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beautiful little one
alone in the dark
stands a little girl
age three
neglected & scarred
then finally abandoned
she quietly weeps
while no words
dare she utter
she stays silent & hid
deep inside me
i am her
she is me
the forgotten girl
i still carry
she is kept well guarded
i don't let anyone near
this broken child
i keep you away
with my darkness
this is where i take shelter
my pain too raw
it never sees sunshine
i've avoided it
many years now
by keeping this little one
hushed & out of sight
i seek to bring her
into the light
& put an end
to our suffering
her melody unique
one wrought of pain
i wish to give her
poetic voice
so she may also be free
that we may walk
unhindered
into brighter days
my inner child
chained to pain
no longer
is now heard
gently calling
from out of the shadows
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Re. beautiful little one
Anonymous
26th Oct 2017 2:59pm
That beautiful little girl will never be forgotten as long as there is breath in my body and light in my soul, beautiful one. Coax her out into your meadow until she dances in the sun. Our inner little girls can sit together amidst the daisies and know never ending love.
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Re: Re. beautiful little one
26th Oct 2017 3:36pm
thank you lovely one for being there & bring me into the meadow among the daisies today :) I love you.. Crim
Re. beautiful little one
26th Oct 2017 3:01pm
striking
the deepest
depths dear peer.
no doubt
moving
shaking to core
is this poem.
true.. we carry
the child
that people long thought
has gone
take good care.
now.
the deepest
depths dear peer.
no doubt
moving
shaking to core
is this poem.
true.. we carry
the child
that people long thought
has gone
take good care.
now.
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Re: Re. beautiful little one
26th Oct 2017 3:37pm
thank you dearest Cold_Fusion for showing me love & heart on this write.. love Crim
Re. beautiful little one
Re: Re. beautiful little one
26th Oct 2017 3:38pm
thank you beautiful Dragonfly for the love & hugs.. I guess I like the lower case to emphasize a softer tone being taken.. love Crim
Re. beautiful little one
26th Oct 2017 6:06pm
Re: Re. beautiful little one
26th Oct 2017 6:15pm
aw thank you Poet you touched my heart greatly with your comment.. I love you.. Brenda
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26th Oct 2017 6:56pm
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Re: Re. beautiful little one
thank you beautiful Daniella I know you will treat your inner little girl as she sorely needs & deserves.. I'm happy that my sharing has helped you come to your own self realizations.. I will treat mine right.. let her breathe the fresh open air & not be so guarded with her.. love Brenda
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26th Oct 2017 11:08pm
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Re. beautiful little one
26th Oct 2017 7:54pm
She is truly lovely and I'm glad she's seeing the light of day. She's the joyous part of the Crim I love. I've got a little boy inside me somewhere....
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Re: Re. beautiful little one
thank you dearest Sir Crow what a beautiful comment.. giggles at your inner boy who i'm sure is wonderul :) love you.. Crim
Re. beautiful little one
26th Oct 2017 8:30pm
Keep her inside, my dear, let her hop lead your walk, keep her yours alone, let her childish exuberance be you and as you both emerge out of the "shadows", be one voice, one revelation, one word...
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Re: Re. beautiful little one
26th Oct 2017 8:44pm
thank you dearest Takis I will do that.. your beautiful comment is deeply felt & appreciated.. love Crim
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27th Oct 2017 4:25am
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Re: Re. beautiful little one
27th Oct 2017 8:25pm
thank you beautiful one for such a loving & soulful response to this very personal write.. yes I agree our inner little ones need sunlight & freedom to express themselves to heal..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. beautiful little one
28th Oct 2017 2:02am
I am blown away by this write - it is such a perfect piece of evidence of what an accomplished poet you are. A soul sad but one that rises and will continue to rise - just beautiful :-)
Big Huge HUGSssssssss :-))))))
Big Huge HUGSssssssss :-))))))
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Re. beautiful little one
29th Oct 2017 8:30am
To cherish our own little ones, that we left in the dark so long ago... always asking just to see the light of day, true light of forgiveness and support. I have tried meditations in the past to coax and heal my own inner broken girl, too shy to step into the light. I hope we may nourish our inner little-girls, may we know true peace and walk with them hand in hand into the light of love and truth <3
Thank you for sharing this very personal poem my friend, dearest Brenda <3
Many hugs :)))
Thank you for sharing this very personal poem my friend, dearest Brenda <3
Many hugs :)))
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Re: Re. beautiful little one
2nd Nov 2017 00:00am
thank you beautiful Nightbird for coming in & sharing with me your pain.. your inner little girl who like mine has been in the dark far too long.. I believe on this poetic journey we will indeed walk hand in hand out of darkness into the light where we can shine..
love you beautiful..
Brenda
love you beautiful..
Brenda
Re. beautiful little one
1st Nov 2017 10:08pm
A little girl within...
a fragile child inside...
don't we all have our weakness that can be easily damaged or a deep scar that stays..?
I do love the resolve, it adds positivity..
a fragile child inside...
don't we all have our weakness that can be easily damaged or a deep scar that stays..?
I do love the resolve, it adds positivity..
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Re: Re. beautiful little one
2nd Nov 2017 00:03am
thank you lovely poetess yes we all are fragile in our own way.. I love that poetry empowers us..
love Crim
love Crim