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soul shine
the light dealt me a blow
you know not
where your home is
you flit in
& out of sunshine
emerging for a moment
then back to the shadows
secret your true nature away
deep behind a veil of guile
the vulnerable pieces of you
hid under the lies
you use for your survival
I see your true nature
& it shines mightily
in the universe
a star
with a quietly singing voice
blazes a path before you
your beauty is polished
until it is dazzles
the ash from travel
in a weary world
cleansed away
until your soul is crystal clear
a true vision to behold
with something truly
meaningful to hear
you are destined to share
of your life's travails
to lighten the burden
for others who think
they walk this journey
alone
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Re. soul shine
2nd Nov 2017 5:13pm
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2nd Nov 2017 6:39pm
Re. soul shine
2nd Nov 2017 5:59pm
This one provides a real lift to a weary traveler. Hopefully we can make our way together, not alone. Beautifully written fine Lady.
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2nd Nov 2017 6:40pm
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Anonymous
2nd Nov 2017 6:16pm
You see so clearly of lose and facades we hide under. This speaks of experience and hope. You're as always a trusted read.
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thank you beautiful Lady for the deeply lovely & insightful comment on this write.. I love your visits..
love Crim
love Crim
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Anonymous
2nd Nov 2017 6:37pm
My beautiful one, this is absolutely exquisite. Your eyes see so much more clearly than many others. This poem is like taking a much needed deep breath of fresh air. I do so love you
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Re: Re. soul shine
2nd Nov 2017 6:41pm
thank you graciously lovely one for such a beautiful & awesome comment there are smiles gracing my face you have gifted :)
love you lady..
Crim
love you lady..
Crim
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Anonymous
2nd Nov 2017 10:41pm
Thank you so much for this one, i needed such words beautiful.
X's n O's on you.
X's n O's on you.
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Re: Re. soul shine
2nd Nov 2017 10:49pm
thank you lovely Splits so happy to be journeying with you :)
love & hugs..
Crim
love & hugs..
Crim
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3rd Nov 2017 6:41am
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4th Nov 2017 11:24pm
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Anonymous
3rd Nov 2017 1:37pm
Yup !! Amazeaballs!
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4th Nov 2017 11:25pm
Re. soul shine
3rd Nov 2017 10:01pm
Such a precious write..!
"a star
with a quietly singing voice
blazes a path before you
your beauty is polished
until it is dazzles "
It's such a striking expression, polished and clean..!
Love...!
-H-
"a star
with a quietly singing voice
blazes a path before you
your beauty is polished
until it is dazzles "
It's such a striking expression, polished and clean..!
Love...!
-H-
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Re: Re. soul shine
4th Nov 2017 11:26pm
thank you graciously beautiful poetess for showing love on this write..
love Crim
love Crim
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Anonymous
4th Nov 2017 00:09am
Oh my love how this will reach and speak to the souls of many...me included...so comforting are the visions which your eyes see...they blanket us all...
I love you madly, deeply
yours always & forever
Love Taryn xoxoxox
I love you madly, deeply
yours always & forever
Love Taryn xoxoxox
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Re: Re. soul shine
4th Nov 2017 11:28pm
thank you my love i'm so happy this write moved & comforted you.. as you do me everyday..
I love passionately..
love Brenda
I love passionately..
love Brenda
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Anonymous
4th Nov 2017 00:09am
Brenda.. your brilliance is so divine.. you always lead with your heart.. love you, my sister..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. soul shine
4th Nov 2017 11:31pm
thank you graciuosly my brother Dave your visits always bring me smiles :)
love you..
Brenda
love you..
Brenda
Re. soul shine
4th Nov 2017 1:57am
What a beautiful thought and a beautiful poem - boy do I ever need to believe in that message :-)
amazing write :-) Hug Massive Hugs :-)
amazing write :-) Hug Massive Hugs :-)
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Re: Re. soul shine
4th Nov 2017 11:32pm
thank you dearest David for showing love on this write.. as long as we have breath you will never journey alone..
love & hugs..
Brenda
love & hugs..
Brenda
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Re: Re. soul shine
4th Nov 2017 11:34pm
thank you beautiful one I am blushing your comment deeply moved me.. I love your spirit,.. I feel while reading you dear one..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. soul shine
4th Nov 2017 11:07pm
"deep behind a veil of guile" "a star with a quietly singing voice blazes a path before you"...this warm heart expression of love...the world craves this writing...it needs your energy...wonderful soul ink ...poetic affection...much love-J
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4th Nov 2017 11:41pm
thank you most graciously dearest Jeff you know the line you highlighted about guile stings me as it did when I wrote it.. a quiet voice was chastizing me in the start of this poem so I decided to write it down.. it just wrote its self in a way.. the spirits were speaking I just need to be brave enough to share what they say.. I am so humbled & touched by your comment.. you are deeply appreciated..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. soul shine
6th Nov 2017 8:37am
one of a kind, talented one,
your words have been a most beautiful journey
and your soul, a light in the dark.
I thank you for sharing, lovely lady Crim...
your words have been a most beautiful journey
and your soul, a light in the dark.
I thank you for sharing, lovely lady Crim...
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13th Nov 2017 8:23am
thank you graciously beautfiul Kasai
I hope I have my moments of clarity
& my muse lights the way..
love Crim
I hope I have my moments of clarity
& my muse lights the way..
love Crim