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Submissive Me
I kneel at your cock
as if it were a thrown
waiting to be told
I can taste your creamy flavor
you tease me as you take command
ask for it Crimsin
Master can I?
collared and leashed
I await your command
thirsty for your cum
play with yourself first
I begin to rub my pussy
looking up as your glare pierces me
naked, shamelessly playing with myself
noticing the wicked smile on your face
as you pinch one tit then the other
bringing a moan from deep within my throat
you tighten your hold on my leash
as it begins to choke me
you command me to bend over
slapping my ass hard
stifling a whimper
whipping me over and over
until big red welts are glowing
does that feel good slave?
"yes Master"
kneel before me slave
eyes of steel pierce me
suck my cock take it all
I try to hide a smile
but you notice
pulling my hair hard
suck it slave
taking your cock in my throat
as you tighten my leash
making my throat grip your dick
with each thrust
feeling myself turn blue
all the more aroused
releasing your hold on me
pumping a load down my throat
you reach down and touch my wetness
did I say you could cum?
"no Master"
your masked friend
who has been watching
the whole scene
stroking himself
is told take
this disobedient slave
fuck her in
all three holes
make her choke, make her plead
as if it were a thrown
waiting to be told
I can taste your creamy flavor
you tease me as you take command
ask for it Crimsin
Master can I?
collared and leashed
I await your command
thirsty for your cum
play with yourself first
I begin to rub my pussy
looking up as your glare pierces me
naked, shamelessly playing with myself
noticing the wicked smile on your face
as you pinch one tit then the other
bringing a moan from deep within my throat
you tighten your hold on my leash
as it begins to choke me
you command me to bend over
slapping my ass hard
stifling a whimper
whipping me over and over
until big red welts are glowing
does that feel good slave?
"yes Master"
kneel before me slave
eyes of steel pierce me
suck my cock take it all
I try to hide a smile
but you notice
pulling my hair hard
suck it slave
taking your cock in my throat
as you tighten my leash
making my throat grip your dick
with each thrust
feeling myself turn blue
all the more aroused
releasing your hold on me
pumping a load down my throat
you reach down and touch my wetness
did I say you could cum?
"no Master"
your masked friend
who has been watching
the whole scene
stroking himself
is told take
this disobedient slave
fuck her in
all three holes
make her choke, make her plead
Published 7th Nov 2013
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7th Nov 2013 7:33pm
7th Nov 2013 8:47pm
7th Nov 2013 7:34pm
7th Nov 2013 8:47pm
7th Nov 2013 9:08pm
Damn Girl!..... Im about to slide outa my chair!
That was draw dropping hotness!
XOXO
Fire
That was draw dropping hotness!
XOXO
Fire
7th Nov 2013 9:56pm
3rd Dec 2013 8:47pm
4th Dec 2013 00:35am
7th Nov 2013 9:40pm
there is a very thin line between eroticism and art...but you manage to cross them in the most sexual and delicate way...
i dont have the correct words to describe this piece...is just so sexually delicious!!
carnal apple i must say...WOW!!
i dont have the correct words to describe this piece...is just so sexually delicious!!
carnal apple i must say...WOW!!
7th Nov 2013 9:56pm
7th Nov 2013 11:28pm
you make very arousing poetry. the amount of pleasure 2 people can give each other is unlimited, regardless of identities...
8th Nov 2013 8:06pm
thank you John.. yes a lot of truth in what you say.. pleasure was taken and given :) peace Crim
Anonymous
8th Nov 2013 1:40am
Good poem
but I felt very sorry for the submissive
was it consensual
was it for money
borderline between abuse and erotica
can be very thin
but I felt very sorry for the submissive
was it consensual
was it for money
borderline between abuse and erotica
can be very thin
8th Nov 2013 8:05pm
thank you Kitty for your kind heart.. it was consensual and part of my past and I wasn't really harmed.. peace Brenda
8th Nov 2013 2:38am
yank my leash... oh yess i loved this and i do mean loved this. being a submissive its hits a nerve and what a lovely nerve it has hit.... mmmmm licks my lips... now where is my Master when i need a spanking...
8th Nov 2013 8:07pm
thank you Rose for such a fantastic response to this poem.. you made me smile wide :) peace Crim
8th Nov 2013 4:01am
8th Nov 2013 8:08pm
8th Nov 2013 7:59am
I couldn't even blink through the entire read. Gripping, erotic stuff. Well done :3
8th Nov 2013 8:08pm
9th Nov 2013 2:12am
This is the kind of reading
material that I've missed and
you've made me very happy that
I am back perusing D.U.P.
A very hottt write Unveiling... Pan
material that I've missed and
you've made me very happy that
I am back perusing D.U.P.
A very hottt write Unveiling... Pan
9th Nov 2013 2:59pm
thank you Pan you made me happy with your comment :) so glad you're back :) peace Crim
Anonymous
9th Nov 2013 3:11pm
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9th Nov 2013 3:20pm
9th Nov 2013 9:29pm
That sweets was soooo HOT!!!
You Give Great pen!!lol
Loved this write, never stop
Sir Lancelott
You Give Great pen!!lol
Loved this write, never stop
Sir Lancelott
10th Nov 2013 00:26am
thank you Sir L. for such a beautiful response to my poem.. it made me happy you enjoyed :) peace Crim
10th Nov 2013 1:22am
Crim, there is something about being submissive that has always intrigued me. You provided an imagery that helps the reader feel the eroticism and the passion. For a moment, I was contemplating. My Dominance would not allow such.
AWESOME!!!!!
AWESOME!!!!!
10th Nov 2013 3:45am
thank you Kym for such a heartfelt comment.. If not a sub in you maybe a Dominatrix ;) hugs Crim
10th Nov 2013 2:13am
Damn. Im just speechless. This poem had me on the edge of my seat want to read more and more. Just had me feeling so....mmmmm inside. Just so good. I love it!
10th Nov 2013 3:46am
thank you for such an awesome comment.. i'm glad it held you on the edge of your seat :) peace Crim
15th Nov 2013 1:55pm
well that was uh... moist lolz ^.^
a sensual feast for the senses Brenda. Loved every word.
a sensual feast for the senses Brenda. Loved every word.
15th Nov 2013 4:02pm
thank you Mia you made me smile wide I hope you are well you're missed much love Brenda :)
5th Dec 2013 11:20am
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11th Dec 2013 2:27pm
caliced hands of softened sweet touch
protection and love given like no other
handled like a new toy on Christmas
you getting the best of birthday wishes
The places you must have internally went
not even gods hands could invent
From a dominants hands to a submissive heart
thank you for this beautiful ink of art
protection and love given like no other
handled like a new toy on Christmas
you getting the best of birthday wishes
The places you must have internally went
not even gods hands could invent
From a dominants hands to a submissive heart
thank you for this beautiful ink of art
11th Dec 2013 6:09pm
14th Dec 2013 4:41pm
Your sweet sexy poem
gives me a solution
why women take so long to heat
as men their cocks do beat
and
then as they enter they cum sooner
more than often
so to be at a save level
women must masturbate
get their creams flowing
men should also masturbate
then after an a hour of mutual foreplay
I’m sure both gals and guys
will watch other knock out
and as all men desire
to remain in the container
till end of life
surely enough tis the way
one should fuck ones
Gf lover or wife
then both will be at par
and
never cum till they want to come
fuck the Kamasutra…
every one…
Anonymous
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