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Comet-trysting

There are moments of passing
each other like pieces of
stars from two moons colliding.

So far apart, between trysts
as we circle around suns,
fired up, pulled apart by

gravity, then surfing rings
of braided ice, becoming
trails of swelling comet tails.

Bringing our passion's climax
to the brink before we leave
once again when fires fade.



Artwork is done on MSPaint as "mousework", the image & poem are original by Jade Pandora, Copyright ©2016. All Rights Reserved.
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