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Ancient Lover
the ancient winds blow over me
carries me to the desert lands
I see the great pyramids
Cairo in your eyes
your smoky glare
takes me to foreign places
with exotic smells
I taste the flavor of you
in the poetry you write
hieroglyphs tell the tale
of an Egyptian lover
who has lay claim to my soul
charmed the great cobra
that once bedazzled me
I your gypsy
you my King
you ignite my passion
blaze a trail
where no other has been
in my silent time
you embraced me
were my only lover
& you knew me
engraved my name
on each grain of sand
we ran wild & free
before time began
I gazed into your depths
knew who I was
in the safety of your arms
in the power of your words
that resounds like thunder
yet is as gentle as a baby's breath
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Re. Ancient Lover
28th May 2017 4:13am
That's some beautiful artwork, Crim.
And such an amazing piece.
The exotic scents of foreign lands;
a love story engraved in hieroglyphs.
In the arms of a lover we become who we were
meant to be...
And such an amazing piece.
The exotic scents of foreign lands;
a love story engraved in hieroglyphs.
In the arms of a lover we become who we were
meant to be...
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Re: Re. Ancient Lover
28th May 2017 4:47am
thank you lovely Kasai for such a beautiful comment so poetically insightful.. love Crim
Re. Ancient Lover
Anonymous
28th May 2017 10:31am
Simply, breathtaking.
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Re: Re. Ancient Lover
28th May 2017 2:59pm
Re. Ancient Lover
28th May 2017 12:40pm
'Cairo in your eyes' - that's so cool, Crim;
the land of the kings of the sun...
the land of the kings of the sun...
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28th May 2017 3:00pm
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30th May 2017 3:50pm
Re. Ancient Lover
Anonymous
28th May 2017 6:34pm
My Beautiful Brenda...souls colliding as it was to be, already written long before we came to be...these lines I love...
"I gazed into your depths
knew who I was
in the safety of your arms
in the power of your words"
I love you deeply my love!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
"I gazed into your depths
knew who I was
in the safety of your arms
in the power of your words"
I love you deeply my love!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. Ancient Lover
30th May 2017 3:51pm
thank you my love yes this lover knew me first.. I love you passionately.. xo Brenda
Re. Ancient Lover
28th May 2017 7:04pm
This is pure and exotic magic Crim.
I your gypsy
you my King
you ignite my passion
blaze a trail
where no other has been
Egyptian love was reputed to be immortal. Only Tutankhamen knows, I suppose.
I your gypsy
you my King
you ignite my passion
blaze a trail
where no other has been
Egyptian love was reputed to be immortal. Only Tutankhamen knows, I suppose.
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Re: Re. Ancient Lover
30th May 2017 3:51pm
Re. Ancient Lover
28th May 2017 7:42pm
My favourite lines:
"I taste the flavor of you
in the poetry you write"
The essence of writing poetry
boiled down to a few words.
Thanks for sharing.
"I taste the flavor of you
in the poetry you write"
The essence of writing poetry
boiled down to a few words.
Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Re. Ancient Lover
30th May 2017 3:52pm
Re. Ancient Lover
28th May 2017 8:06pm
uh, okay......but maybe
'dig a little deeper' wit less self-consciousness,
(& more self-awareness - minus the typical
amounts of 'I-me-my-mine' references),
& see what
happens - even if as many of your 'fans' do not 'relate' as readily......
'dig a little deeper' wit less self-consciousness,
(& more self-awareness - minus the typical
amounts of 'I-me-my-mine' references),
& see what
happens - even if as many of your 'fans' do not 'relate' as readily......
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Re: Re. Ancient Lover
30th May 2017 3:53pm
Re. Ancient Lover
28th May 2017 8:22pm
Re: Re. Ancient Lover
30th May 2017 3:54pm
thank you my Darkest Lord you made me so happy showing love for this romantic side of me.. love Crim
Re. Ancient Lover
Anonymous
29th May 2017 00:44am
The places you take us with these soul deep landscapes and heartscapes are so beautiful, lovely Angel. You created a living manuscript here with full visuals. Much love...
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Re: Re. Ancient Lover
30th May 2017 3:55pm
thank you lovely one for making the journey with me.. I love your company :) love Crim
Re. Ancient Lover
29th May 2017 3:20pm
simply fascinating, almost hypnotic - a very clever write :-)
excellent :-)
excellent :-)
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30th May 2017 3:55pm
Re. Ancient Lover
29th May 2017 11:59pm
Brenda.. this is simply a beautiful ink.. i truly wish i had a spot in my reading list.. perfection lovely one.. love you....
Dave
Dave
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30th May 2017 3:56pm