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The Deep End
I'd like to catch her if she slipped
There's an abyss back there yawning and waiting
The song of demons rising from its depths
But they're ancient, their skills dulled
Fed by memory and little else
But even this still has its chains
And snares still set and primed
It's the plainclothes specimens around the rim
Night's black agents newly armed
That represent the more immediate threat
But even they are limited in their capacity
Their ability to inflict wounds
Fresh slices slow to heal
She assuredly has the wherewithal
The strength, resources and friends
She is freshly armed
The latest in hardware and technology
Ready to wage war in the past or present tense
But her preference is to live in peace
If she has objections or pain she can put it in writing
And, if she goes in deep
If she so chooses
That mad chorus will turn shrill and desperate
And the descent will be on her own terms
With suggestions from those traveling at her side
Never alone, and bad to the bone.
There's an abyss back there yawning and waiting
The song of demons rising from its depths
But they're ancient, their skills dulled
Fed by memory and little else
But even this still has its chains
And snares still set and primed
It's the plainclothes specimens around the rim
Night's black agents newly armed
That represent the more immediate threat
But even they are limited in their capacity
Their ability to inflict wounds
Fresh slices slow to heal
She assuredly has the wherewithal
The strength, resources and friends
She is freshly armed
The latest in hardware and technology
Ready to wage war in the past or present tense
But her preference is to live in peace
If she has objections or pain she can put it in writing
And, if she goes in deep
If she so chooses
That mad chorus will turn shrill and desperate
And the descent will be on her own terms
With suggestions from those traveling at her side
Never alone, and bad to the bone.
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Re: The Deep End
23rd Dec 2014 10:09pm
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23rd Dec 2014 10:10pm
Re: The Deep End
23rd Dec 2014 10:39pm
Falling into the deep end can be frightening but with perseverance one csn surmount the darkness in one's soul. Writing it out of one's system can be helpful though. Good write :) Crowfly.
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24th Dec 2014 2:07am
Re: The Deep End
24th Dec 2014 4:48am
final line has that cool toughness. sounds like she's a very formidable woman. save your heroics for other damsels...
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24th Dec 2014 5:35am
Re: The Deep End
24th Dec 2014 6:22am
I'm so glad to find the positive note in this dark poem, sounds encouraging... A beautiful write, enjoyed it...
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5th Jan 2015 11:01pm
Re: The Deep End
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Dec 2014 8:11pm
24th Dec 2014 10:02am
I love this so much...like u wrote what I needed to hear right now..this ink of yours I hold very special to me Sir Crow..breathtakingly beautiful. I truly love the way u write...inspiring, uplifting and just so damn sweet!
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5th Jan 2015 11:04pm
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Anonymous
6th Jan 2015 10:29am
Sir Crow,
Each time I read this it gives me more strength, it feels sweet that I helped with the inspiration for it as you picked the perfect words, every one, for the time when I nearly gave up..I love you for that my wonderful friend.
Lady Muse
Each time I read this it gives me more strength, it feels sweet that I helped with the inspiration for it as you picked the perfect words, every one, for the time when I nearly gave up..I love you for that my wonderful friend.
Lady Muse
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6th Jan 2015 4:15pm
Lady Muse,
I'm so glad this continues to help you. I'm proud to know you. You have shown incredible resilience. You went through a trauma and came out of it glowing, and your work has continued strength, sensuality and humor. Any time I can help, all you have to do is ask. You have certainly inspired me.
Sir Crow
I'm so glad this continues to help you. I'm proud to know you. You have shown incredible resilience. You went through a trauma and came out of it glowing, and your work has continued strength, sensuality and humor. Any time I can help, all you have to do is ask. You have certainly inspired me.
Sir Crow
Re: The Deep End
25th Dec 2014 5:52pm
'I'd like to catch her if she slipped
There's an abyss back there yawning and waiting'
^^^^
gawds i love that, crowfly, really resonates with me today.
you always have such wonderful expression,
much enjoyed
There's an abyss back there yawning and waiting'
^^^^
gawds i love that, crowfly, really resonates with me today.
you always have such wonderful expression,
much enjoyed
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re: Re: The Deep End
5th Jan 2015 11:06pm
Thank you, Shadoe. Someone's usually there to catch me, so I try to return the favor.
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3rd Jan 2015 5:10pm
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5th Jan 2015 11:07pm