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Needing to Give
He does not need to give - he simply takes;
And, given that she's taken, she'll accept
The ways he uses her and how he makes
Her long for something hard and so erect,
That she will not resist when she's pushed down,
But moves to make it easier for him;
She'll close her eyes and do just as he's shown
Her long ago - so eager lips will skim
The hardness that impresses her once more
(Being his slut, she longs for nothing else),
Although the fact he's tagged her as his whore
Gives her the strength she needs and, yes, a wealth
Of opportunities to show just how to live
When taken, since he does not need to give
And, given that she's taken, she'll accept
The ways he uses her and how he makes
Her long for something hard and so erect,
That she will not resist when she's pushed down,
But moves to make it easier for him;
She'll close her eyes and do just as he's shown
Her long ago - so eager lips will skim
The hardness that impresses her once more
(Being his slut, she longs for nothing else),
Although the fact he's tagged her as his whore
Gives her the strength she needs and, yes, a wealth
Of opportunities to show just how to live
When taken, since he does not need to give
Published 28th Jun 2017
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Anonymous
28th Jun 2017 6:36pm
Lovvveeeee this !!
29th Jun 2017 4:20am
28th Jun 2017 9:36pm
An excellent piece. Well written and evoking. Will look for more of your writings.
29th Jun 2017 4:20am
Anonymous
30th Jun 2017 3:15am
He doesn't need to give...when he is paired with the one who lives only to give, the match is unparalleled...I so loved the way you worded this..."need" can sound so troublesome, but so rewarding when desire is freely offered and taken by both...insit here and squeeeeeee!
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
