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Aim for my Ankh
Tongue-trace ink laced Ankh.. my black dainty scroll work,
rough lower-back nips .. mouth your name 'til it hurts..
Thumb-press circles to spine, appeasing sweet pain,
cover slim curves in craved heat as you lay.
Rest your heavy taunt 'tween cheek's tight display,
sheets rawing rose peaks 'neath beautiful weight..
Lipstains pin slender neck.. wicked sucks latching,
palm-spanning grip.. widens hips in raised fashion..
..prone..begging impalement.. all wiggles, wet squirm,
"fierce-pierce our moist need" ..I plead carnal harsh burn.
Granted teasing slide at my dirty word-haste..
you force inches sink ~everdeep in sin's grace.
Growling low count of "two.. three" .. fourth soaks my space..
My slick skin screams.. "I am yours for all taking,"
full stroke hot core .. solid thrusting to break me..
..bruise us soft purple, painting hip passion hues,
back tattoo greeting each out-slide and push through.
My roaming fingers heighten pleased punishment,
reach beneath ..swirling three ..in pink puddle's crest.
I match your sharp pace.. pressure narrows both holes,
tipped-tickles pulse on thick vein, bringing close-close.
Whisper loves in my ear.. fuck me promises..
Spill your swell 'cross my Ankh in searing rubbed mess,
draining eternity droplets, mixing our sweat.
Needled ever-before "tramp-stamp" had name,
now marks a fine target for dark play's end game..
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Re. Aim for my Ankh
9th Sep 2015 7:40am
"Spill your swell 'cross my Ankh in searing rubbed mess,
draining eternity droplets, mixing our sweat.
Needled ever-before "tramp-stamp" had name,
now marks a fine target for dark play's end game.."
Clever placement of ankh, the lower back, and creates double entendre here.
Ankh meaning "life" or in its connotation Egyptian eternal life. Theories about its origins are many.
But one has to do with a bulls spine, lower vertebra.
So cool T. So with draining eternity droplets on your Ankh you get even deeper meaning, other origins having to do with seed, and male_female genitalia!
"back tattoo greeting each out-slide and push through."
Here showing, more importantly, its fuckin plain ol white hot sexy poetry.
Jeezus T, your works are brilliant, fuck filled symphonic inks.
I die.
💗🐍
Jennifer
draining eternity droplets, mixing our sweat.
Needled ever-before "tramp-stamp" had name,
now marks a fine target for dark play's end game.."
Clever placement of ankh, the lower back, and creates double entendre here.
Ankh meaning "life" or in its connotation Egyptian eternal life. Theories about its origins are many.
But one has to do with a bulls spine, lower vertebra.
So cool T. So with draining eternity droplets on your Ankh you get even deeper meaning, other origins having to do with seed, and male_female genitalia!
"back tattoo greeting each out-slide and push through."
Here showing, more importantly, its fuckin plain ol white hot sexy poetry.
Jeezus T, your works are brilliant, fuck filled symphonic inks.
I die.
💗🐍
Jennifer
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Re: Re. Aim for my Ankh
10th Sep 2015 8:16pm
Awwes to see you here creampuff.. rollin in grin to hear your knowledge on symbol itself.
I've been obsessed with the mixed origins & spiritual theories vs romanticism of the Ankh
since I got mine at 17.. You just soo fucking 'get it Jen dears.. ty so much.
*dirty mwahs n luvz fer it too!
~d
I've been obsessed with the mixed origins & spiritual theories vs romanticism of the Ankh
since I got mine at 17.. You just soo fucking 'get it Jen dears.. ty so much.
*dirty mwahs n luvz fer it too!
~d
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Re: Re. Aim for my Ankh
10th Sep 2015 8:23pm
Assuring you sissy-mine.. pulsing you pulses me..infinitely!
