Going absolutely out of my head........
.......I'm 'bout to bust
My body is trembling heavily
My hips all by themselves are beginning to thrust
Your pretty azz mouth envelopes all that I am in this moment
Giving me the best head as only you can. Ooooooo baby, you are definitely on it.........pleasing your man well
but........
In my final moments of conscious thought
Before my black cannon explodes
and my mind fades to blackness
and my tightly folded toes finally again unfold in release....
There's just one thing I want to know.
What makes you want to "do" me just like this?
I mean, what is the joy you get from sharing with me
this most intimate kiss?
Sucking my dick, engorged
Stroking my hard, pulsating shaft
Copious wetness flows from between your lips
I'm about to "let go" and from you that evokes a sexy, sinister laugh
See, I wanna' know exactly what it is I can do
to make you feel this way every single time
I "do you"
Man, you got me feeling some kinda' way
and I want you to feel it too........
....feeling completely out of control
like I'm connected to a 240 volt socket
My complete love and trust I must put in you
To let you pull this flaming rocket out-the-pocket
.......and let you do me like you do me.
I'm harder than diamond; swollen twice my normal size
An nether-worldly throbbin'heat, my penis pumping deep down your throat
Damn, I know you feel it way down inside
How do you know
When I am almost there?
Long before I holla'
and tie my fingers all up
in your beautiful black hair.
Does it give you the greatest of pleasures
to hear this powerful man scream?
To swallow all my creamy nectar.
Does it make you feel like "the Queen"?
Or is it simply a lusty heaven sent love
Draining me until I'm completely spent?
Damn........I want to do that thing 2 you
I want you to feel all those decadent, delicious feelings
when I'm between your thighs "doing you".
A connection-some strange symbiotic union
when our naked bodies are one, not 2......
....a longing to stoke the same raging fires
When I'm gettin' deep into U.
Why do you love it so?
On my back, pressed deep into my bed
You straddle my legs, now spread wide open
Balls tight and constricted
Going absolutely out of my head........
.......I'm 'bout to bust
My body is trembling heavily
My hips all by themselves are beginning to thrust
Your pretty azz mouth envelopes all that I am in this moment
Giving me the best head as only you can. Ooooooo baby, you are definitely on it.........pleasing your man well
but........
In my final moments of conscious thought
Before my black cannon explodes
and my mind fades to blackness
and my tightly folded toes finally again unfold in release....
There's just one thing I want to know.
What makes you want to "do" me just like this?
I mean, what is the joy you get from sharing with me
this most intimate kiss?
Sucking my dick, engorged
Stroking my hard, pulsating shaft
Copious wetness flows from between your lips
I'm about to "let go" and from you that evokes a sexy, sinister laugh
See, I wanna' know exactly what it is I can do
to make you feel this way every single time
I "do you"
Man, you got me feeling some kinda' way
and I want you to feel it too........
....feeling completely out of control
like I'm connected to a 240 volt socket
My complete love and trust I must put in you
To let you pull this flaming rocket out-the-pocket
.......and let you do me like you do me.
I'm harder than diamond; swollen twice my normal size
An nether-worldly throbbin'heat, my penis pumping deep down your throat
Damn, I know you feel it way down inside
How do you know
When I am almost there?
Long before I holla'
and tie my fingers all up
in your beautiful black hair.
Does it give you the greatest of pleasures
to hear this powerful man scream?
To swallow all my creamy nectar.
Does it make you feel like "the Queen"?
Or is it simply a lusty heaven sent love
Draining me until I'm completely spent?
Damn........I want to do that thing 2 you
I want you to feel all those decadent, delicious feelings
when I'm between your thighs "doing you".
A connection-some strange symbiotic union
when our naked bodies are one, not 2......
....a longing to stoke the same raging fires
When I'm gettin' deep into U.
Published 5th Oct 2011
| Edited 6th Oct 2011
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.......as to what a woman (or a man if that's your orientation) feels when they are engaged in fellatio or cunnilingus. Those who really get into it-well it almost seems to be a fetish. Does she somehow feel what I feel? Does it really bring the woman pleasure as well? Seems that no matter how I pose this question, I never seem to get a reasonable response.....sigh
222 reads. Somebody want to chime in? : )
222 reads. Somebody want to chime in? : )
8th Oct 2011 10:02pm
Hey MusicallyMrM,
From personal experience, I love to please my lover. The ultimate goal is to make him cum. I can see, feel and hear his pleasure. I love the feel of him in my mouth. And I love the taste. This is how I feel when I am giving him oral pleasure.
From personal experience, I love to please my lover. The ultimate goal is to make him cum. I can see, feel and hear his pleasure. I love the feel of him in my mouth. And I love the taste. This is how I feel when I am giving him oral pleasure.
8th Oct 2011 10:15pm
8th Feb 2012 4:01am
I wrote "Nothin Like a Good Suck"... based on this inquiry. I hope it provides a decent enough insight for you. Though I could have taken it there in the poem but didnt... some of us have been known to orgasm during fellatio and not bc of our partners roaming hands either.
9th Oct 2011 3:05pm
Fusion of bodies in their wants, straining for a common need, to explode in sweet ecstasy, love's ultimate glory, the giving and taking...wow.
12th Oct 2011 2:51am
26th Mar 2013 5:22am
Well... truth be told its the ... and the.... but what really makes us want to do it is that thing called love. from the feel to that taste to the thoughts that dance in our heads as we gladly give those earth moving kisses that leaves a feeling like not other teasing the mind.. sooo. I like this I like the questions you ask. to me there is something so sexy ans seductive about the act that is really a turn on. so thanks for sharing this was a pleasure
