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Arrogant Poetry
I drink you in
then piss you out
burning my cunt as you go
with your blatant arrogance
though I must confess
I love the pain
relishing in it
I'm an evil bitch
with a penchant
for the self absorbed
so write your poetry
with that almighty pen you possess
tickling me as I savor your vanity
touching my sweet spot
your cheekiness making me wet
I have to read you
only when in the mood
your conceit takes me there
to that lustful place
where I must concede
you are worthy of reigning title
as head poetic prick
then piss you out
burning my cunt as you go
with your blatant arrogance
though I must confess
I love the pain
relishing in it
I'm an evil bitch
with a penchant
for the self absorbed
so write your poetry
with that almighty pen you possess
tickling me as I savor your vanity
touching my sweet spot
your cheekiness making me wet
I have to read you
only when in the mood
your conceit takes me there
to that lustful place
where I must concede
you are worthy of reigning title
as head poetic prick
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29th Apr 2014 1:26am
sinister and sensual images woven together seamlessly. a beautiful write, Brenda xo
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29th Apr 2014 1:33am
I absolutely unquestionably adore this piece
Ms.Crim!
Good grief but you slammed into him like a good girl should ;)
your conceit takes me there
to that lustful place
where I must concede
you are worthy of reigning title
as head poetic prick <--
I hear ya 100% I would be numb, gotta love confidence in a man it's so sexy indeed!
I really enjoy this.
Always write *Darling Crim!*
Zazzles xo
Ms.Crim!
Good grief but you slammed into him like a good girl should ;)
your conceit takes me there
to that lustful place
where I must concede
you are worthy of reigning title
as head poetic prick <--
I hear ya 100% I would be numb, gotta love confidence in a man it's so sexy indeed!
I really enjoy this.
Always write *Darling Crim!*
Zazzles xo
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thank you most graciously Zazzles for such an awesome comment and RL add :) with love Crim p.s. I do adore a man with confidence :)
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Anonymous
29th Apr 2014 3:28am
Sweet Crim.....I have to agree with this is sweet poison power of your pen and skillful mind. Enjoyed this fire from your soul write very much. Xo :)
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29th Apr 2014 3:27pm
thank you John too true though I must confess to loving the arrogant poets :) with love Crim
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29th Apr 2014 5:24am
Mmm, meh bonny Lass, meh weh conjuhr puhwt owt yuhrr blohk. :)
Translation, '... me wee conjure put out your block.'
And, you frickin' rock!
XO
Translation, '... me wee conjure put out your block.'
And, you frickin' rock!
XO
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29th Apr 2014 3:28pm
I love it when you talk to me like that it's sexy ;) thank you for conjuring for me and for the heartfelt comment :) with love Brenda
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29th Apr 2014 7:42am
...two snaps in a z formation! :)
Your pen did the damn thang' Crim!
'Arrogant Poetry', I so love the title, it fits this ink like a glove....
Pen love~
Your pen did the damn thang' Crim!
'Arrogant Poetry', I so love the title, it fits this ink like a glove....
Pen love~
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29th Apr 2014 1:17pm
Great title, awesome ink, Both strength and weakness fused in this write, but the strength of your lust as the weakness and the weakness of your passion as your strength.
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29th Apr 2014 3:31pm
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29th Apr 2014 3:08pm
I adore your writing! You always choose the most perfect words that strike up imagery and emotion. :)
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29th Apr 2014 3:32pm
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Vivid and evocative ink.. you've such an inherent and natural command of your words..knowing just how to turn a phrase, to articulate, to convey, to paint a picture in the readers mind's eye.... kudos...with love and respect..xoxo domore
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30th Apr 2014 00:52am
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29th Apr 2014 3:52pm
Haha, damn, I love this one, Crim. You tickle, and tug our strings at your own will. Thank you for this write, very cool :)
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Anonymous
29th Apr 2014 5:20pm
Ah yes. A few observational layers to this. A good job. Thank you for the read.
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30th Apr 2014 00:53am
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1st May 2014 3:07am
I'm head poetic prick right now aren't i?
Aww, you wrote about me. Thank you!
It started with me a little confused, which made the slow unravel even more pleasing. Nice one :)
Aww, you wrote about me. Thank you!
It started with me a little confused, which made the slow unravel even more pleasing. Nice one :)
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1st May 2014 4:47pm
of course it's about you ;) and all the arrogant poets I adore thank you for the read :) with love Crim
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1st May 2014 3:15am
Love the words wrapping around the voice here in this poem...its viscerally erotically tragic...:)
Philip
Philip
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Anonymous
28th May 2014 3:14pm
the raw honesty in your work is amazing
you get freer all the time and the quality shows in your writing..
deep pain well written...love to ya
:) peace Miki
you get freer all the time and the quality shows in your writing..
deep pain well written...love to ya
:) peace Miki
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