'Pocket'

I love your thought path here dearest..
many things spring to mind at title & I sighed out a lil darkness at the read..
mood evoking piece, I likes..

and... ??... tuck in the pocket!! lol ;)
hughug
~d

Lol TUCKED... N thank you sweetheart :)

Poe a heart felt write love your ink..

with love Crim

Love ur ink too Crim, thank you...always :)

Very pretty eerie lay Rich. I like this.

🌹Jennifer

Yea, had a heavy moment...
Appreciate the thoughts n time on my ink

Interesting write Poetik...must try my hands at this.

Thank u sweet Grace, ur the best :)

Stirring piece. So vivid and soulful.

Many thanks my dear lady, truly appreciate your thoughts n time :)

You have me thinking here Poe. Very interesting and kinda sexy still ; )

Aaaawwww well thinking is always a good thing in poetry right? lol
Ur the best my sweetheart, thank u! :)

Thought provoking and haunting are the two words that come to my mind. . .Need to rethink those pockets, inside and out. . .Devlin;)

Hi there! What a sweet surprise having
a new visitor! I'm honored n thank u greatly, will return the  favor soon :)

Neatly tucked. I tend to do so quiet a lot. changes nothing.
I loves this piece. Admittedly... I enjoy this type of piece.

Darker.

My sweetheart you just put a big smile
on my face :) truly n always appreciate you :)

Deep Dark Scribe Poetik..love the ending and the title...very fitting with the flow and structure of this poem.. pocket  makes me think of still silence that follows screams..that void, empty space..waiting wanting to be filled.. this also somehow  made me think of this line from the Glass Menagerie "Yes, I have tricks in my pocket, I have things up my sleeve. But I am the opposite of a stage magician. He gives you illusion that has the appearance of truth. I give you truth in the pleasant disguise of illusion."  the whole reveal/conceal aspect...is what the "inside out" pline brings to mind..anyrate cant quite put my finger on this one and truthfully thats what i loved most about it..intriguing scribe ..i enjoyed immensely

And I enjoyed your deep mind probing
of this n thd movie reference too! lol
Truly, this n a good many I have done
the clear intention NOT being seen?
It's WHAT I love most becuz then I get to muse over the many views readers
have on what they read. :) big thanks
my dear, always n forever grateful :)

Amazing! your poems speak volumes..... I'm in love

Aaaawwww... Ur as sweet as a chocolate candy bar! :) thank u, I'm hugely flattered :)