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You My Fate
Infect My Soul
Leave Me To Bleed
You Feel Like A Terminal Disease
Locked In A Room, With Empty Space
To Call It A Sin, Would Be A Disgrace
You Have My Thriving, Just Like A Fiend
My Soul Again, will Never Feel Clean
You Leave Me Dark, With Anger And Hate
But Somehow I Feel You Are My Fate.
Leave Me To Bleed
You Feel Like A Terminal Disease
Locked In A Room, With Empty Space
To Call It A Sin, Would Be A Disgrace
You Have My Thriving, Just Like A Fiend
My Soul Again, will Never Feel Clean
You Leave Me Dark, With Anger And Hate
But Somehow I Feel You Are My Fate.
Published 16th Jan 2017
| Edited 10th Apr 2017
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Anonymous
22nd Jan 2017 11:17am
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22nd Jan 2017 11:19am
Interesting n a Lil on the harsh side.
I feel alot of darkness... likely from alot of hurt... as for ur delivery, NOT Tryin to be critical, but couldn't help noticed at times the rhyme felt forced. Ex: You Have My Thriving, Just Like A Thein
My Soul Again, will Never Feel Clean ...otherwise it's pretty good :)
I feel alot of darkness... likely from alot of hurt... as for ur delivery, NOT Tryin to be critical, but couldn't help noticed at times the rhyme felt forced. Ex: You Have My Thriving, Just Like A Thein
My Soul Again, will Never Feel Clean ...otherwise it's pretty good :)
10th Jan 2018 12:40pm
ah.. the wicked seas of emotion ,It's currents often feel dark and angry.
I do love a dark rhyme ,They speak to me like no other.
Thank you for sharing
I do love a dark rhyme ,They speak to me like no other.
Thank you for sharing
