Submissions by PeaceFlpw (Peace Flow)
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poet Introduction "broken" "poet"
OBSERVATIONAL POEM
Published
Yesterday 9:47pm
Yesterday 9:47pm
more than half my "weakness"(like 80- 90%)
carefree energy, quite naturally-like that of a "hippy"; a demeanor radiating peace; perhaps that description died between the 60's -70's; dare I say-a reasonable physique
sure-the "flower in hair look" looks cute to me; screw the concept of ethnicities; I'd happily take a "shack" with one like that over a mansion the size of how much my heart like a black hole would be empty;
breakfast, lunch, & dinner served with OJ or lemonade; early morning cuddles-afternoon sunbathes; movie nights with chips & popcorn or an evening stargaze; ...
sure-the "flower in hair look" looks cute to me; screw the concept of ethnicities; I'd happily take a "shack" with one like that over a mansion the size of how much my heart like a black hole would be empty;
breakfast, lunch, & dinner served with OJ or lemonade; early morning cuddles-afternoon sunbathes; movie nights with chips & popcorn or an evening stargaze; ...
#girlfriend
#relationships
#friendship
#dreams
#support
25 reads
NON-FICTION PROSE
Published
3rd Dec 2021 8:58pm
3rd Dec 2021 8:58pm
just human thoughts
I know ....
I was not good for her; she was not good for me....
but I miss her still....
I was not good for her; she was not good for me....
but I miss her still....
#lust
#friendship
#memories
#dating
#temptation
54 reads
OBSERVATIONAL POEM
Published
21st Nov 2021 2:11pm
21st Nov 2021 2:11pm
wander
reaching for each word, like a coin meant for a wishing well; dwelling in a forest full of trees; not quite feeling "free"; expression-lacking energy;
walking with bare feet; careful as can be; what's there to believe; wandering the landscape- weighing possibilities;
night fall hits the scene; laying near a
stream; sounds of it along with breeze aids a sort of peace; open ended dreams "comes and goes"-like "lust does after "3";
there's a fire deep; yet a struggle to release; camped out in the wilderness, tired as can be; holding on to every breath...
walking with bare feet; careful as can be; what's there to believe; wandering the landscape- weighing possibilities;
night fall hits the scene; laying near a
stream; sounds of it along with breeze aids a sort of peace; open ended dreams "comes and goes"-like "lust does after "3";
there's a fire deep; yet a struggle to release; camped out in the wilderness, tired as can be; holding on to every breath...
#WritersBlock
#MentalHealth
#WritingPoetry
#emptiness
#philosophical
61 reads
SPIRITUAL POEM
Published
14th Nov 2021 7:05am
14th Nov 2021 7:05am
winter
stone cold reminders; keep warm, with heat or by the fire; "multiple layers" are required; underneath it all; one may be more or less tired....
to appreciate each meal; having the capacity to feel the dark and light of what others may reveal;
winter: known to express the opposite of life; though in life can express/make one deeply beautiful on the inside like the caterpillars' butterfly;
winter: the cold really sucks; can break one further down, or build one up; either way, it's much too tough;
...
to appreciate each meal; having the capacity to feel the dark and light of what others may reveal;
winter: known to express the opposite of life; though in life can express/make one deeply beautiful on the inside like the caterpillars' butterfly;
winter: the cold really sucks; can break one further down, or build one up; either way, it's much too tough;
...
#spiritual
#MentalHealth
#humankind
#LifeCycle
#philosophical
66 reads
OBSERVATIONAL POEM
Published
7th Nov 2021 4:37pm
7th Nov 2021 4:37pm
honest & respectful "critique"
it's not fair to the reader(s), when you have them read a whole page worth of words; especially when it's less about "poetry" and more of a personal drama series;
what is considered too much?; even if someone admires, and appreciates the well written stuff.... why be extra?
but, who am I to "judge"; it's just a friendly nudge; but, you need someone to "bring you back".... instead of kissing up
what is considered too much?; even if someone admires, and appreciates the well written stuff.... why be extra?
but, who am I to "judge"; it's just a friendly nudge; but, you need someone to "bring you back".... instead of kissing up
#WritingPoetry
71 reads
SELF POEM
Published
4th Nov 2021 6:50pm
4th Nov 2021 6:50pm
headphones & liquor
nothing else existing; full blown within bliss; drowning sounds that utter out-that are negative; putting down that baggage, for headphones and some sips; blasting sounds of music-while soul is getting lit
Liberated truly; smiling from the high; light as a feather-not much minding if I died; letting go the noises-that try to crowd my mind; when them headphones & some liquor hit-truly feel cloud nine;
yesterdays are dead; today is a moment; tomorrow is a maybe, you "may" pass but do not own it;
flying way up high-,no more...
