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Tampons And Corsets
This poem is all about me
being a woman who loves to seduce
this is the real side of womanhood
I hate how tampons are always too long
bruising my tender pussy lips
how we douche to taste like strawberries
or some kind of springtime flower
running to stay in shape
my breasts have a mind of their own
bouncing freely no matter
the tightest of sports bras
I laugh as I write this
but I'm serious
wearing bone crushing corsets
all to accentuate the smallness
of my waist letting my breasts
swell over the top
all to please my man
I'm a submissive whore
with a rebellious side
winks at you as you read this
it's tough being a woman
sucking cock until i'm raw
in the throat swallowing down
all you have to offer
I savor the satisfied look
on your face but gag on the taste
you men don't taste like strawberries
I don't mean to be complaining
just stating facts
I let the cock slide all
the way down my throat
and swallow a load
I'm your cum whore
I aim to please
being a rebellious slut
talking of things for real
we're not walking barbies
waiting on you to play with us
fuck it maybe i'll become a Dom.
with a toy of my own
being a woman who loves to seduce
this is the real side of womanhood
I hate how tampons are always too long
bruising my tender pussy lips
how we douche to taste like strawberries
or some kind of springtime flower
running to stay in shape
my breasts have a mind of their own
bouncing freely no matter
the tightest of sports bras
I laugh as I write this
but I'm serious
wearing bone crushing corsets
all to accentuate the smallness
of my waist letting my breasts
swell over the top
all to please my man
I'm a submissive whore
with a rebellious side
winks at you as you read this
it's tough being a woman
sucking cock until i'm raw
in the throat swallowing down
all you have to offer
I savor the satisfied look
on your face but gag on the taste
you men don't taste like strawberries
I don't mean to be complaining
just stating facts
I let the cock slide all
the way down my throat
and swallow a load
I'm your cum whore
I aim to please
being a rebellious slut
talking of things for real
we're not walking barbies
waiting on you to play with us
fuck it maybe i'll become a Dom.
with a toy of my own
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 14th Dec 2013
| Edited 15th Dec 2013
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14th Dec 2013 9:42pm
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14th Dec 2013 9:52pm
Thank you Gabriel you give the top comments men taste extra salty ;) much love Crim :)
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14th Dec 2013 9:51pm
what taste and smell you imagine and relish of men
sucking their hard ons
and do they cum faster in ur mouth
than in ur jelly
in the belly
just enlighten me
if u please
ur a strong tight lower lipped
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sucking their hard ons
and do they cum faster in ur mouth
than in ur jelly
in the belly
just enlighten me
if u please
ur a strong tight lower lipped
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14th Dec 2013 10:57pm
thank u ...its natural
as men are ever ready
with sperm on their tip
they don't foreplay much
as women take longer to heat
i am about to post one now
as soon as they permit me
do read it
and thanks for ur education
mostly guys lie
about two things
one is their length
and second is lasting inside
which u have clarified
thanks again Crims
as men are ever ready
with sperm on their tip
they don't foreplay much
as women take longer to heat
i am about to post one now
as soon as they permit me
do read it
and thanks for ur education
mostly guys lie
about two things
one is their length
and second is lasting inside
which u have clarified
thanks again Crims
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22nd Dec 2013 8:53pm
U have not read me still
but i ain't so still
it darts all around like a fish
if only i could detach it
how i wish
and without a bait
it will bring home many a fish
for my selective night's dish
poetic phallacy
and phallus may be
but tis tis
tis it
my wishy wish
but i ain't so still
it darts all around like a fish
if only i could detach it
how i wish
and without a bait
it will bring home many a fish
for my selective night's dish
poetic phallacy
and phallus may be
but tis tis
tis it
my wishy wish
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14th Dec 2013 10:27pm
ahh Crim if only they knew how boring it was to remain all primped up smooth & silky, groomed like a lady whilst acting like a whore, this takes skill and expertise. You have me plotting evil scenarios of revenge, although maybe I'll just keep the toys for myself...lol
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14th Dec 2013 10:55pm
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14th Dec 2013 10:31pm
You are breaking free, again ....
You should be a Dom, or at least a switch
The best of both worlds
I applaud you, for your courage and humor
You should be a Dom, or at least a switch
The best of both worlds
I applaud you, for your courage and humor
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14th Dec 2013 10:54pm
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14th Dec 2013 10:36pm
Giving out soft tongue lashes never hurts. Personally, I love men on their knees licking my cherry flavored offering. Empowering drops of ink, Ms. Crim :) Adoring it.
