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Chains Of Desire
take me to the dark places
where lips tremble
speaking in tongues
my deity of sin
*
chained to the wall
manacled in lust
whimpering out need
awaiting the pain
*
you enter the room
with a hard glint in your eye
a tsunami in my panties
as a small gasp escapes my mouth
*
you are the Master over my nightmares
relieving my guilt
bringing to light every transgression
then with a cat o' nine tails kissing my flesh
put them to rest
*
with force you come upon me
taming all my demons
commanding them to serve you
knowing you they get in line
*
I take you deep in my throat
phening for your seed
plunging deep in and out
as I pull against my binds
*
starving for your touch
you make me wait
pet me then pull away
pulling my hair feeling the agony of you
*
then alleviating me
baptized in your cum
I am rejuvenated
with your steel in my tightness
I am reborn
Published 29th Jun 2016
| Edited 30th Jun 2016
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Anonymous
29th Jun 2016 9:41pm
whoooah, Crim.... after that... my own tsunami beckons.
29th Jun 2016 9:52pm
29th Jun 2016 9:59pm
30th Jun 2016 1:27am
29th Jun 2016 10:37pm
Excellent wordplay with this fine offering.
"a tsunami in my panties
as a small gasp escapes my mouth"
That quote just about says it all concerning
this ultra sexual motivated poem.
Oh yeah . . . I loved it!
"a tsunami in my panties
as a small gasp escapes my mouth"
That quote just about says it all concerning
this ultra sexual motivated poem.
Oh yeah . . . I loved it!
30th Jun 2016 1:27am
Anonymous
29th Jun 2016 11:04pm
Precious Crim......what great lines you have in this sexy ink......my mind is racing with thoughts......the rest of me is......um.....twitching nicely......luv this.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
30th Jun 2016 1:28am
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Anonymous
30th Jun 2016 2:39am
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Anonymous
30th Jun 2016 6:50pm
ofuckingholyofall..
I am pining something not
so nice.
Lumps in throat and hips
do writhe.
Mygods
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I am pining something not
so nice.
Lumps in throat and hips
do writhe.
Mygods
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1st Jul 2016 00:35am
30th Jun 2016 10:07pm
Sounds like you're a more than willing captive, Crim. The baptism and final rebirth are thrilling, and I suspect your Master was delighted to see you thrive. Then you blow him away.
'I take you deep in my throat
phening for your seed
plunging deep in and out
as I pull against my binds"
More power to you Crim, a born again hell raiser. Fine work!
'I take you deep in my throat
phening for your seed
plunging deep in and out
as I pull against my binds"
More power to you Crim, a born again hell raiser. Fine work!
1st Jul 2016 00:36am
1st Jul 2016 11:05am
1st Jul 2016 3:06pm
I read and re-read. This is beautiful, a succulent desperation, I was lost in your world, making my way toward you. Every sound your chains made against the wall, every whimper of the sound of the agony of your wanting, every irresistible smell, I was fully drawn in to you. You called , and I came. It's been a minute since I've read into a journey like this. Not one I will soon forget... Peace Love and pure carnal lust.
1st Jul 2016 3:09pm
thank you most graciously you have quite the way with words.. I'm so pleased you took this journey with me and found it to your liking ;) I look forward to getting to know you better through your ink..
love Crimsin
love Crimsin
Anonymous
2nd Jul 2016 11:41pm
Brenda, sweet Brenda.. always love your erotic chaos.. the idea of a tsunami in any ladies panties.. is awe inspiring.. into the list it goes.. love ya..
Dave
Dave
6th Jul 2016 5:58pm
3rd Jul 2016 00:25am
Your beautiful mind is just so damn sexy! So many sensual, wicked and lustful lines in this piece. Much enjoyed, Crim! xo
6th Jul 2016 5:59pm
4th Jul 2016 5:59am
I come back after a few days and
you're burning up the pages with
your pen as only you can do Crim.
Very well written, and the word
play was exceptional.
Dantalyon
you're burning up the pages with
your pen as only you can do Crim.
Very well written, and the word
play was exceptional.
Dantalyon
6th Jul 2016 5:59pm
Anonymous
6th Jul 2016 10:48pm
My Beautiful Brenda....oh my oh my oh my....you had to know these lines would get me squirming and twisting about....
"I take you deep in my throat
phening for your seed
plunging deep in and out
as I pull against my binds
*
starving for your touch
you make me wait
pet me then pull away
pulling my hair feeling the agony of you"
Damn lady! I just loved this!
I love you so much!
xoxoxo Love Taryn
"I take you deep in my throat
phening for your seed
plunging deep in and out
as I pull against my binds
*
starving for your touch
you make me wait
pet me then pull away
pulling my hair feeling the agony of you"
Damn lady! I just loved this!
I love you so much!
xoxoxo Love Taryn
7th Jul 2016 4:54pm
beautiful one you've touched me so much with the love you've shown me and this write..
I love you so much..
thank you..
xoxo Brenda
I love you so much..
thank you..
xoxo Brenda
29th Jul 2016 2:56pm
30th Jul 2016 12:26pm
10th Dec 2017 6:34pm
10th Dec 2017 6:37pm
giggles thank you beautiful Jade this is one of my more dark fantasies ;)
love Crim
love Crim
6th May 2018 6:55pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
10th Dec 2018 4:53pm
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10th Dec 2018 4:57pm
thank you graciously dearest Danny this is one I'd forgotten about I'm happy you found it pleasing... that puts a smile on my face...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Anonymous
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10th Dec 2018 5:06pm
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