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EASTER
Porphyry church porch
A last smoke before breeze
And I squeeze inside
*Thanks to Madame Lavender for your Easter Haiku Comp and for the kudos
A last smoke before breeze
And I squeeze inside
*Thanks to Madame Lavender for your Easter Haiku Comp and for the kudos
Published 27th Mar 2016
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27th Mar 2016 10:31am
27th Mar 2016 10:41am
27th Mar 2016 1:23pm
Happy Easter my brother! May your day be blessed with the beauty of this haiku!
27th Mar 2016 7:01pm
27th Mar 2016 3:57pm
Happy Easter. Unlike JF I did not think of incense but the person having a smoke before joining a service (and perhaps coming out having prayerfully given up smoking).
27th Mar 2016 7:03pm
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29th Mar 2016 8:29am
Wonderful haiku! I could see you getting that last puff in. :) Colorful image in so few words.
29th Mar 2016 10:33pm
"Porphyry" is a word i think when i think of your poems, lol, beautiful Whale...
