deepundergroundpoetry.com
Glass Heart
I wish I had something to believe in
a place to hold my heart safely
where it could sparkle like crushed diamonds
without ever feeling the pain of it breaking
a place to hold my heart safely
where it could sparkle like crushed diamonds
without ever feeling the pain of it breaking
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 8
reading list entries 1
comments 21
reads 909
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re: Glass Heart
26th Jan 2014 7:29pm
re: Re: Glass Heart
26th Jan 2014 9:04pm
Re: Glass Heart
Anonymous
26th Jan 2014 7:37pm
<< post removed >>
re: Re: Glass Heart
26th Jan 2014 9:05pm
I'm so glad I can do that for you Dirt, thank you so much for your kind words.
Re: Glass Heart
26th Jan 2014 7:48pm
I love your poem.
It makes me think about the strange relationships between vulnerability and strength, risk and despair, empathy and self-preservation, and much more. Thank you. :)
It makes me think about the strange relationships between vulnerability and strength, risk and despair, empathy and self-preservation, and much more. Thank you. :)
1
re: Re: Glass Heart
26th Jan 2014 9:07pm
Re: Glass Heart
26th Jan 2014 8:17pm
re: Re: Glass Heart
26th Jan 2014 9:08pm
Re: Glass Heart
26th Jan 2014 9:05pm
You do have something to believe in its ur spirit although heart do break like glass but if u don't believe in your spirit it will never heat the broken piece and you do have a place to hang ur heart it's ur faith. What an exquisite write Tommie Lynn
1
re: Re: Glass Heart
26th Jan 2014 9:10pm
I appreciate your support BS.Your words mean a lot, thank you very much. :)
Re: Glass Heart
Anonymous
26th Jan 2014 9:45pm
<< post removed >>
re: Re: Glass Heart
26th Jan 2014 9:50pm
Re: Glass Heart
26th Jan 2014 11:20pm
so beautiful and unique! your thoughts here are relatable too... amazing write :)
1
re: Re: Glass Heart
26th Jan 2014 11:33pm
Glad you could relate Kitty, I am very thankful for your words and the RL add. :)
Re: Glass Heart
27th Jan 2014 2:03am
re: Re: Glass Heart
27th Jan 2014 2:23am
Re: Glass Heart
27th Jan 2014 11:39pm
Beautiful piece TL, maybe I'm just a little biased :P
"Where it could sparkle like crushed diamonds"
Stunning x
"Where it could sparkle like crushed diamonds"
Stunning x
1
re: Re: Glass Heart
28th Jan 2014 2:24am
Haha...I did think of you afterword, great title, right? ;)
Thank you for reading, your words are always welcome.
Thank you for reading, your words are always welcome.
Re: Glass Heart
28th Jan 2014 1:19am
re: Re: Glass Heart
28th Jan 2014 2:26am
I dream of it often. Thank you Twicth. I always look forward to your words. XO