Hard Hitter

Jaysus Crims

I guess this is confessional poetry, kind of Jekyll and Hyde, 'cept it's Jekyll who's control here.

of the two you've just posted, I like this one best for it's confidence and language. the last two stanzas are wonderful

good stuff, shine on

 

thank you Craic you made my day with your comment :) peace Crim

thank you Mr. A I always enjoy your visits :) peace Crim

Crim,

Wow! Reminded me of the Townes Van Zandt, "Pancho and Lefty" lyrics: "Wore his gun outside his pants
For all the honest world to feel". Loved the hard hitting, take no prisioner style of this write! Enjoyed!

tornado

thank you Tornado for the song lyrics and such a great comment :) peace Crim

you are hard on yourself
but it makes for a very good poem
Kitty

thank you beautiful Kitty I will try not to be so hard on myself :) peace Brenda

"just wait for a hard hitter
to come up to bat"

I liked this line, being a baseball fan and all. Alex Rodriguez came to mind...

Gemini

thank you Gemini love Alex Rodriguez.. some heavy slugging poets here as well :) peace Crim

C'Mon Bitch! You can take it!

Wow, great stuff, Crim! almost made me get my back up ;)

"suck it up bitch
spit your venom
let it loose"

YEAHHHH!

thank you Tom you made me smile with your comment :) peace Crim

And she comes back swinging... Kickin' ass and takin' no prisoners, either.

Love the first two lines.

Thank you Atakti I always love your visits :) peace Crim

You know how I like the hard-hittin' ones the best :) Your poetry packs brass-knux...

thank you Butcher brass-knux really? I love it :) peace Crim

Boom!Yes I like that...you roused me all up,invigorating :)

smiling widely thank you Hashman glad you enjoyed :) peace Crim

Nothin Like a hard hitter... a go getta fa sure!


Love it Crim...!



XOXO
Fire

thank you Fire lovely lady you a hard hitter in a beautiful way for sure :) peace Crim

Need to learn this...

Thank you Petit for you visit you made me smile :) peace Crim

Anger is a gift....once again nice lines crim !
you made my day.  ;)

thank you Cesar you made me smile wide with your comment :) peace Crim

Hard hitting indeed-shots in life...they do come and energize from time to time-excellent rawness here!!!

thank Soul your visits always make me smile :) peace Crim

can't beat angry sex. you are one explosive woman...

thank you John smiling wide :) peace Crim

The deriving of pleasure

yes indeed thank you :) peace Crim

great flow

no greeting card work for you

I truly admire your capacity to give us cold fork reality.

Totally raw with no apologies.

Great writing.

thank you Poet though I have a soft side that is a romantic that doesn't come off here much love Crim :)