Squishy sweet Taryn OFK equals xxx creamin my coffee dammit. [and yums]
sooo happy to see sum of my most favorites attacked by your copy/paste button.. yays...
brain to brain & ink to ink.. sez me..in endless soul-lovins & steel flicks,
~d in need of CS's.. ;)
Squishy sweet Taryn OFK equals xxx creamin my coffee dammit. [and yums]
sooo happy to see sum of my most favorites attacked by your copy/paste button.. yays...
brain to brain & ink to ink.. sez me..in endless soul-lovins & steel flicks,
~d in need of CS's.. ;)
Re. Aim for my Ankh
9th Sep 2015 1:53pm
eye'd love a shot at that ankh, but i'm probably too
old, weary, wasted, & lost to even qualify for the
semi-finals
better i should take a long-walk in a semi-eternal sea
old, weary, wasted, & lost to even qualify for the
semi-finals
better i should take a long-walk in a semi-eternal sea
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Re: Re. Aim for my Ankh
10th Sep 2015 8:30pm
Spankin your sour thots & replacing em wif everadoring hugs & respect to have you
here Sirz o D.. I'm sending you cali luvstufs- likeit or no.. ;) *stubborn we. lol
~d
here Sirz o D.. I'm sending you cali luvstufs- likeit or no.. ;) *stubborn we. lol
~d
Re. Aim for my Ankh
9th Sep 2015 2:47pm
lovely d~ hot, sweltering spill of ink here..
yummy this envisioning now ;)
"I match your sharp pace.. pressure narrows both holes,
tipped-tickles pulse on thick vein, bringing close-close.
Whisper loves in my ear.. fuck me promises.."
the close was how I like to finish off purrs at you..
" Spill your swell 'cross my Ankh in searing rubbed mess,
draining eternity droplets, mixing our sweat.
Needled ever-before "tramp-stamp" had name,
now marks a fine target for dark play's end game.."
love sexy, red hot erotic with love Crim
yummy this envisioning now ;)
"I match your sharp pace.. pressure narrows both holes,
tipped-tickles pulse on thick vein, bringing close-close.
Whisper loves in my ear.. fuck me promises.."
the close was how I like to finish off purrs at you..
" Spill your swell 'cross my Ankh in searing rubbed mess,
draining eternity droplets, mixing our sweat.
Needled ever-before "tramp-stamp" had name,
now marks a fine target for dark play's end game.."
love sexy, red hot erotic with love Crim
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Re: Re. Aim for my Ankh
10th Sep 2015 8:34pm
To entertain your lovely thoughts with my back ink brings all-fierce tingle, m'darlin Brenda..
rubbing hot kitten purrs & slides along you in thanx, beautiful!
always loves fer you,
~d
rubbing hot kitten purrs & slides along you in thanx, beautiful!
always loves fer you,
~d
Re. Aim for my Ankh
9th Sep 2015 2:56pm
Re: Re. Aim for my Ankh
10th Sep 2015 8:39pm
Vixen guilty.. and bummin a smoke, dearest.. lol Appreciate you everly fer the grins.
hugs fer reading.. & warm smiles on your day,
~d
hugs fer reading.. & warm smiles on your day,
~d
Re. Aim for my Ankh
Anonymous
9th Sep 2015 3:01pm
What a mind play this one gave me, T. It also saturated the lower of my extremities. Your way with words is amazing, and in this one I came across a word, "Ankh," I had never seen before. So! Seeing as my mind and my physical needs are in sync, I leave with these words. your Ankh is covered.
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Re: Re. Aim for my Ankh
10th Sep 2015 8:52pm
ooo 'saturated'.. a lovely word Jerry-dears.. gotta ty fer the sweetest cackling thoughts..
needs em today & appreciate your mental & physical syncing tickle- past my word-slaying
of the day.. ha! The tattoo's have tales & wanted to share. Cud not do w/out you m'friend, truly!
luvstufs over miles,
~d
needs em today & appreciate your mental & physical syncing tickle- past my word-slaying
of the day.. ha! The tattoo's have tales & wanted to share. Cud not do w/out you m'friend, truly!
luvstufs over miles,
~d
Re. Aim for my Ankh
9th Sep 2015 4:20pm
Love the way your poem flows. I can see you reading it in a halting way and looking up between the pauses. Very visually enticing reading your work made my imagination work overtime
Thanks for sharing
Thanks for sharing
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Re: Re. Aim for my Ankh
10th Sep 2015 9:03pm
Bowing to you of perfect comment, SirDevils of P.. you are amazing for the recognized pauses
& eye contact? --is a wicked must..
ty so much fer the read sweetie, overtime is noted & appreciated!
in humbled curtsy,
~d
& eye contact? --is a wicked must..
ty so much fer the read sweetie, overtime is noted & appreciated!
in humbled curtsy,
~d
Re. Aim for my Ankh
9th Sep 2015 8:53pm
I LOVE tattoos and I'm sure your ankh is a tempting target Darksighs. And I'm certain yours is more of a work of art than a "tramp stamp." Still wouldn't mind taking aim to express my appreciation.
