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The Way She Walks
She strides firmly and with purpose
Fully aware
Her effect is devastating
One day it's her short item
A little leather number
Showing her legs at length
And to the best possible advantage
The muscles clear and present in her thighs
Curling in her calves
Then it's jeans on Saturday
Fairly tight but comfortable
Still accentuating her sweet ass
Legs defined as sculpture in denim
Everyday I pray she steps my way
To transform that walk into a ride.
Fully aware
Her effect is devastating
One day it's her short item
A little leather number
Showing her legs at length
And to the best possible advantage
The muscles clear and present in her thighs
Curling in her calves
Then it's jeans on Saturday
Fairly tight but comfortable
Still accentuating her sweet ass
Legs defined as sculpture in denim
Everyday I pray she steps my way
To transform that walk into a ride.
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Re. The Way She Walks
Anonymous
14th Aug 2015 5:25pm
oh i love this.
she could step my way as well. well done, crow.
she could step my way as well. well done, crow.
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14th Aug 2015 5:28pm
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14th Aug 2015 5:32pm
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14th Aug 2015 7:35pm
Definitely an incentive for remaining alert. I've already experienced too many missed opportunities. Thanks, again!
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14th Aug 2015 5:37pm
A tantalizingly described woman. Confidence is sexy almost as sexy as intelligence. Well done, sir.
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14th Aug 2015 7:40pm
Thanks Gahdess. The combination of confidence and intelligence is truly sexy. It can be intimidating at times, so a touch of vulnerability helps. This goes both ways, women and men, in my view. Always nice to have some balance.
Re. The Way She Walks
14th Aug 2015 6:55pm
Ahhh, crowfly, luv ~ :-*
This is rather delicious of you! What a splendid treat you present here, luv! There really is nothing like taking one's time with a luscious woman and her oh-so-curvaceous legs... ;-*
Thank you, luv, for this one, indeed. Mmm...
This is rather delicious of you! What a splendid treat you present here, luv! There really is nothing like taking one's time with a luscious woman and her oh-so-curvaceous legs... ;-*
Thank you, luv, for this one, indeed. Mmm...
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14th Aug 2015 7:31pm
I love legs and every part of the female form, but there's never anything quite like the look on a woman's face. Unless she's pissed off, natch. Thanks Savaja!
Re. The Way She Walks
14th Aug 2015 8:21pm
Those last lines....nothing better than upping the ante. This is a seductive portrait, Crow! I can imagine those legs straddling her ride....exquisite.
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16th Aug 2015 1:07am
I can picture it too. Maybe I can make her a reality at some point. Thanks Virginia!
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Anonymous
15th Aug 2015 1:38am
Me, too!. . .Excellent. . .
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16th Aug 2015 1:11am
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15th Aug 2015 1:40am
My fave line >.. That sweet Ass, you perv :D
i enjoyed taking a look in your view !!
Keep hope alive, maybe one day eh Crow?
*giggles*
loves you
Jackie xxoxox
i enjoyed taking a look in your view !!
Keep hope alive, maybe one day eh Crow?
*giggles*
loves you
Jackie xxoxox
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Re. The Way She Walks
15th Aug 2015 3:21pm
Sometimes the walk IS the ride. I can see it now, Crow. Concise and to the point. Great write!
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19th Aug 2015 1:44pm
Hmm I cant help but think you got inspiration of some sort from a special someone. I was intrigued. Great piece
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Re. The Way She Walks
23rd Aug 2015 4:25am
Hahaagh!! Transform that walk into a ride! Pure sex on a stick, no vulgarity.
Dig it when its dun so well!
Straight out to buy levi's! 👖👖👖👖
Dig it when its dun so well!
Straight out to buy levi's! 👖👖👖👖
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