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"PIE"
Oh Dayumn...baby
you sexy, sweet lady,
you know what makes me
shake my head n' sigh..?
The fact that I...I...
I Thank goodness
you're not peach pie...
Because,
The Lord knows
I'd eat it, n' eat it til I die...
Sloppily you'd see me
buryin' my head...
tongue led,
heathenly, slowly, slurping
swhirlin' lustfully at the insides...
that scent, the flavor,
overtakin', makin' me high
Fingers pickin' tenderly, the 'edges'
Usin' my 'steeled knife' riped,
to drive deep
But on the real, my hedge is
Shit baby... if you were peach pie
So wonderful, n' sweet your
hot treat'd be, I could feed for hours
but I'd never truly ever...
get enough of it to eat...
you sexy, sweet lady,
you know what makes me
shake my head n' sigh..?
The fact that I...I...
I Thank goodness
you're not peach pie...
Because,
The Lord knows
I'd eat it, n' eat it til I die...
Sloppily you'd see me
buryin' my head...
tongue led,
heathenly, slowly, slurping
swhirlin' lustfully at the insides...
that scent, the flavor,
overtakin', makin' me high
Fingers pickin' tenderly, the 'edges'
Usin' my 'steeled knife' riped,
to drive deep
But on the real, my hedge is
Shit baby... if you were peach pie
So wonderful, n' sweet your
hot treat'd be, I could feed for hours
but I'd never truly ever...
get enough of it to eat...
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Re. "PIE"
28th Aug 2015 10:15pm
"that scent, the flavor,
overtakin', makin' me high"
&
"Fingers pickin' tenderly, the 'edges' "
~you dripped these so very sexy-sweet- mercy, man!
Lucky fucking pie.. I must say. awesome flow in your heated homaging feast..
be well dearest ;)
~d
overtakin', makin' me high"
&
"Fingers pickin' tenderly, the 'edges' "
~you dripped these so very sexy-sweet- mercy, man!
Lucky fucking pie.. I must say. awesome flow in your heated homaging feast..
be well dearest ;)
~d
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Re: Re. "PIE"
28th Aug 2015 10:33pm
Lmao at ur "lucky pie" comment lol ur the freaking best my dear! Thank u so much, appreciate u muchly :)
Re. "PIE"
28th Aug 2015 10:25pm
I don't know if I want to go home and make love or if I want to eat some peach pie maybe both. Brilliant write man.
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Re: Re. "PIE"
28th Aug 2015 10:36pm
Lmao... Thank you! One the funniest damn comments ever n I'm grateful...appreciate ur thoughts n subscribe...
Re. "PIE"
28th Aug 2015 10:47pm
Talk about finger lickin good! ☝
Cum. i give you a slice 🍰
Taste my fuzzy peach filling
Dripping warm with spice
Down your chin its spilling
And off your lips 💋
I will savor
Licking off the drips
Tasting my own flavor 🐟
Lol couldnt help myself!
A great. Fun read!
🍊J
Cum. i give you a slice 🍰
Taste my fuzzy peach filling
Dripping warm with spice
Down your chin its spilling
And off your lips 💋
I will savor
Licking off the drips
Tasting my own flavor 🐟
Lol couldnt help myself!
A great. Fun read!
🍊J
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Re: Re. "PIE"
28th Aug 2015 10:50pm
Mmmm
M u sounded like my other very fav. Pie-Cherry! lol n u could've kept it CUMMIN... I didn't mind a bit lol...
Thank u my friend for the as lib n laugh :)
M u sounded like my other very fav. Pie-Cherry! lol n u could've kept it CUMMIN... I didn't mind a bit lol...
Thank u my friend for the as lib n laugh :)
Re. "PIE"
29th Aug 2015 00:18am
mmm delicious inking Poe ;)
loved these lines..
"Fingers pickin' tenderly, the 'edges'
Usin' my 'steeled knife' riped,
to drive deep"
mmm yummy, sexy ink ;)
with love Crim
loved these lines..
"Fingers pickin' tenderly, the 'edges'
Usin' my 'steeled knife' riped,
to drive deep"
mmm yummy, sexy ink ;)
with love Crim
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Re: Re. "PIE"
29th Aug 2015 00:27am
Aaawwww thank u Crim, I'm happy to know you found it tasty! lol... Grateful always :)
Re. "PIE"
Anonymous
29th Aug 2015 8:36am
hot damn, would like like whipped cream on the side or on top :p
i love the line / /Because,
The Lord knows
I'd eat it, n' eat it til I die... //
I want hear you say this with a southern accent, its the only way that's gonna hit the spot lol
i love the line / /Because,
The Lord knows
I'd eat it, n' eat it til I die... //
I want hear you say this with a southern accent, its the only way that's gonna hit the spot lol
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Re: Re. "PIE"
30th Aug 2015 2:35pm
Anythang fer you sugah! lol... Thank u sooooo much I truly appreciate you always :)
Re. "PIE"
29th Aug 2015 1:32pm
such a way with words PM...swear you were watching...lol...love it... ;)
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Re. "PIE"
29th Aug 2015 5:14pm
Re. "PIE"
Damnnnnn PM u turned the heat up with that one. Must b one hell of a woman to make u that hungry Sir
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Re: Re. "PIE"
29th Aug 2015 10:14pm
Lol she does possess a very appetizing 'dessert' lol thank u my southern one.... Thank u n May your lil 'bells' always ring sweetly lol