Cruelty

What an amazingly circular read, Crim.
I loved the honesty of your emotions
and wisdom to recognize what it is
you need to do, but aren't quite ready
to do it yet.

The lessons in life are difficult to learn -
and there is nothing wrong with taking
your time to experience the full scale
of them. Though letting go is beautiful
whenever you're ready to.

xo

thank you sage one for your deep insight on this write..

love Crim

Godda... hmm.
..hold on, ill be back lovely vine
just speechless right now.

You placed a mountainous boulder
upon my heart.

thank you Malady for feeling this write deeply..

love Crim

Ahhh . . ., A man completely under your skin and in
your devilish places.I feel the exact same day way
about a woman. It is not necessarily a good way to
have to live, but wouldn't want to live any other way!

thank you Jerry yes this devil is under my skin..

love Brenda

Ahhh . . . I was hoping that some good had.come your way. My bad.

aw he's a good one Jerry the devil is in the way he affects me ;)

love Brenda

thank you graciously Adam..

love Crim

thank you lovely Amelia your right on about the way I feel..

love Crim

This write is steeped in pain. Feeling your pain, dear Lady Crim.

thank you Darkest Lord Hades for showing me love on this pain filled ink..

forever in darkness Crim

visions in the smoke are so desperately attractive
but we can't grab them & hold them.
strictly engaging poetry, Crim...

thank you John funny thing is I'm not sure who the phantom is in this case him or me..

love Crim

To accept your weaknesses and the pleasures you derive from being so close to your kryptonite sounds so liberating.
Never been able to put my own love of pain into such truthful, powerful words
Excellent dear Crimsin

thank you Sir it is a bit vulnerable a feeling while being liberating at the same time..

love Crimsin

My Beautiful Brenda....I am literally sitting here doing the same as our lovely Malady up there....you have left me speechless with this one, as you have done before but this is....this is in a way different...I am in awe of you lovely one...you just blow me away...

I love you so frickin much!

xoxo Love Taryn

thank you beautiful one for such a great response to this write..

I love you so much..

love Brenda

Read it twice, going back for the 3rd time

Burn that  'mother down

Like

thank you Poet smiling wide :)

love Brenda

Brenda.. speechless, in awe of your brilliance.. into the list it goes.. love you..



Dave

thank you graciously Dave..

love Brenda

I honestly think this is the best I have read from you ...great ink

thank you Satan for such a fantastic comment..

love Brenda

Nothing like the escapism of fantasy and what makes the fantasy awesome also makes it hurt. You can have the poetry and the dreams but they don't want you because they see exactly what you are doing. I know this too well and the fact that we bring it all on ourselves makes it hurt no less. I have to see it as another form of self harm for me, like a safe and dangerous thrilling dissapointing self harm. It hurts so much because the pain channelled is real. This write says all I didn't know how to say yet. So I could just be putting all my crap in it. Awesome ink dear Crim xx much love and forgive me if I'm all wrong on how you meant it <3

thank you lovely Miki you're dead on with your thoughts..

you even gave me insight to what I'm doing thank you beautiful lady..

love Brenda

ouch ouch ouch
this feels & tastes
like cigar ashes
on my tongue

thank you beautiful Katja I cherish your visits even when they are painful ones..

love Brenda

5 yrs. of pining for someone who
demostrates they aren't in the same
frame of mind n heart hurts like a motherfucker...sadly I truly know this pain. Soul baringly sad stuff Crim.

thank you Poe only sorry you too know this pain..

love Crim

yet another amazing write, love and desire are so strange but very rarely constantly felt or given - you almost make it sound 'pick and mix' and unfortunately I agree with that conviction. I wonder if it was always constant, might it become boring?

anyway, excellent write got my grey matter sparking up :-)

thank you David I think you're right because if it was returned I would run as fast as my legs could take me..

love Brenda

My favorite lines:

"demon, angel  
or something all together different  
so unique to anyone  
I've ever crossed paths with"

I still can't decide if you're angelic or demonic, but I respect you either way.  You're unquestionably unique.  Fine work Crim!  


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thank you Sir Crow for such a beautiful comment..

love Crim

It was nice to read something not so Fire & Brimstone, but still dark from you. I am not much into critques.  I do however like to see different styles from authors/ poets.

thank you Dave I do try to mix it up..

love Crim

the cruelty of love
of ours or theirs?
from the depths or above
or delusional snares?

hum humanity
this gift we're burdened
route of insanity
the only thing we're certain

brilliant spill of mind dear Crim <3 <3 dkruie

thank you graciously Dkruie you always make me ponder my writes in a good way with your poem comments..

love Crim

Precious Crim......brilliant lines that only you can write with such power......this made me emptional.....it sucks to put so much into someone just so they can treat you like nothing.....know this well.....you are such a beautiful heart.....can't imagine another treating you like this.....must not realize the precious Lady who desires him......thought provoking write....luv it.....purple luv & hugs xo :)

thank you lovely Flower he's a good guy just a fantasy of mine..

love Crim

Out of this world Crim
Very much liked this 😁

thank you graciously DC :)

love Crim

So in touch with what's inside of u are u that when you write its catgut strings pulling on mine

aw thank you Whale glad this made you feel something..

love Crim

Still and still. Please let us
breathe and I had to come
back to rest this keepsake
upon my palace walls.



-Howlings

thank you graciously lovely Howlings I'm deeply honored..

love Crim

No insight. Just speechless. Wonderful.

thank you graciously Jesse..

love Crim