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Dia de los Muertos
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For those that I loved, and shall evermore,
I seek as I walk down the rows of graves
And pass people cleaning, decorating
Where all the dead will be rising tonight.
Children in painted skull face clap and sing:
"Despertar, queridos seres queridos
Awaken, dear ones,"
"Ven y únete a nosotros, a tu familia
Come and join us, your family,"
"Que viven en sus corazones.
Living in their hearts."
Though the celebration is bittersweet,
On Dia de los Muertos we party
To welcome the dead with laughter & joy,
Not to offend with grieving & sadness.
We eat tiny sweets of bright sugar skulls
And leave candy, food & drink at the sites,
As people hire mariachi bands
To entertain our cemetery guests.
Adult graves are marked with orange marigolds,
While white orchids are left where children lay.
So all through the night bathed in candle lights,
Fields of white orchids & orange marigolds.
This won first place in the DUP competition "Day of the Dead".
For those that I loved, and shall evermore,
I seek as I walk down the rows of graves
And pass people cleaning, decorating
Where all the dead will be rising tonight.
Children in painted skull face clap and sing:
"Despertar, queridos seres queridos
Awaken, dear ones,"
"Ven y únete a nosotros, a tu familia
Come and join us, your family,"
"Que viven en sus corazones.
Living in their hearts."
Though the celebration is bittersweet,
On Dia de los Muertos we party
To welcome the dead with laughter & joy,
Not to offend with grieving & sadness.
We eat tiny sweets of bright sugar skulls
And leave candy, food & drink at the sites,
As people hire mariachi bands
To entertain our cemetery guests.
Adult graves are marked with orange marigolds,
While white orchids are left where children lay.
So all through the night bathed in candle lights,
Fields of white orchids & orange marigolds.
This won first place in the DUP competition "Day of the Dead".
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Re. Dia de los Muertos
9th Nov 2016 9:57am
Ahh yes, the day of the dead. I've often wanted to travel to Mexico during the celebration of the day, the concept seems interesting, a day dedicated to celebrating the lives of loved ones.
This truly deserved first prize, congratulations on the victory!:)
~anonshadow😏
This truly deserved first prize, congratulations on the victory!:)
~anonshadow😏
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Re: Re. Dia de los Muertos
9th Nov 2016 10:04am
Why thank you, Anon, and yes I think you'd be fascinated to observe this tradition at one of the cemeteries on November 1st (All Saints Day) & November 2nd (All Souls Day) when it's being observed. As for the win, it's about a bittersweet subject that had me grateful to place, but nothing actually victorious. I'm sure you understand because of my explanation. Still, I appreciate your support, dear.
Re. Dia de los Muertos
9th Nov 2016 10:53am
That's similar to our celebrations here. Excellent write and a well deserved win, dear Jade.
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Re: Re. Dia de los Muertos
9th Nov 2016 11:17am
Thank you so much, Grace, that means a lot. And yes, I saw your poem about the similar tradition where you live, which I found to be fascinating! xo
Re. Dia de los Muertos
9th Nov 2016 11:32am
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9th Nov 2016 11:55pm
Re. Dia de los Muertos
9th Nov 2016 1:57pm
Beautiful words. So much love and respect woven into them with your remembrance. Congratulations on the win! It was much deserved!
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. Dia de los Muertos
10th Nov 2016 00:00am
Thank you, dear Willow, for your kind share, so very kind & gracious from a heart of these qualities. -Jade x
Re. Dia de los Muertos
9th Nov 2016 10:12pm
I adored this poem when I read it in the competition...an to the reading list it goes...
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Re: Re. Dia de los Muertos
10th Nov 2016 00:05am
Thank you so much Geoffrey, I remember how much you embraced this piece. I'm grateful & honored for your recommend.
-pebble xo
-pebble xo
Re. Dia de los Muertos
10th Nov 2016 6:35pm
Jade, muy bien escrito! I am touched by the reverence, love and joy that permeates this piece. I have fond memories of being invited to a village cemetery, by friends, to experience Dia de los Muertos while I lived in Spain. It really does bring to life the dead. Bravisima sabia poeta!
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Aahh thank you so much, Bob, for the recommend, and how wonderful is your reception & express, and oooo, you've lived in Spain! I'd love to visit Barcelona, and the area connected to France east of Barcelona. And to eat fresh catch from the sea each day, to sip local wines with local cheeses and fruit... yessss, fresh fruit!
Oh my, now you've made me hungry!
Oh my, now you've made me hungry!
Re. Dia de los Muertos
10th Nov 2016 6:35pm
More of a celebration than a lamentation, seems to me. It might be better to raise a toast than shed a tear for some proper closure. Your "Dia" catches the spirit beautifully, Jade. I've got my skull mask on.
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Re: Re. Dia de los Muertos
11th Nov 2016 8:30am
Ahh yes, dear crowfly, a celebration indeed, and you're wearing a perfect accessory to join in!
Re. Dia de los Muertos
11th Nov 2016 7:14am
This is beautiful. I absolutely love it. My family and I do the day of the dead alter in our household although we are not of Mexican, South American decent.
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Re: Re. Dia de los Muertos
11th Nov 2016 8:41am
You're most generous, lovely es, for your recommend and wonderful express! And say, there are countries 'round the globe that observe their versions of such a tradition. You are familiar with Grace, one of our DU moderators (guardians)? She recently published a poem about her cultural tradition of this practice where she lives, yes! So you and your family are definitely covered.👍
Re. Dia de los Muertos
11th Nov 2016 9:18am
A intriguing read and such a beautiful celebration. Orange marigolds and white orchids illuminated in soft candlelight, such a feast for the senses.
I can almost smell the flowers...
I can almost smell the flowers...
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Re: Re. Dia de los Muertos
11th Nov 2016 1:11pm
Why thank you so very much for stopping by for a read & a share, dear Kasai. And yes, this is a tradition that fills every corner of one's sensory experience.
Re. Dia de los Muertos
11th Nov 2016 9:28pm
really love it matter-of--factness Jade as it sits in this dancing mysticism and magic
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Re: Re. Dia de los Muertos
11th Nov 2016 10:10pm
My gratitude to your visit & read, dear Whale sir, it mans much coming from you.