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When Words Fail....
Words hurl heedlessly, as if
vocal jabs can’t rupture a heart
and cause a soul to bleed
You should taste your salty sentiments,
sweeten your words before they disrupt the air.
Malicious words can expose you;
revealing an ugly internal you
So,
don’t be so reckless with them, like they
don’t dull the sparkle from a smile that once was
because….
a poisonous tongue can spit words
that sound like death,
leaving residue of it’s wrongdoing
and no amount of I’m sorrys’ and warm apologies....
can wash them clean
Rain~
Written by
rain1courtel
(RainC)
Published 24th Sep 2015
| Edited 1st Apr 2016
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Re: Re. When Words Fail....
26th Sep 2015 8:25pm
Oh wow Taryn, I was truly touched by your comment, and after your pm, I understand clearly how much this ink has reopen old wounds, while reflecting on personal growth.
Thank you for opening up to me. Your story is the epitome of this ink's pulse. Xo
Your poetic support is appreciate! :)
Thank you for opening up to me. Your story is the epitome of this ink's pulse. Xo
Your poetic support is appreciate! :)
Re. When Words Fail....
Anonymous
24th Sep 2015 10:20pm
Miss Rain. . .while an excellent observation, it is also riddled in truth. . .this is a great perspective from either a personal or observational standpoint. . .one that should have the honor to echo eternally. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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Re: Re. When Words Fail....
26th Sep 2015 8:28pm
Thank you Devlin! :) It's a truth we've all been apart of, both good and bad. We just have to work on being silent, when our emotions want to scream....
....appreciate ya hun....
....appreciate ya hun....
Re. When Words Fail....
24th Sep 2015 10:50pm
Words as weapons, words that sting
Use them to curse, far better to sing
So much truth here Rain great insight no amount of "Sorry" can make a word unsaid.
Use them to curse, far better to sing
So much truth here Rain great insight no amount of "Sorry" can make a word unsaid.
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Re: Re. When Words Fail....
26th Sep 2015 8:31pm
Me likes that response, Tony! :) So very true! What's said can't be erased, so think hard before you part your lips...
Thanks darlin'
Thanks darlin'
Re. When Words Fail....
25th Sep 2015 1:09am
I'm so guilty at uttering words in haste this is a wise observation with advise I will be trying to apply to my careless tongue..
I swear I need a gag sometimes..
beautiful inking with love Crim
I swear I need a gag sometimes..
beautiful inking with love Crim
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Re: Re. When Words Fail....
26th Sep 2015 8:36pm
I've literally placed a gag order on my damn self Crim, lol....especially when my emotions begin to soar. I use to be horrible with spitting out poison in my younger years, but with age and a little bit of wisdom, I've been able to soften my hostile tongue. Thanks for the read, beautiful!
Re. When Words Fail....
25th Sep 2015 2:30am
Hi Rain,
This was soul touching. What we utter should be worth much more consideration than we give..
Thank you so so much such an insight on the power of words.. You did it justice💋
This was soul touching. What we utter should be worth much more consideration than we give..
Thank you so so much such an insight on the power of words.. You did it justice💋
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Thank you for the lovely reply vivid! It's true, we need to consider our words before we release them. They can do irreparable damage....
Re. When Words Fail....
25th Sep 2015 2:48am
So very true Rain! Words hurled in anger are worse than words voiced without thinking...
When spread with ink, being mightier than a sword is deadly when sunk into ones back..
JJ
When spread with ink, being mightier than a sword is deadly when sunk into ones back..
JJ
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Re: Re. When Words Fail....
26th Sep 2015 8:53pm
....especially when those words hurled with anger are towards people you love. Oh it does damage to strangers, co workers, friends etc.... but words cut deeper when it's the people we care about.
"When spread with ink,"<-- I'm convinced that over the internet words are the truest form of any individual, no matter how weak or strong you take the authenticity of them. Your words reflect your personality tenfold, in cyber-world. (imo) Thank you sweety!
"When spread with ink,"<-- I'm convinced that over the internet words are the truest form of any individual, no matter how weak or strong you take the authenticity of them. Your words reflect your personality tenfold, in cyber-world. (imo) Thank you sweety!
Re. When Words Fail....
25th Sep 2015 5:17am
Hated words burn from within,. the fucker spitting these words and actions is far more a lonesome dove inside than a broken dove without a left wing to fly!
U speak truth Tara!
loves you Sis!!!
Zazzles xoxoxoxo
U speak truth Tara!
loves you Sis!!!
Zazzles xoxoxoxo
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Re: Re. When Words Fail....
26th Sep 2015 9:00pm
hey Zazzles, we all have our moments. I think those people you speak about are lonesome, perhaps miserable and angry too.... but then there are those people who in the moment, that split second, they carelessly say what they're feeling, not really caring about the bruise they will leave.
Thanks sexy lady, good seeing ya....
Thanks sexy lady, good seeing ya....
Re. When Words Fail....
25th Sep 2015 10:16am
Yup yup I hear you my dear! N as everyone else said, this is plain n simple truth... One that all would be
wise to heed before the urge to
verbally proceed to bleed withever
their will spills :)
wise to heed before the urge to
verbally proceed to bleed withever
their will spills :)
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Re: Re. When Words Fail....
26th Sep 2015 9:01pm
.....endorsing your wonderful comment, Rich! :)
Very well said mister...
Thanks luv...
Very well said mister...
Thanks luv...
Re. When Words Fail....
25th Sep 2015 12:38pm
Rain....this is a prolific TRUTH I AM AMAZED AT THE WAY THIS INK TOUCHES MY HEART.
Powerful Pen Praise !!!
XOXO
Fire
Powerful Pen Praise !!!
XOXO
Fire
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Re: Re. When Words Fail....