Liberated truly; smiling from the high; light as a feather-not much minding if I died; letting go the noises-that try to crowd my mind; when them headphones & some liquor hit-truly feel cloud nine;
yesterdays are dead; today is a moment; tomorrow is a maybe, you "may" pass but do not own it;
flying way up high-,no more...
#peace
#music
#alcohol
#MentalHealth
#escape
70 reads
NON-FICTION PROSE
Published
31st Oct 2021 2:47pm
31st Oct 2021 2:47pm
yeah, it hurts....
feelings; it's like a gift & a curse; brings out the best in one as well as the very worst; here created on this earth, with more than a single nerve; matters of the heart & mind come naturally-not rehearsed
a fair mind knows it's not enough to lust; a heart of light comes with the ability to love; to be alone and lonely some say aren't the same; but honestly I think that's talk due to reoccurring pains;
one reason or another-some find themselves alone; in my case-it's because I sit/sat out the game(game of life); everyone is more or...
a fair mind knows it's not enough to lust; a heart of light comes with the ability to love; to be alone and lonely some say aren't the same; but honestly I think that's talk due to reoccurring pains;
one reason or another-some find themselves alone; in my case-it's because I sit/sat out the game(game of life); everyone is more or...
#loneliness
#hurt
104 reads
NON-FICTION PROSE
Published
31st Oct 2021 1:40pm
31st Oct 2021 1:40pm
in a "perfect" world
in a perfect world; when one first saw her face; could've known at first gaze; all the possibilities locked away from display
those earlier innocent church days; the crush that got away; because green wasn't just what laid in the "collection plate";
missed the move; never got straight since/sense the last time I saw you; then again we crossed paths, but far too late;
something more than lust; that young innocent crush; your eyes stared into one's soul back then-but I too far off to catch up;
her(as well as...
those earlier innocent church days; the crush that got away; because green wasn't just what laid in the "collection plate";
missed the move; never got straight since/sense the last time I saw you; then again we crossed paths, but far too late;
something more than lust; that young innocent crush; your eyes stared into one's soul back then-but I too far off to catch up;
her(as well as...
#lust
#heartbroken
#crush
86 reads
OBSERVATIONAL POEM
Published
29th Oct 2021 3:00am
29th Oct 2021 3:00am
humanity
humanity; where a slate seems never clean; where a day doesn't end without narratives and schemes;
bells and whistles; like playing catch with dogs and frisbees; can save a lot on stress when the "calls" aren't "received"; it's nearly impossible to be low-key;
and perhaps it's better not to "know"things just as it is to believe the good or the bad with this tiring species; every word that is spoken, or any single deed, doesn't go unnoticed-just recycled in this "machine"
sincerely, a...
bells and whistles; like playing catch with dogs and frisbees; can save a lot on stress when the "calls" aren't "received"; it's nearly impossible to be low-key;
and perhaps it's better not to "know"things just as it is to believe the good or the bad with this tiring species; every word that is spoken, or any single deed, doesn't go unnoticed-just recycled in this "machine"
sincerely, a...
#humankind
52 reads
OBSERVATIONAL POEM
Published
21st Sep 2021 11:31pm
21st Sep 2021 11:31pm
the end
buckled in; waiting on the asteroid's in coming; freedom's on the other end; sipping on escape til then....
there's no point to struggling; fighting constant wars within
there's no point to struggling; fighting constant wars within
#alcohol
#MentalHealth
#apocalypse #escape
#apocalypse #escape
85 reads
SELF POEM
Published
2nd Sep 2021 6:27pm
2nd Sep 2021 6:27pm
"below zero"
isolation is a serious deal; though considering circumstances and lack of "deemed worthy/societal appeal"....
what else is there?
what else is there?
#depression
#loneliness
#MentalHealth
111 reads
OBSERVATIONAL POEM
Published
28th Aug 2021 4:38pm
28th Aug 2021 4:38pm
complicatedd
there's a deep appreciation and confidence in comprehending a written piece of music;
but everything isn't that way(for some)(personal opinion)....to simply nail down the timing, rhythm, and little to no mistakes; sharing the same "stage", space..same piece, on a different page....
a synchronicity perfected, as the nerves wouldn't interfere with the mechanical reflexes....a well "orchestrated symphony"
as I say to myself; it'll never be that good again.... like an injured athlete reflecting on "hey...
but everything isn't that way(for some)(personal opinion)....to simply nail down the timing, rhythm, and little to no mistakes; sharing the same "stage", space..same piece, on a different page....
a synchronicity perfected, as the nerves wouldn't interfere with the mechanical reflexes....a well "orchestrated symphony"
as I say to myself; it'll never be that good again.... like an injured athlete reflecting on "hey...
#loneliness
#relationships
#MentalHealth
#humankind
#philosophical
97 reads
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