Nice Shot

"Of everything you they said you could never see?"

"Of everything they said you couldn't see?"

intentional. the word never has a point there.

maybe it means?:

"Of everything about you, they said you could never see?"

i guess it's the "you they" that confuses me.

 

oh! i didnt even see that.. that needs to be fixed. thanks

i have to say this is ok peom could use more passion if you was to really enjoy marijuana maybe it would had more meaning

yeah you're right :) haha
i havent smoked weed in years... this is a half assed poem to be honest with you haha
i wrote better drug inspired poems when i was actually doing drugs ( duh) but i wrote this for fun basically. and i hate it. this is probbly the worst poem i have written this year

I didn't take it as weed, I took it as a cigar. If you think of someone rolling a cigar and each leaf, metaphorically being 'false realities' it puts a different spin on it, very classy - almost patronising, I personally liked it for that.

im glad you saw it that way

i like the first part, the 'hey man' and the title reminds me of the song 'hey man nice shot' by filter

yeah that song was kindof my muse for that week :)
its a good song
but i dont like this poem much
so thanks