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Misfortune
Her blood sings to me
And I can't help but harmonize
Arriving at her side as she sleeps
She is bathed in moonlight
It's rays caressing her as I long to do
Hair flowing over the pillow
Lips curled in a secret smile
Breasts gently rising, slowly falling
Neck smooth, long, supple
Bending to apply my lips, my teeth
Rapture promised in the kiss
Delivered by the vein pulsing under pale skin
Bending to receive
But rage! Fury! Despair!
A small, precision shine
The gleam of silver necklace, delicate cross
Driving me back defeated
Staring down at her with all my love, longing, desire
As she wakens, smiles gently and whispers
"Better luck next time..."
And I can't help but harmonize
Arriving at her side as she sleeps
She is bathed in moonlight
It's rays caressing her as I long to do
Hair flowing over the pillow
Lips curled in a secret smile
Breasts gently rising, slowly falling
Neck smooth, long, supple
Bending to apply my lips, my teeth
Rapture promised in the kiss
Delivered by the vein pulsing under pale skin
Bending to receive
But rage! Fury! Despair!
A small, precision shine
The gleam of silver necklace, delicate cross
Driving me back defeated
Staring down at her with all my love, longing, desire
As she wakens, smiles gently and whispers
"Better luck next time..."
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Re: Misfortune
Anonymous
3rd Mar 2015 6:55pm
REJECTED! too bad, crow. i really loved this little write. :)

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3rd Mar 2015 9:46pm
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3rd Mar 2015 7:22pm
POW! What a story, ah well, better luck next time. keep trying Crow!!!
Love you Brother!!!!
Zazzles xoxoxox
Love you Brother!!!!
Zazzles xoxoxox
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3rd Mar 2015 9:48pm
Love you too, Jackie. Do you wear a cross, by the way? Garlic usually works too.
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3rd Mar 2015 9:59pm
Hahahahah, I adore you Crow!!! btw no crosses but garlic I enjoy tee hee88
Love you to eternity and beyond!!!
Jackie ")
Love you to eternity and beyond!!!
Jackie ")
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3rd Mar 2015 8:36pm
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3rd Mar 2015 9:50pm
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3rd Mar 2015 9:22pm
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4th Mar 2015 3:19am
If you the vampire I would surely cast my cross aside :) great write Sir Crow with love Crim
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4th Mar 2015 4:44pm
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4th Mar 2015 10:57am
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4th Mar 2015 5:03pm
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4th Mar 2015 6:27pm
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4th Mar 2015 10:19pm
Who says it's a story? You mean to tell me you don't believe in vampires? Shame!
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4th Mar 2015 11:16pm
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5th Mar 2015 00:50am
Right now I'd settle for a woman bathed in any kind of light at all. Thanks, John.
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5th Mar 2015 1:21am
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5th Mar 2015 3:44am
Nah. The cross I can understand. But how did they decide on garlic as a deterrent anyway? Are vamps afraid of bad breath? Go figure...
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9th Mar 2015 6:37pm