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Redemption
struggle
is good for the soul
when the purpose
is defined
the pain
the strain
becomes worthwhile
a deeper appreciation
for the accomplishment
is ingrained
it's about the perfection
in intent
the purity in attempt
the genuineness
of heart
the rawness of passion
the joy of the journey
the process
the peeling away
the divine humbling
the belief
the sublime submission
sheer devotion to
the movement
as you are
honored to pay homage
to all that
most high intended
for you
Published 6th Jul 2017
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6th Jul 2017 11:55am
I started to copy / paste a few lines after
it's about the perfection
But, honestly, I couldn't stop. . .until
as you are
I thought it crazy to post half the poem.
This is so indicative of Eastern philosophy gradually spreading here in the West. Enjoyable read, Naajir. It's truly the journey and not the destination.
it's about the perfection
But, honestly, I couldn't stop. . .until
as you are
I thought it crazy to post half the poem.
This is so indicative of Eastern philosophy gradually spreading here in the West. Enjoyable read, Naajir. It's truly the journey and not the destination.
Anonymous
6th Jul 2017 2:13pm
Yes! That's it. Perfectly yes!
7th Jul 2017 4:50am
Anonymous
7th Jul 2017 6:50am
This right hurrrr...crux of this poem and it speaks loudly!
"a deeper appreciation
for the accomplishment
is ingrained
it's about the perfection
in intent
the purity in attempt
the genuineness
of heart
the rawness of passion"
Outstanding ink my friend!
xoxo Taryn
"a deeper appreciation
for the accomplishment
is ingrained
it's about the perfection
in intent
the purity in attempt
the genuineness
of heart
the rawness of passion"
Outstanding ink my friend!
xoxo Taryn
Anonymous
7th Jul 2017 10:26am
This is awesome !
10th Jul 2017 8:29pm
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- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
13th Aug 2017 00:15am
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