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Misty Visions (created with a beautiful soul ~ Lily)
When all that once felt natural fades into black
it's time to shed the cloak of the forgotten
changing back into the pristine
...only to find obsidian mist and a lost soul there
Shame raised her head to seek
Only to find the forbidden gone
absent from all that once was
there was no choice but to fall
asleep in the opaque web they weaved
Sun kisses the moon good night
She walks thru unknown emotions
visions of a dark misty forest
her heart turns stone cold
each memory offering no solace
Seeking once more who she once was
Fighting to be anything to anyone
graceful love so true now bitter
chasing colorless rainbows of fake promises
trying to forget he thought of her as nothing
Time to shed the cloak of dying.....
Waking from a dream to the empty
it's time to shed the cloak of the forgotten
changing back into the pristine
...only to find obsidian mist and a lost soul there
Shame raised her head to seek
Only to find the forbidden gone
absent from all that once was
there was no choice but to fall
asleep in the opaque web they weaved
Sun kisses the moon good night
She walks thru unknown emotions
visions of a dark misty forest
her heart turns stone cold
each memory offering no solace
Seeking once more who she once was
Fighting to be anything to anyone
graceful love so true now bitter
chasing colorless rainbows of fake promises
trying to forget he thought of her as nothing
Time to shed the cloak of dying.....
Waking from a dream to the empty
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Re. Misty Visions (created with a beautiful soul ~ Lily)
I love your collaborations because you're both of the same vibration. I truly
felt the melding of your souls. 🌌
The Tao have a saying that the vessel must first be emptied of content that it be refilled, as fresh water constantly flowing uninhibited. While we may not know the full extent of what new waters bring, we at least know they bring fresh and new meaning.
felt the melding of your souls. 🌌
The Tao have a saying that the vessel must first be emptied of content that it be refilled, as fresh water constantly flowing uninhibited. While we may not know the full extent of what new waters bring, we at least know they bring fresh and new meaning.
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Re: Re. Misty Visions (created with a beautiful soul ~ Lily)
11th Feb 2018 4:41am
Hey Ahavati.........yes we are ensync when we write together.......we feel each other’s soul as our own.......you’re insight to us is brilliant......thank you for thoughts and leaving us with wisdom filled words.......luv & hugs from us both xo :)
Re. Misty Visions (created with a beautiful soul ~ Lily)
10th Feb 2018 3:23pm
Re: Re. Misty Visions (created with a beautiful soul ~ Lily)
11th Feb 2018 4:42am
Hey Bro......thank you for gracing our ink with your smile.......truly appreciated.......luv & hugs from us both xo :)
Re. Misty Visions (created with a beautiful soul ~ Lily)
A bautiful peom with a sad tone. Love the vision of the forest and the obsidian mist...it's whispering the empty (or death?) ...made my eyes watery...hope you are well my beautiful flowergirl.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. Misty Visions (created with a beautiful soul ~ Lily)
Awe precious Rose.......we thank you for your graceful words upon our ink.......sharing tears with you......honored by the RL add on.......luv & hugs from us both xo :)
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Re: Re. Misty Visions (created with a beautiful soul ~ Lily)
20th Feb 2018 1:49am
Sweet Lily.......it’s you that bless my life and words.......always an honor to share a pen with you......luv ya always.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Misty Visions (created with a beautiful soul ~ Lily)
18th Feb 2018 10:36pm
A lovely and seamless collaboration. Seems to me you both have beautiful souls.
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Re: Re. Misty Visions (created with a beautiful soul ~ Lily)
20th Feb 2018 1:50am
Awe Crow........we are deeply honored by your thoughts and smile upon our ink.......thank you precious friend.......purple luv & hugs your way xo :)
Re. Misty Visions (created with a beautiful soul ~ Lily)
19th Feb 2018 9:35pm
You always reveal so much of what many have gone through. It always helps to know you are not alone. Somehow you two show triumph through it all and always an inspiration to strength. Love you guys!
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Re: Re. Misty Visions (created with a beautiful soul ~ Lily)
20th Feb 2018 1:56am
Hey Beautiful........we appreciate your gracious thoughts and words upon our ink.......sorry you relate to this.......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Misty Visions (created with a beautiful soul ~ Lily)
20th Feb 2018 2:26am
This really speaks. The journey. The ebb and flow. It is difficult to be a feeling and thinking entity. A rock or a tree just is. It doesn't contemplate what is, well as far as I am able to perceive. It would be better to just break and become something new without attachment to what was. This is a really organic collaboration. It was an experience.
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Re: Re. Misty Visions (created with a beautiful soul ~ Lily)
20th Feb 2018 2:34am
Hey Daniel.........thank you for sharing the experience with us.........your words are very thought provoking........smiling you’ve shared them......always appreciate you........purple luv & hugs xo :(
Re. Misty Visions (created with a beautiful soul ~ Lily)
20th Feb 2018 11:02am
There is a solemn streak running through this epic write that recalls U2’s “Running To Stand Still”.
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Re: Re. Misty Visions (created with a beautiful soul ~ Lily)
23rd Feb 2018 1:18am
Hey Jazz.......we thank you for the blessing of your words upon our ink.......that song is awesome........appreciate you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Misty Visions (created with a beautiful soul ~ Lily)
23rd Feb 2018 7:36am
beautiful seamless collab - got my mind sparking about my forest :-))))))
this really made me feel warm fuzzies and smile :-))))))
this really made me feel warm fuzzies and smile :-))))))
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Re: Re. Misty Visions (created with a beautiful soul ~ Lily)
28th Feb 2018 2:24am
Hey David........we are so grateful for your ~fuzzy~ thoughts.......so very happy you’ve enjoyed this so much.......thank you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)