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uprising in England
talk of bullets
tougher
this and that
sentence
punishment for crimes
commited
by a 'sick' element
?
where are the jobs
providing hope
enabling future dreams
to be drempt
freely in hope
with actual possibilities
for young families
to be nourished
given the chance
to grow as part of society
within
rather than without
tougher
this and that
sentence
punishment for crimes
commited
by a 'sick' element
?
where are the jobs
providing hope
enabling future dreams
to be drempt
freely in hope
with actual possibilities
for young families
to be nourished
given the chance
to grow as part of society
within
rather than without
Published 10th Aug 2011
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10th Aug 2011 11:40pm
11th Aug 2011 10:06am
nice poem mr brodi.
well put too.an astute social commentary that delves beyond the obvious.
well worth the read.
well put too.an astute social commentary that delves beyond the obvious.
well worth the read.
11th Aug 2011 10:07am
21st May 2012 2:49pm
We seem to have quite a bit in comment.Decent tae see this kinda e stuff get put out there.
