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Redemption

struggle
is good for the soul
when the purpose
is defined
the pain
the strain
becomes worthwhile
a deeper appreciation
for the accomplishment
is ingrained
it's about the perfection
in intent
the purity in attempt
the genuineness
of heart
the rawness of passion
the joy of the journey
the process
the peeling away
the divine humbling
the belief
the sublime submission
sheer devotion to
the movement
as you are
honored to pay homage
to all that
most high intended
for you

Written by Naajir

Published 6th Jul 2017

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Re. Redemption

Ahavati (Tams)

6th Jul 2017 11:55am

I started to copy / paste a few lines after

it's about the perfection

But, honestly, I couldn't stop. . .until

as you are

I thought it crazy to post half the poem.

This is so indicative of Eastern philosophy gradually spreading here in the West. Enjoyable read, Naajir. It's truly the journey and not the destination.

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Re. Redemption

Anonymous

6th Jul 2017 2:13pm

Yes! That's it. Perfectly yes!

Re. Redemption

RainC_Tara (rain1courtel)

7th Jul 2017 4:50am

I love this!

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Re. Redemption

Anonymous

7th Jul 2017 6:50am

This right hurrrr...crux of this poem and it speaks loudly!

"a deeper appreciation
for the accomplishment
is ingrained
it's about the perfection
in intent
the purity in attempt
the genuineness
of heart
the rawness of passion"

Outstanding ink my friend!

xoxo Taryn