"Lipstains pin slender neck, wicked suck latching,
palm-spanning grip widens hips in raised fashion.
Prone-begging impalement.. all wiggles, wet squirm,"
This is so much fun to read, and genuinely erotic. Thanks for the turn on Darksighs!
"Lipstains pin slender neck, wicked suck latching,
palm-spanning grip widens hips in raised fashion.
Prone-begging impalement.. all wiggles, wet squirm,"
This is so much fun to read, and genuinely erotic. Thanks for the turn on Darksighs!
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Re: Re. Aim for my Ankh
10th Sep 2015 9:25pm
Gawds.. the targets we make, yes?.. I was obsessively designing that tat fer mths beforehand..
[yeeears ago] My joke at end is almost a cunty ire bc there was no such "tramp-stamp" title at time
I chose the spot but these younger generations must *name everything it seems. lol/a'ggrz ;)
...So I must sweetly thank you fer seeing art in location.. and have heard of the precision of a
Crow's appreciated aim... so also ty fer the eg dear Sir.. [my blah day needed grin, truly!] hugs.
~d
[yeeears ago] My joke at end is almost a cunty ire bc there was no such "tramp-stamp" title at time
I chose the spot but these younger generations must *name everything it seems. lol/a'ggrz ;)
...So I must sweetly thank you fer seeing art in location.. and have heard of the precision of a
Crow's appreciated aim... so also ty fer the eg dear Sir.. [my blah day needed grin, truly!] hugs.
~d
Re. Aim for my Ankh
10th Sep 2015 7:58pm
well sister mine, creamed coffee indeed ;) we must compare ink (gots neeeeew!!!) & i do so love sexy lady ink
*
"Spill your swell 'cross my Ankh in searing rubbed mess,
draining eternity droplets, mixing our sweat."
^^^^^
lawd, why do i always get penis envy around you [?] ltm 'struth
absofeckinfuckhawt you are here, darling sighs
xoxox
*
"Spill your swell 'cross my Ankh in searing rubbed mess,
draining eternity droplets, mixing our sweat."
^^^^^
lawd, why do i always get penis envy around you [?] ltm 'struth
absofeckinfuckhawt you are here, darling sighs
xoxox
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Re: Re. Aim for my Ankh
10th Sep 2015 9:44pm
Creamed coffee both ways.. you're so sexy-guilty sister-mine!
hell.. no worries.. we can envy together at moment darlin.. you've Seen what
our squirmy sweet sissy T has been up to.. [!!?!] omfg..drip & spill..
"absofeckinfuckhawt"... love this..you & dem words!
much lovins always kittyKats.. mwahmwah
~d
hell.. no worries.. we can envy together at moment darlin.. you've Seen what
our squirmy sweet sissy T has been up to.. [!!?!] omfg..drip & spill..
"absofeckinfuckhawt"... love this..you & dem words!
much lovins always kittyKats.. mwahmwah
~d
Re. Aim for my Ankh
12th Sep 2015 5:23am
well, sweet temptress you have done it again> such bewitching ink; forced to read over and over
from beginning to end. So many stunning visuals seared in my brain.
fav by far>back tattoo greeting each out-slide and push through>clear visual
fav line by far>Whispers loves in my ear...fuck me promises...
definite intimate moments>slowd and enjoyed
I don't know why we gentlemen even write erotica: you ladies do it so much better
I kneel in your presence,
Keith
from beginning to end. So many stunning visuals seared in my brain.
fav by far>back tattoo greeting each out-slide and push through>clear visual
fav line by far>Whispers loves in my ear...fuck me promises...
definite intimate moments>slowd and enjoyed
I don't know why we gentlemen even write erotica: you ladies do it so much better
I kneel in your presence,
Keith
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Re: Re. Aim for my Ankh
15th Sep 2015 4:43am
How behind am I.. omg..tardy apologies Keith, my mind shud never space out on thankins
so I shall be kneeling right beside you.. just thought to check this one. I did tell you my muse
was in stubborn fits, I hope? ..lol. Counseling has commenced tho. ha's..