26th Sep 2015 9:03pm
hey there queen, so nice to see ya! :)
I'm always thrilled when you give the nod of approval. Humbled by your comment! Thankya hun...
I'm always thrilled when you give the nod of approval. Humbled by your comment! Thankya hun...
Re. When Words Fail....
25th Sep 2015 12:59pm
tiny gods, your profundity is mariana trench deep. this is steeped in such an ugly truth we're all guilty of on one level or another, whether in word or thought
i'm gonna go staple my tongue now & continue to ponder this
exceptional ink, miss rain
xoxox
i'm gonna go staple my tongue now & continue to ponder this
exceptional ink, miss rain
xoxox
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Re: Re. When Words Fail....
26th Sep 2015 9:08pm
lmbo, I seriously doubt if that powerful tongue of yours will soften when it's provoked anytime soon, but....your incredible soothing personality will balance it out. :)
Wonderful comment dancedoll! Thanks beautiful!
Wonderful comment dancedoll! Thanks beautiful!
Re. When Words Fail....
25th Sep 2015 4:51pm
enlightened advice, i share the same the sentiments, it's something people have to work hard at to correct, thinking before speaking takes practice... illuminating goddess...
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Re: Re. When Words Fail....
26th Sep 2015 9:18pm
...yes, it sure does take practice Dean! Consider wise when holding your peace. Esteemed man of understanding, when closing your mouth." .... ( my broken bible quote, but you get the message). :) Thank you sweety....
Re. When Words Fail....
25th Sep 2015 6:12pm
Keeping clear of toxins-that's no mean feat!!!
Happy to see you here :)
Purge the unwanted ills- These things keep me locked away...whether its home hidden in woods- people and their manner can truly be taxing to ones drive.
Happy to see you here :)
Purge the unwanted ills- These things keep me locked away...whether its home hidden in woods- people and their manner can truly be taxing to ones drive.
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Re: Re. When Words Fail....
26th Sep 2015 9:24pm
.....alas, the reason many take breaks on the internet. It is very, very, very taxing on a person's spirit, to the point of removing yourself from a toxic environment that you had no part of creating. Words will bring a person out of character. They will mute the outspoken, and cause the meek and mild to ready themselves for a fight. Thank you Gabe! So happy to see ya. :)
Re. When Words Fail....
26th Sep 2015 3:52pm
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26th Sep 2015 9:26pm
Re. When Words Fail....
26th Sep 2015 9:37pm
"a poisonous tongue can spit words
that sound like death"
What a great comparison. Love it, Dear! Fabulous write! Makes a good point that we have heard time and time again, but never really take into account. Perhaps now we will.
Hope all is well.
May Mother Earth Guide and let the elements be with you.
Merry Cheers!!!
-Jessica Dawn
that sound like death"
What a great comparison. Love it, Dear! Fabulous write! Makes a good point that we have heard time and time again, but never really take into account. Perhaps now we will.
Hope all is well.
May Mother Earth Guide and let the elements be with you.
Merry Cheers!!!
-Jessica Dawn
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Re: Re. When Words Fail....
26th Sep 2015 10:55pm
beautiful Dawn, I'm so happy to see you and your poetic love! :)
I'm doing fab and hoping the same for you. So grateful to be reading your ink once again. Xo
Thanks for stopping by with ink inspiration...
Pen love~
I'm doing fab and hoping the same for you. So grateful to be reading your ink once again. Xo
Thanks for stopping by with ink inspiration...
Pen love~
Re. When Words Fail....
1st Oct 2015 7:53pm
A cautionary poem about choosing your carefully I love it and wish everyone would heed it's warning. But the problem being when we are angry most of us don't think about what we are saying till it to late. Nicely inked
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Re: Re. When Words Fail....
13th Oct 2015 6:31am
"But the problem being when we are angry most of us don't think about what we are saying till it to late."
^^^^^^Exactly DevilsPoet! Very well said! Thank you for the poetic visit....
^^^^^^Exactly DevilsPoet! Very well said! Thank you for the poetic visit....
Re: Re. When Words Fail....
13th Oct 2015 6:33am
Re. When Words Fail....
Anonymous
13th Oct 2015 6:20am
Prolific write indeed! Better to be cautious in choosing
Your words...before speaking them....once spoken
They can never be taken back.
I can't copy/paste (mobile device) but the last stanza...
Is simply stunning with its compelling imagery.
Thank you for sharing -- barrie
Your words...before speaking them....once spoken
They can never be taken back.
I can't copy/paste (mobile device) but the last stanza...
Is simply stunning with its compelling imagery.
Thank you for sharing -- barrie
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Re: Re. When Words Fail....
13th Oct 2015 6:36am
I love your take on this ink barrie! Wonderfully stated!
So pleased you enjoyed, and thank you for reading me. I'll be sure to visit your poetic home soon....
So pleased you enjoyed, and thank you for reading me. I'll be sure to visit your poetic home soon....
Re. When Words Fail....
18th Oct 2015 00:09am
Now I see why you chose Rain.....These words fell welcomingly and felt the same as if I was walking under a good soft summer pour. Loved the last two lines especially and subject matter is the sun that shines afterward. Must return w/out an umbrella as songs such as these need to be appreciated to the drenc, with nothing betweeen. Thanks~
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Re: Re. When Words Fail....
18th Oct 2015 9:06pm
hey there Perdition, thank you for the visit and leaving such a wonderful reply! :)
I'll stop by your area code soon. Pens Up~
I'll stop by your area code soon. Pens Up~
Re. When Words Fail....
Anonymous
11th Nov 2015 6:01pm
those who are reckless with venomous vernacular usually have a low sense of self awareness
insightful ink indeed Rain!!
insightful ink indeed Rain!!
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11th Nov 2015 7:04pm