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14th Dec 2013 10:58pm
thank you Blue Angel for your understanding cherry juice is preferable ;) much love Crim
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14th Dec 2013 10:55pm
Lmao well on behalf of the men ( who deserve it)
I say a hearty THANK YOU ma'am each n everytime I get to 'bam wham' lol n truly, if you're not a fan of my cock
juice, that's why I keep a shot glass of honey nearby to down as a chaser! lol love the raw realness lady
n yea appreciate ur primping for our happiness! lol
I say a hearty THANK YOU ma'am each n everytime I get to 'bam wham' lol n truly, if you're not a fan of my cock
juice, that's why I keep a shot glass of honey nearby to down as a chaser! lol love the raw realness lady
n yea appreciate ur primping for our happiness! lol
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14th Dec 2013 10:59pm
thank you Poe I'm sure you'd go down as smooth as silk just like your poems :) much love Crim
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14th Dec 2013 11:29pm
Amen sister!!!Love the twisted humor,excellent write.I find pineapple juice to be very tasty,for both men and women!Let the flavors flow :)
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th Dec 2013 1:15am
15th Dec 2013 1:14am
Couple of things... do you really not like the taste?
and I never artificially flavour myself ... why kill what makes me... me?
and try this bra... I run races and this is the only bra I will wear. Great support, no uni-boob, comfortable an versatile... Expensive but worth every penny...
http://shop.lululemon.com/products/clothes-accessories/bras-medium-support/Ta-Ta-Tamer-II-31110
And what it looks like on a real person, not just a catalogue picture...
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee28/DrDeisel/Private/tatas.jpg
Seriously recommend...
and I never artificially flavour myself ... why kill what makes me... me?
and try this bra... I run races and this is the only bra I will wear. Great support, no uni-boob, comfortable an versatile... Expensive but worth every penny...
http://shop.lululemon.com/products/clothes-accessories/bras-medium-support/Ta-Ta-Tamer-II-31110
And what it looks like on a real person, not just a catalogue picture...
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee28/DrDeisel/Private/tatas.jpg
Seriously recommend...
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15th Dec 2013 9:23am
Thank you Petit that looks like a great bra i'll have to try that and it's men I was kind of ranting about their taste partially in humor.. much love Crim :)
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15th Dec 2013 9:39am
i just feel in love with you all over again. i love a cum whore i love you . your poetry is better then sex .. it rules the strawberry nation. it tastes so good on my lips i could cum. thank you dark princess..
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15th Dec 2013 9:44am
My Dark Mistress I've missed your presence I love you too I bet you taste sweet just the way you are dark and sexy Mistress ;) you honored and touched this whore with your love.. Crim :)
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15th Dec 2013 10:30am
your complaints are common to all women, or at least most of them, & men strive & suffer to be attractive as well. but sex is our god & goddess, & we do what we must in our adoration...
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I know men work hard to look great and all for sex being god and goddess just a small playful rant John I really do love giving head ;) much love Crim
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Anonymous
15th Dec 2013 11:37am
LMAO!!!!! Got to luv this! You are clever and witty with this. Really enjoyed it. :)
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15th Dec 2013 10:40pm
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whenever I read you, i either want to go out and do something reall raunchy or grow a dick and live like the other side lol
steller ink Brenda xo love every word
steller ink Brenda xo love every word
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15th Dec 2013 5:47pm
A peek behind the scenes of womanhood, and a hot write to top it all off...
Much admiration for your raw ingredients, Crim...
Much admiration for your raw ingredients, Crim...
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15th Dec 2013 6:07pm
Always a need for a switch at sometime in life...variety they say...not everyday feels like strawberry fields-excellent Write to realism!!!
My days begins gray...how much colour is added depends on how the hours roll by ;)
My days begins gray...how much colour is added depends on how the hours roll by ;)
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15th Dec 2013 10:43pm
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15th Dec 2013 6:30pm
A submissive cry
Of bitter savory sweet
Body covered in bliss
Mind starving to eat
Submissive you will always be
Taste of true love in its gift
Having great sex for sex
Nothing like the taste of dominance
Of bitter savory sweet
Body covered in bliss
Mind starving to eat
Submissive you will always be
Taste of true love in its gift
Having great sex for sex
Nothing like the taste of dominance
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15th Dec 2013 10:44pm
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16th Dec 2013 2:27am
Thank you for putting a smile in my face...
