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Entrusted Heart
I have entrusted you
your own place in my heart
where despair was once dark and hidden
you upon entering slowly in
have made it shine for the first time
tears fall down my cheeks
knowing my words aren't shunned
my luv is felt not cursed upon
am truly graced by a soul in my life
one who takes me for who I am
even with all my flaws you cuddle me
you've taken this damaged heart
luved it for all its worth
my own eyes were made blind to reflect
only saw brokenness not worthy of much
you picked me up out of depressing sludge of life
had heaven create a star just for me
feel calmness from a glowing moon
trusting in its soft light to guide my path
leading me straight to your luving heart
your own place in my heart
where despair was once dark and hidden
you upon entering slowly in
have made it shine for the first time
tears fall down my cheeks
knowing my words aren't shunned
my luv is felt not cursed upon
am truly graced by a soul in my life
one who takes me for who I am
even with all my flaws you cuddle me
you've taken this damaged heart
luved it for all its worth
my own eyes were made blind to reflect
only saw brokenness not worthy of much
you picked me up out of depressing sludge of life
had heaven create a star just for me
feel calmness from a glowing moon
trusting in its soft light to guide my path
leading me straight to your luving heart
Published 1st Dec 2014
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1st Dec 2014 11:36pm
Another really beautiful one, flower. "Had heaven create a star just for me." Wow!
8th Dec 2014 4:10am
Awe Crow.......thank you for the "WOW".....always honored by your words.....xo :)
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1st Dec 2014 11:57pm
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2nd Dec 2014 6:38am
Beautiful verse, too good to be called erotic unless one applies double-entendre to:
"you, who have slowly entered in,
have made it shine for the first time"
Generally, a hymn of love to a lover who has had a transforming impact on the beloved.
"you, who have slowly entered in,
have made it shine for the first time"
Generally, a hymn of love to a lover who has had a transforming impact on the beloved.
8th Dec 2014 4:13am
Solomon.......pleased that yiu have stopped by way......humbled by your words......thank you...xo :)
2nd Dec 2014 7:32am
ES, you always deliver the passion with
your well written work. This, another great
example. .. Outstanding!
xo
your well written work. This, another great
example. .. Outstanding!
xo
Thank you Sweet EV.......I am always blessed by your encouragement and sweet evil precence on my page......thank you.....xo :)
Anonymous
2nd Dec 2014 1:34pm
I don't have the words for this one... 👍
8th Dec 2014 4:17am
Sweet Donovan.......I'm honored in the silence.......thank you for the RL add on.....xo :)
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8th Dec 2014 4:21am
Precious Crim......always a blessing to receive your beautiful words on my page......thank you..xo :)
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8th Dec 2014 4:26am
Hey GBM......it sure is......just like finding a beautiful friendship like ours.....xo :)
13th Sep 2016 7:52am
Your writes are a beautiful breath of sweet fresh air. Your gentle loving heart makes me smile. :) <---- See? Namaste.
13th Sep 2016 10:47pm
Awe DC........your kind words always make me smile back.......thank you my friend......glad you enjoyed this.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
