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Tip-Top
Bumps,grinds and bruises
that's how the top confuses
it's all about the fear
always shouting the end is near
pushing us into despair
telling us they care.
Hold our heads high
let's shout (It's all a lie)
find the way out
that's what it's about
standing together not apart
dig deep into our hearts
knock them from the top
this bull has got to stop.
that's how the top confuses
it's all about the fear
always shouting the end is near
pushing us into despair
telling us they care.
Hold our heads high
let's shout (It's all a lie)
find the way out
that's what it's about
standing together not apart
dig deep into our hearts
knock them from the top
this bull has got to stop.
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6th Oct 2013 12:29pm
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6th Oct 2013 4:50pm
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6th Oct 2013 5:08pm
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6th Oct 2013 5:14pm
Yup yup I hear you bro! Nowadays everyone's a 'prophet' huh? Nice lil no nonsense message that all should heed :)
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6th Oct 2013 7:51pm
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6th Oct 2013 5:45pm
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6th Oct 2013 6:44pm
"United we stand, divided we fall..." **
A prophet of truth, in your own right, my Friend!
Inked with Insight!
( ** Aesop--Greek slave, and fable author--620-560 BC )
A prophet of truth, in your own right, my Friend!
Inked with Insight!
( ** Aesop--Greek slave, and fable author--620-560 BC )
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6th Oct 2013 7:55pm
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Anonymous
6th Oct 2013 7:29pm
Isn't it mostly about how fearful they really are themselves?!
Nice one Mr. Hash.
Nice one Mr. Hash.
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6th Oct 2013 8:00pm
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12th Oct 2013 00:24am
tight rhyme scheme! only thing id edit is maybe italicize or put parenthesis around the line "its all a lie." Bet this sounds great as spoken word!
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12th Oct 2013 00:49am