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The Pull of Tomorrow
I stood alone
staring upward into the
blackness of night
and the millions
of stars looking down at me
I felt a wrench within my soul
calling attention
to the absolute fact that I was dead
dead, yes, but seeing my future
and hers
reincarnation isn't just a
fanciful figure of my imagination
no . . .
as I remained standing there
I felt a severe tug
within me
it told me I was being reborn
I saw her face
she was waiting for me
staring upward into the
blackness of night
and the millions
of stars looking down at me
I felt a wrench within my soul
calling attention
to the absolute fact that I was dead
dead, yes, but seeing my future
and hers
reincarnation isn't just a
fanciful figure of my imagination
no . . .
as I remained standing there
I felt a severe tug
within me
it told me I was being reborn
I saw her face
she was waiting for me
Published 20th Mar 2016
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20th Mar 2016 3:54pm
20th Mar 2016 3:55pm
Anonymous
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21st Mar 2016 1:05pm
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21st Mar 2016 2:31pm
Ahhh . . . I quit believing in God and the Heaven rigamarole when I was about fourteen, Taryn. For the rest of my life I was just a non-believer of anything. I just accepted the fact that we were born and we died. Kaput! That was it. But I felt quite empty inside. A few years ago I was introduced to reincarnation. I began to read about it. I became a believer. I'm hoping, Taryn, that if you are a Christian I haven't hurt your feelings, but this is what I believe.
Thank you very much for commenting on my poetry . . .
Thank you very much for commenting on my poetry . . .
Anonymous
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21st Mar 2016 8:41pm
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21st Mar 2016 9:55pm
I went there, and left this comment . . .
This is more than precious, Taryn, it is fantastic
and eerie, but in a good way. WoW! Talk about
reincarnation and keeping it in the family. Again
in a good way, not a bad one. I absolutely
understand why you steered me over there.
Thank you.
PS:Oh my, do love my provolone
This is more than precious, Taryn, it is fantastic
and eerie, but in a good way. WoW! Talk about
reincarnation and keeping it in the family. Again
in a good way, not a bad one. I absolutely
understand why you steered me over there.
Thank you.
PS:Oh my, do love my provolone
