MOIST~ ~

First comment of many I'm sure
It's enough to make a reader Moist too!
Creativity is the hole
The spade your pen
You been digging deep Girl  hehe

lol... love your comment Rose! Thanks luv...  :)

WoW! Sizzling HOT! Boiled in moistness!!!
The poem is blistering all by itself, but that reading was so smoothly sexy I could feel myself sliding through a stream of that delectable moistness... the imagery has burned a work of art in my mind!
JJ

...feeling the moisture was definitely the intent JJ!  ;) Very sexy reply, thanks hun and appreciate you listing her...

.....awwww damn!!!  I wondered where all this "Rain" came from all of the sudden here,

and then I listened.  Very good production and musical choice.  Sexy as anything Jessica Holter dared to dream.  Tara, U just "nasty" young lady and I love it.  One of your most sultry and brilliant to date IMHO 😈

You'll have to excuse me now; I would say more but I must retreat to my own boudoir and make myself "moist" 😉

...happy you gave a nod to the video production Archie, the praise alone makes me smile. Wonderful comment! Thanks for keeping her...  :)

Rain.. simply luscious.. loved it, and the music you choose fit the mood.. nicely done.. i gotta grab a smoke now..




Dave

lol.... puff, puff pass. Thank you Dave for the enjoyable thought. Appreciate you greatly! :)

If there were Oscars for reading your own poetry Tara you would certainly win one for this. Wow girl that was a tour de force. Watched three times and then just plain read it. Yup that's one of your all time greats and an often-to-be-viewed  Fav for me.
Brilliant.

Tony, your commentary has made my day. I can't thank you enough for your lyrical support and poetic love. Thank you for lifting me up....... and I'm so pleased you've decided to add her to your cyber library.

Truly, erotically charged, beautiful, poetic perfection!!!

Happy you liked, Poe! Thank you! :)

an excellent piece, Rain.
really worked those words into perfection
kept it classy and retained intellectualism
love, added.

...words like these coming from a gifted writer such as yourself Miki, warms my heart. Honored you added her to your bookshelf. :) Thank you!

Class without crass, Miss Rain.
You've expressed a woman's desire beautifully.

Coming from a classy woman like yourself, I smile with sincere thanks.  :)

This is a supreme turn on. Rain. and if you're moist I'm pretty hard  And I love your voice!  It's sulty and seductive, just breathy enough to make me wish your lips were near my ear.  Fine work lady!

I chuckled at your comment, crow!  :) Thank you for the laugh and amazing compliment. Blushing...
Adore that you decided to take her home...

I absolutely love your comment Melia! Your description of this ink really makes me feel good. :)
Thank you so much!

I agree with all the above ^^ not sure what more I could add, an exquisitely beautiful sensual poem Rain .. ox

Thank you for the lovely comment, Je! Always pleased when you stop by! :)

....& baby...let's get down tonight.....make the sounds of love just right....where do i get the album......you melted me into some kinda pile of I don't know what.....superb!!!! :D

The beginning of your comment sounding like lyrics from 'Sexual Healing' by Marvin Gaye. ;) Love it!
Your comments are always so exciting to read. Thanks T!

"Mentally moist =Intellectual bliss.  
Wetting my appetite…. amongst other things.
His image reign supreme
while tenderly breaching abstinence seam
with the potency of his rigid carnality."

lovely Rain this is some sublime erotic inking..

it's always the intellectual demons that get us the most excited ;)

love Brenda

Coming from an erotic queen like yourself, I can only be stoked! :) Thank you beautiful Crim! xo

Pleased you hate it less in this ink. ;) Thank you Tod!

you pulled out all the stops
on this joint huh Rain?
luv the editing job you did on the video
..and of course
your words fit the billing
with exquisite imagery
and unique phraseology...
this vibe possess such a 3D effect
if i touched the screen
my fingers would probably get wet
ha!!
...
you are a creative force
comparable to none  lady!!!

