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a serendipitous love
serendipity's blossom
fell from the tree of lies
where she was whisked away
on a delicate breeze
& then delivered into fate's hands
chance had been unkind to her
with petals wilted & bruised
she turned from the sun who nourished
closing in on herself
lest she be carelessly handled again
within the garden of hope
she was the most radiant
her glorious bloom
called to many suitors
with a song so sweet
as to charm the angels
shy fate stayed just outside the gate
listening to her music
in silence he mused
she would be worshipped
inside his kingdom
with valor he vowed
if she was but his
he would vanquish
all brambles in the land
keeping her well tended
in innocence
she gave herself to chance
& fate was deeply saddened
watching from afar
he witnessed her mistreatment
insane with grief
his beauty dying
he conjured the wind
then blew her
from the garden of deception
chance had brought her there
& while in his charge
she was becoming lifeless
fate knew he didn't have much time
before petals fell from her blossom
he then scooped her up
& fed her his divine water
now safely ensconced in his love
she again shone brightly
her beauty restored
he shut the door
on her painful memories
if you listen closely
on a quiet night
you can hear their music
in a sweet tenors voice
they are heard harmonizing
her place securely beside him
as one they adorn the tree of life
in the garden of ever after
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Re. a serendipitous love
21st Jan 2018 10:45pm
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21st Jan 2018 11:30pm
Re. a serendipitous love
21st Jan 2018 10:45pm
Wow! Im deeply impressed I can't find the words to express my thoughts right now.
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21st Jan 2018 11:30pm
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21st Jan 2018 11:03pm
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21st Jan 2018 11:31pm
Re. a serendipitous love
heart wrenching longing, followed up by an inspirational, hopeful closure....
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Re: Re. a serendipitous love
22nd Jan 2018 12:43pm
Re. a serendipitous love
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21st Jan 2018 11:54pm
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thank you graciously dearest Ghost my beautiful Taryn who I wrote this for chose the picture.. yes serendipity has been kind bringing us all together I agree :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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22nd Jan 2018 5:15pm
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22nd Jan 2018 5:37pm
Re. a serendipitous love
22nd Jan 2018 4:48am
Really beautiful, engaging, and flowery write <3 Iove the variety in your work. This is very, very good my friend :)
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Re: Re. a serendipitous love
22nd Jan 2018 12:46pm
thank you beautiful Atomik sigh the variety of my work is owing to my beautiful muse who inspires at her whimsical whim :)
love Crim
love Crim
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Re: Re. a serendipitous love
22nd Jan 2018 12:47pm
thank you beautiful Kat so happy you enjoyed the blooming beauty in this write..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. a serendipitous love
Anonymous
22nd Jan 2018 3:47pm
Ahh, to walk in such a garden would be divine. Such a lovely piece you've written here, my beautiful Dark Angel. May they sing in their garden of forever until the end of time. I do so love you
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. a serendipitous love
22nd Jan 2018 5:38pm
thank you beautiful Willow I wrote this for our beloved I've seen her in the garden of hope, then garden of deception to finally being transplanted to the garden of forever :)
I love you..
Brenda
I love you..
Brenda
Re. a serendipitous love
Anonymous
22nd Jan 2018 6:45pm
Their music sounds gorgeous :)
Beautiful as always Brenda
Beautiful as always Brenda
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24th Jan 2018 8:26pm
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22nd Jan 2018 9:21pm
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Re: Re. a serendipitous love
24th Jan 2018 8:28pm
thank you John I was deeply inspired by Taryn with this one.. i'm so happy it was brought to life for you..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. a serendipitous love
23rd Jan 2018 1:58am
The tree of life's roots need healthy soil to bring forth sweet fruit...to help us resurrect ourselves. Such a beautiful poem Brenda.
Peace...Harry
Peace...Harry
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Re: Re. a serendipitous love
24th Jan 2018 8:29pm
Re. a serendipitous love
23rd Jan 2018 3:14am
I was really touched by this line,
' if you listen closely
on a quiet night
you can hear their music '
It really accentuates the meaning of the epic story..
' if you listen closely
on a quiet night
you can hear their music '
It really accentuates the meaning of the epic story..
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Re: Re. a serendipitous love
24th Jan 2018 8:30pm
Re. a serendipitous love
Anonymous
23rd Jan 2018 6:56am
My love...I sit here shaking my head...and then bowing it...so thankful for you...your love...your ability to continually lift me...how I love you so...always & forever...madly, deeply, passionately...
xoxoxox I love you
Love Taryn
xoxoxox I love you
Love Taryn
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Re: Re. a serendipitous love
24th Jan 2018 8:32pm
thank you my love you inspire me so deeply i'm happy to have brought you joy with this poem..
I love you passionately..
love Brenda
I love you passionately..
love Brenda
Re. a serendipitous love
24th Jan 2018 7:41pm
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24th Jan 2018 8:32pm
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Re. a serendipitous love
30th Jan 2018 5:43am
"shy fate stayed just outside the gate
listening to her music
in silence he mused
she would be worshipped
inside his kingdom"
so beautiful your lines
so lovely your mind
this romance chance dance into the next world where forever love happens
love Jeff
listening to her music
in silence he mused
she would be worshipped
inside his kingdom"
so beautiful your lines
so lovely your mind
this romance chance dance into the next world where forever love happens
love Jeff
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Re: Re. a serendipitous love
30th Jan 2018 8:17pm
thank you graciously dearest Jeff our beauty Taryn inspired this :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. a serendipitous love
4th Feb 2018 10:27pm
Yes, yes indeed, a magical story so sweet you've shown me with these words..
I love the fantasy in your works...!
<3
H
I love the fantasy in your works...!
<3
H
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Re: Re. a serendipitous love
5th Feb 2018 6:31pm
thank you graciously beautiful Hanuel for showing love on this dream write..
love Crim
love Crim