A real wide smile (along with some lip bites)
Dammit!!
A real wide smile (along with some lip bites)
Dammit!!
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16th Dec 2013 5:19am
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16th Dec 2013 2:32am
The title caught me off guard and I wasn't expecting the ink. A wonderful surprise Crim! I love the brutal-beauty of your mind...
Pen Love~
Pen Love~
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Anonymous
16th Dec 2013 5:43am
ahhhh you rock girl..this is awesome!!!
This is the piece we, women, would want to write and you did it for us!!!
Thank you Brenda!!!
This is the piece we, women, would want to write and you did it for us!!!
Thank you Brenda!!!
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18th Dec 2013 2:42pm
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It's scientifically proven that vegetarian's have the best tasting semen!!!
It sounds like your man needs to change his diet, eat less meat and dairy products or you need to start slipping kiwifruit, watermelon and pineapple into his meals. Apparently, semen will taste sweeter by incorporating plums, blueberries and cranberries into his diet...
Seriously, fucking awesome poem Crim, but if you have any success with the above diet changes, you're going to have to write about how good cum tastes. [feel free to throw something at me if you hate this comment... I come up with some twisted ideas when I transcend into chronic sleep depravation]
It sounds like your man needs to change his diet, eat less meat and dairy products or you need to start slipping kiwifruit, watermelon and pineapple into his meals. Apparently, semen will taste sweeter by incorporating plums, blueberries and cranberries into his diet...
Seriously, fucking awesome poem Crim, but if you have any success with the above diet changes, you're going to have to write about how good cum tastes. [feel free to throw something at me if you hate this comment... I come up with some twisted ideas when I transcend into chronic sleep depravation]
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18th Dec 2013 2:44pm
Mr. Case thank you so much for the great comment and advise I promise you if it works i'll come back with a write about how tasty cum is ;) much love Crim
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17th Dec 2013 2:13am
I'm glad I'm not the only one that thinks cum tastes a little nasty.
Anyway... Loved this poem so much!:)
Anyway... Loved this poem so much!:)
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23rd Dec 2013 10:33pm
whatever pussy tastes awesome you crazy ass very fuckin seductive though. you hit your mark and you blew my mind
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6th Jan 2014 9:59pm
Wht a masterpiece of art this is
Its like walkingnintna museum
and staring at tht a statue of a nude woman
mavel at her beauty is wht i get from this piece
Its like walkingnintna museum
and staring at tht a statue of a nude woman
mavel at her beauty is wht i get from this piece
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31st Jan 2014 12:41pm
Thank goodness for yet another poet who tells it as it is...and in honest language too.
Well done! We look forward to more from this poet
Well done! We look forward to more from this poet
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6th May 2016 6:05pm
i have never seen a penis or tampon
as long as the length of all comments
ur a genie lady
enjoy body freedom more bees will fly to thee u must be facially lovely then when the lights are switched off ll gals even out as men come and go in and out there is no doubt all will shout fux i have made my cumm glad u will be if u dwell in my cummming poetry
as long as the length of all comments
ur a genie lady
enjoy body freedom more bees will fly to thee u must be facially lovely then when the lights are switched off ll gals even out as men come and go in and out there is no doubt all will shout fux i have made my cumm glad u will be if u dwell in my cummming poetry
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6th May 2016 6:19pm
thank you again for bringing this old poem up I had forgotten about it..
thank you also for such a funny comment making me giggle :)
love Crim
thank you also for such a funny comment making me giggle :)
love Crim
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7th May 2016 7:12pm
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18th May 2017 8:25pm
So there we know...
If you turn into a man for one day, you can bathe that cock of yours to taste like strawberries and bubble gum and cotton candy, and you'll surprise some girl with it :)
Great write!
If you turn into a man for one day, you can bathe that cock of yours to taste like strawberries and bubble gum and cotton candy, and you'll surprise some girl with it :)
Great write!
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Anonymous
10th Aug 2018 6:58pm
guess i 'came' late to the party..
but..at least i came...
in last
damn this joint is fiya..
love the raw feminine arrogance
...ah yeah...
but..at least i came...
in last
damn this joint is fiya..
love the raw feminine arrogance
...ah yeah...
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10th Aug 2018 7:03pm
giggles yeah what can I say?
blushes...
of all of them this one today interesting...
love Crim
blushes...
of all of them this one today interesting...
love Crim