..yeah, I tried to do a little sumthin' sumthin' in this joint. Happy you noticed it through 3-D lenses, Naajir! :)
Thanks luv...

sigh the style was innocence and simply honesty in eating the facts but the words had head heart and whole? wrapped up hot and heavy..is there nothing u can't do woman? xx

...didn't really understand your comment Feen, though my mind is a bit busy and confused these days. :)
Thank you for your endless support.

ps.... there is plenty I can't do and plenty I 've failed at..... xo

Off the charts here. Superb creation that makes the work of others seem weak and shallow in comparison.

Oh wow! Can't help but take a bow and kiss your cheek with thanks! Got a sista' blushing! :)
Thank you Jazz and I'm glad you decided to keep her for a spell.

Rain this piece left me absolutely speechless... brilliant ink! *smiles* loved how your words flow beautifully with the music and video too on point... totally enjoyed it :D

...your comment left me absolutely speechless Magic! :) You are too kind with your words.....thank you!

Rain, this is pure erotica like no other can do..there's people who just write for the sake of writing but you live it, embracing love in all its definition and emotion.  You are the queen of pure love at du and this is a prime example of it, so good to have you back, classy and beautiful, much love xo

Wow Vee! I'm so stoked by your wonderful commentary of this piece, of my ink in general. You don't know how appreciative I am of hearing this coming from you.  Your work is sublime! Thank you! xo

holy mother of putin,
i have been gone
too long
and this ...
... this wonderful
raw sensuality
is why i read you
*
simply loved
xoxox

So happy to feel your presence on my page dancedoll. It's been awhile! Hope all is well with you!
Your comments always have a way of making me smile internally.  :) Thank you! xo

Delightfully delicious.... amazing piece!

And then... for the first time on this site I listened...
Wow... that took your poem to a whole new level, so immensely sensual and erotic! Bravo!!!

Oh now that makes me feel extra special because I do think most people don't bother watching the audio when they could just read the poem. So it does my heart good knowing you actually did..... :)
 I do think this video many actually watched. lol... Thank you so much...

You're welcome!

First I thought... why should I listen while I've already read the poem, but I'm glad I did!
It adds something to the poem, makes it more special when you hear the emotions of the writer!

Besides that... you have a very beautiful voice!

I'm glad you decided to listen too. A lot of poems on dup with videos actually heightens the intensity of the poet's words. And some can take away from the beauty of the poem, so it all just depends. And thank you for the compliment about my voice. Took a few poets here to convince me to feel good and confident about spoken word. Again, thank you! xo

I can imagine it was a big step, for me a voice is something very personal!
Seductive too (I once heard chemistry depends greatly on a voice and for me that's definitely true)

I will continue to listen to poems!!! X Duende

Make no mistake about it, I LOVE THIS POEM!
lordyyy lordy, I can't even find the words to explain...but damn you did that girl!
much love Rain,
xo

~p.g

lol.....Thank you so much p.g! You made me smile. Appreciate you! :)

Tim, thank you sweetheart, I appreciate you looking under my page's skirt.  ;)
Happy you decided to keep her....

Steamy.... had to adjust my collar and wipe the sweat from my head as I read...truly captivating

lol... Thanks FreeLove! I haven't felt your presence in almost 2 years. Hope life has been kind to you. Great seeing you sweety, and thanks for passing through....

life is life you jus have to keep living it ;-)
but i'm still here. nice to know I havent been forgotten lol
but masterful work as usual, I'll be around

having been moisted by your raining I now have  to go wash and dance in the rain such beauty in exoticity none can imagine the words of praise from spoken poets makes all stand up in standing ovation you must be again moist as others on your erotica hoist well done lady you make marvels out of small soldiers shames again at hs opencity exoticity I wonder if ever you have rained reading t  do try  it will add to thunders showers and more rain..RL AND POINTS 10000/10

Thank you very much! xo

kindness
i don't cum as often
as i am now concentrating on those
who follow me

u don't

This is supposed to be some sort of mental stimulation on an intellectual level
But it has been presented in a way that does the opposite of being cerebral
Instead of being aroused between the ears
Some of us may unavoidably
Become moist between the hips

I must take my invisible hat off to you in making such an erotic production
It was very suggestive throughout
The photography is beautiful and your performance outstanding
Your voice is made for acting and evoking emotions
I was entertained
You knocked it out the park