When a real man comes along ~

A roller coaster of happiness to pain and back up again... you're in a wonderful place now and I hope it lasts forever!
JJ

" you're in a wonderful place now and I hope it lasts forever! " <--- not my personal story, jj.  
 Tho, I have one a wee-bit similar in context, this is just my mind creating consciously. Thank you for reading....

lovely Rain so many emotions in this write inked with poetic perfection..

so eloquently and poignantly beautiful :)

love Crimsin

Thank you beautiful Crim!
...this is my scribe of kissing many frogs to find your prince....

This is magnificent in so many aspects... I fell in love with these lines~~>
"Let me show you what trust looks like when it's dressed    
in bona fide commitment.  
Let me gift you pearls of respect that compliment your skin  
with silk reverence and esteem that hasn't even scratched    
the surface of your unmeasured worth.  
I want to spoon feed you bliss that simmers on your tongue  
for days, weeks and months."

Your mind is remarkable Rain! Great work.

My ego was caressed by your last line, B! :) I'm so humbled by your comment, and appreciate you stashing her on your cyber bookshelf. Thank you lovely lady....xo

Superbly inked, beautiful in it's entirety!! Yea, flip that around n it's how I'd loved to be loved by a woman

It's how you're 'suppose' to be loved by a woman. You deserve it hun. This (real) love doesn't discriminate against genders..... :) Appreciate you Rich...

WOW Lady Rain ... just an incredibly beautiful write ... just wrapping my mind around how your thought process works ... just beautiful, truly, like you ... ox

*.... blushes profusely!* :) Thank you so much Je! Adore your grand response.....xo

firstly, that image is just wow, so much wow
this read is a roller coaster
& my emotions just buckled down
to go along for the ride
because there's just no damn fighting
the impact of your pen...
... in awe
loved this
xoxox

...coming from the lady who is the be-all and end-all of poetry personified, can't help but be stoked and take a bow. ;) Thanks for taking her home with ya!

*I knew the image would meet your approval* xo

This is stunning, Rain. The realization that came to mind reading
this is that you cannot recognize truth without having experienced lies.
You cannot recognize sincerity without having experienced falsity.
And, you cannot recognize healing unless you've experienced
being broken completely open. Beautiful share.

I completely agree with your beautiful perception, Ahavati! Bittersweet truth! :)
Thank you for your positive lyrical vibe....

Sonsista,  I must echo several above me in that this is a roller coaster of a ride with emotions, glad to hear not your personal story yet sad you could even go there and get it so right... Your mind is a most fascinating thing my dear... Respect to both you and your pen.  

With love - Taryn xoxo

Raw imagination can take you places you've never been before, Taryn! Nothing wrong with second-hand exposure either. ;) Always pleased by your warm visits! Pen love~

Sounds so much like an echo of "Fool's Gold". Yet it carries a depth that the song cannot have because the song doesn't allow time for the emotions to marinate and set in.
I really love this piece.
Thank You so much for penning this

Fool's gold to some is actually a rare diamond found by a recovering-fool. :)  
Happy you loved the read, nice to know you felt the emotions. Thanks 3P!

sheesh, you know how to take one on a voyage!  "Forget every man and moment that made you" to "Let me love you in ways that knows no boundaries." is glorious beauty,that imagination girl, preach goddess#asuckaforyourscript...

A real man recognizes what a real woman wants. ;) Thanks Dean!
#lovewhenyoufondlemypen...

Sexy Rain.......so many emotions you've written so gracefully.......your pen is unique.......purple luv & hugs xo :)

...good to see your purple mist in the air, lovely lady! :) Thank you for being you.....xo

AWESOME WORK & Beautiful Capture....thanks for sharing!

...always happy to see a new face in my area code. Thank you so much.... :)

that is the love that everyone wants...that everyone deserves ...you my dear are a master of the pen ...whatever the Lioness does I listen :D

...you sure do know how to make a woman bloom, T! Thank you for the kind words. I'm starting to love the lioness call too, got me wanting to roar with this glow. ;)

their are few true Lionesses so hold your head up proudly...as I know you do :)

Rain, pardon my french.. but this is fucking hot.. such a talented pen you possess.. take a bow.. this was brilliant.. much respect..



Dave

aww darling, pardon my French...but I fucks with you for using profanity appropriately in the moment. lmbo...  So humbled by your statement. Thank you dave.... :)

A lovely tale with a fairy tale ending *sigh* wonderfully written and overflowing with breathtaking metaphors; I need to read this again and again.

....hi Honey, thank you for all the poetic love. So happy to see you window showing through my prose. Appreciate you taking her home with you. Looking forward to the ink-connection. :)

Another brilliantly passionate, well crafted  piece dear itTara. A poetic tiara for Lady Tara the princess of poetry. :-)
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You're good at making me blush, Tony! Such sweets words your lips drip. *Puts tiara on* :)
Thankya my friend.. xo

This is special, keeping to read again.

I'm so honored by the gentle scent of your presence around my poetic city, Sky. Thank you for the ink love, listing and following. :)  Looking forward to the pen-link. I'll be sure to window shop your ink soon. xo

I became captivated and then lost while reading your lines... the depth in which you pen has given me a moment of bliss.... You are a very talented writer and I abslutely loved this piece... You will be seeing more of me bet that....

~BSavvy

....you are really motivating me with your ink love. I'm so uplifted from reading your comments. Beyond stoked by your words. Thank you for placing a sonnet smile in my spirit, BSavvy!  :) I'm happy you decided to add her to your cyber bookshelf.... xo