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Poetically Yours~
Bend against my curves
like a treble clef’s curl,
slip through lyrical spaces
and caved in lines of
silent voices that go unheard
until distant cries are penned.
Easily interpreted through fluent language
with straightforward adjectives
that stalk verbs
and harass nouns
with pronoun eagerness,
forming beautiful structures
with jot down verses of emotions.
In me lies the focus of your subject,
so…
read me like the front page headline
of your poetic news-
printed in black and white sonnet-notes
conversing codes of secrecy.
Encrypted for poetic purposes
that only you can decipher
by reaching inside my soul where
poetic frequencies echoes off
measured breathing… deep within my inkwell.
Humming rhythms that are now
the backbone of my melodies.
You are the atoms and elements
that actualize poetry’s pitch of sound,
as it blends with imagery
creating emotional reaction…
affective via syllables accented
through the voice of your pen,
the purest form of art scribed.
Invite me in to feel and respond to your words,
seize my imagination intellectually~
let me inhale and experience your reality through poetry...
forever and always,
Poetically Yours
Rain~
Repost April 6, 2013
(slight edit)
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Re. Poetically Yours~
28th May 2016 5:08am
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29th May 2016 6:07am
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28th May 2016 9:49am
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29th May 2016 6:37am
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28th May 2016 11:07am
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Rose, your presence on my page is wonderful to see, it’s been way too long. :) Oh my gawd! I had a shopping orgasm when I found the website for these tights. It was like I was in 'leg accessory heaven.'
Those are Jane Austen-pride&prejudice, but they have Romeo and Juliet, Emily Dickinson, etc… I’ve already order a pair of each, although I passed on the red cause my thighs are too thick, but the dark mustard and the light blue and the white?!?....(late Fall can’t get here fast enough) lol…
If you haven’t visited this site, please go have fun. *you can even personalize your tights with your own poetry.* xoxo
https://www.etsy.com/listing/196217463/custom-text-tights-customized-print?ref=shop_home_active_41
Those are Jane Austen-pride&prejudice, but they have Romeo and Juliet, Emily Dickinson, etc… I’ve already order a pair of each, although I passed on the red cause my thighs are too thick, but the dark mustard and the light blue and the white?!?....(late Fall can’t get here fast enough) lol…
If you haven’t visited this site, please go have fun. *you can even personalize your tights with your own poetry.* xoxo
https://www.etsy.com/listing/196217463/custom-text-tights-customized-print?ref=shop_home_active_41
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29th May 2016 7:09am
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28th May 2016 11:22am
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29th May 2016 6:53am
I'm such a fireball at times, Gabe! ;) Thanks hon for the visit, always a joy......
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28th May 2016 1:44pm
Experiencing another's reality through their poetry is a semi-holy experience for me. It's akin to discerning a new language that's beautiful to understand.
Glad you reposted this.
Glad you reposted this.
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29th May 2016 6:56am
...and I'm pleased your eyes were able to rest upon some of my old ink, Ahavati! :) I do love reading your comments. xo
Ink Respect~
Ink Respect~
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Oh Tara, Tara, Tara...
I'm sure I commented on this 3 years ago, so forgive me if I am repeating myself...
This kind of verse, poetry expressing the spilling of ink upon the page makes by blood bubble like a bottle of shaken Champagne ready to burst on New Year's Eve! You make words into sexy portraits to poets in need of stimulation of their muse. I want to quote every line of this, to steal every sentence and make them my own. Better yet, let my take the author to my secret poetry cloud and write verse with her until the end of infinity... I bow to your majesty and wait for the Rain cloud to pour more poetry down on my eyes...
JJ
I'm sure I commented on this 3 years ago, so forgive me if I am repeating myself...
This kind of verse, poetry expressing the spilling of ink upon the page makes by blood bubble like a bottle of shaken Champagne ready to burst on New Year's Eve! You make words into sexy portraits to poets in need of stimulation of their muse. I want to quote every line of this, to steal every sentence and make them my own. Better yet, let my take the author to my secret poetry cloud and write verse with her until the end of infinity... I bow to your majesty and wait for the Rain cloud to pour more poetry down on my eyes...
JJ
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29th May 2016 7:08am
"You make words into sexy portraits to poets in need of stimulation of their muse. I want to quote every line of this, to steal every sentence and make them my own. Better yet, let my take the author to my secret poetry cloud and write verse with her until the end of infinity" <--- with the way you pour it on so thick, delicious and sprinkled with inspiration, how can I not find the nearest poetry cloud and have a muse date with you JJ?! ;)lol….. you always find a way to make me smile, thank you for keeping her. xo
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29th May 2016 11:26pm
I loved the poem and I couldn't take my eyes of the "Naughty red legs" so sensuous! yes I'm a wicked old man! ;-)
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2nd Jun 2016 6:06am
You’re an ageless man, Tony. The term old is so…..’Old’ and outdated. :) Besides, I love a man that’s wicked and…mature ;) Thanks!
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30th May 2016 2:29pm
This is incredible. Wasn't on the Deep when you first posted this, but love being able to experience it now.
Were you an English Lit. teacher, student participation would skyrocket with your ability to create music with words alone
Thank You for being such an inspiration
Were you an English Lit. teacher, student participation would skyrocket with your ability to create music with words alone
Thank You for being such an inspiration
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2nd Jun 2016 6:28am
....an English teacher?! lol... Good lawd, no sirrrr! Hated school actually, but smiling big that you thought so. Your compliment is stellar, thank you 3P!
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30th May 2016 3:32pm
Your words are never old to me..........effervescent and refreshing always. Yes I too remember this :-)
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2nd Jun 2016 6:30am
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31st May 2016 3:12pm
Your imagery bleeds through the screen like none other Rain.. top tier artist indeed. You have such a rhythmic soul...
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2nd Jun 2016 6:31am
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23rd Jun 2016 10:42pm
Such depth... Okay your pen has fascinated me and I pray reading other pieces will get my creative juices flowing again... I absolutely loved this piece... Such an amazing imagery and metaphors.... Nice...
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
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2nd Jul 2016 3:57am
....logging back on dup after a few weeks away and greeted by your comment(s) have really made my return cheerful. :) Thank you so much for all the lyrical support and for the listing. Will tour your art soon...
Re. Poetically Yours~
4th Jul 2016 9:40am
i remember this one!!!
goodness rainy lady,
those first two lines
sucked me in
& this didn't let go...
... amazing as always
xoxox
p.s cheers for the shopping link ltm
goodness rainy lady,
those first two lines
sucked me in
& this didn't let go...
... amazing as always
xoxox
p.s cheers for the shopping link ltm
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11th Jul 2016 3:57am
....thank you my sweet dancedoll! :) So happy you spotted the link. Your poetry is definitely worth wearing.. ;)
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Re. Poetically Yours~
7th Apr 2020 2:05pm
I like the name of being a "Poetess Elemental"
I hope you continue to wear the name well
Cool
It's like a flowing breeze
Those words touched me
I hope you continue to wear the name well
Cool
It's like a flowing breeze
Those words touched me
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