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What do you see?
Wild but soft
vanilla scented
ivory skin
heart shaped
lips red as a rose
placing tiny
forget me not
kisses to his
hard but gentle
manly scented
olive skin
his beastly eyes
speak to
my sapphire
gems
just then he
sees the
real me.
vanilla scented
ivory skin
heart shaped
lips red as a rose
placing tiny
forget me not
kisses to his
hard but gentle
manly scented
olive skin
his beastly eyes
speak to
my sapphire
gems
just then he
sees the
real me.
Published 26th Jan 2014
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26th Jan 2014 5:07pm
26th Jan 2014 5:42pm
26th Jan 2014 5:07pm
You are such a beautiful mix of passion and pain, sensuality and chaos.
I love reading your words.
I love reading your words.
26th Jan 2014 5:44pm
26th Jan 2014 5:27pm
26th Jan 2014 5:46pm
26th Jan 2014 6:14pm
Ooh tht melted like ice wow tht is absolutely beautiful. I love how u left ur kisses on him with eyes wide being penetrated, peering into you
26th Jan 2014 6:47pm
To follow the title, the poem could read more alluringly if the 'his' was 'your' and 'he' was 'you'. All the same, a colourful read and the description of the narrator that goes well with your own pic.
26th Jan 2014 9:12pm
Ah yes SS, you're right.As always I appreciate you reading me and thank you for your words. :-)
27th Jan 2014 6:22am
I add to my comments in rhyme (came later, literally overnight);
Portrays many a male's fantasy of Beauty in the Bed,
About to go with him the whole way, or simply give him head.
Portrays many a male's fantasy of Beauty in the Bed,
About to go with him the whole way, or simply give him head.
26th Jan 2014 9:40pm
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