Eversweet to have you here delighting with bright smile this eve!..
will be catchin up.. as long as the coffee goddz are willing ;)
and to this lil gem thot of yours.. ~> " you ladies do it so much better"....
Is a touching thought but wud plead from our ladies' side, that you gentlemen far
and well hold your own!
My pleasure to sear your brain a bit sweetie, have a gdnte!
~d
so I shall be kneeling right beside you.. just thought to check this one. I did tell you my muse
was in stubborn fits, I hope? ..lol. Counseling has commenced tho. ha's..
Eversweet to have you here delighting with bright smile this eve!..
will be catchin up.. as long as the coffee goddz are willing ;)
and to this lil gem thot of yours.. ~> " you ladies do it so much better"....
Is a touching thought but wud plead from our ladies' side, that you gentlemen far
and well hold your own!
My pleasure to sear your brain a bit sweetie, have a gdnte!
~d
Re. Aim for my Ankh
13th Sep 2015 5:08am
Some say the Ankh is a representation of the penis and vagina: the loop being the vagina and the cross being the penis. (Similar to the Rose Cross).
"My roaming fingers heighten pleased punishment,
reach beneath, swirling three in pink puddle's crest. "
I had a vivid imagination of what was happening here and I had the very feeling while I was reading it. I really love this.
"Spill your swell 'cross my Ankh in searing rubbed mess, "
This was the line that raised me. I bet you have a sweet, round Ankh. ;)
This was a very hot write that got my cross resurrected. Thank you! Always enjoy your erotica.
"My roaming fingers heighten pleased punishment,
reach beneath, swirling three in pink puddle's crest. "
I had a vivid imagination of what was happening here and I had the very feeling while I was reading it. I really love this.
"Spill your swell 'cross my Ankh in searing rubbed mess, "
This was the line that raised me. I bet you have a sweet, round Ankh. ;)
This was a very hot write that got my cross resurrected. Thank you! Always enjoy your erotica.
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Re: Re. Aim for my Ankh
15th Sep 2015 5:03am
Hihi darlins.. must apologize to you as well, appears I abandoned my page for a few days &
penance is mine.. eeks of sorries. ;(
Very much appreciate your histories.. not sure I knew at 17.. but does make big sense now.. tyty.
Just smirking.. as it shud not surprise me that you wud know the Ankh rep..*trumped me, dammit! ;)
leaves my minor in low curtsy to your Major Arcana and vivid imagination.. right on target misters..
tahs
~d
penance is mine.. eeks of sorries. ;(
Very much appreciate your histories.. not sure I knew at 17.. but does make big sense now.. tyty.
Just smirking.. as it shud not surprise me that you wud know the Ankh rep..*trumped me, dammit! ;)
leaves my minor in low curtsy to your Major Arcana and vivid imagination.. right on target misters..
tahs
~d
Re. Aim for my Ankh
15th Sep 2015 00:49am
this ink is so hot... when it comes together... it creates a diamond... a pleasure to behold :)
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Re: Re. Aim for my Ankh
15th Sep 2015 5:17am
..Diamond.. clever & leaves quite the image, Mistah Magic.. tis my pleasure to have you here!
Reigning in my muse from her absenced vacation.. I shall be reading your fancy verse asap
and hope you have a great nite m'dear..
shiny thanx ;)
~d
Reigning in my muse from her absenced vacation.. I shall be reading your fancy verse asap
and hope you have a great nite m'dear..
shiny thanx ;)
~d
Re. Aim for my Ankh
15th Sep 2015 11:31pm
Re: Re. Aim for my Ankh
27th Sep 2015 10:30pm
Hello's and my thankins fer your time!
deeply appreciate sweet comment & hope u hv a great eve ;)
~d
deeply appreciate sweet comment & hope u hv a great eve ;)
~d