Naked Truth

Beautiful yet tragic,  superb poem, I feel incredibly moved by it . Well done!

The composition was simple but I think very frank. The simplicity striked me and I thought as to why not posting it. I just penned the same last week within a few minutes. I am glad that it touched you and I think in this way that I am succesful. Thanks a ton for adding the same in your list.

It is such a simple fine poem.

You are very kind Divine!!!

The last line is a knockout blow, and a perfect end to this admirably controlled, structured and charming love verse. My favourite stanza though is the fourth. You make my heart flutter, Anando. :)

Each and every comment of yours is improving me day by day and this one is not an exception. I think I am flying at the top of the world. Keep reading me Jack so that I can improve. You are too kind Jack.

I loved it and it is now on my reading list...Lovers National Anthem!

With your addition of the same in your reading list, Naked Truth is my first poem in this site which has been added more than once in a reading list. For me this one is a great feeling of accomplishment and you are the one who made it possible for me. Thank you will be such a tiny thing in this context. In fact I wanna hug you. " A Lovers National Anthem" sounds poetic in itself and now I am looking forward to read some of your works. Continue reading me so that your kind of motivation improves me further.

the ultimate love poem with the naked truth as a background!
i don't know why but it reminds me of the tragedy of romeo and juliet and the love that can't or shan't exist in real life ..
sheer beauty dear one

I will consider this as my most successful composition so far if it reminds you even something near to romeo and juliet. I am feeling speechless with this comment of yours Ophie. While composing the poem my intention was to be straight and frank from the heart and at the same time to write a very plain and simple poem.

Thank you for bringing me back here, Anando.  This work is soooo beautiful.  The very first stanza had me melting and the second and third were the killing blow.  Such romantic craftsmanship! Such belief in a greater calling!  Even if it goes unfulfilled just to feel that is a boon, to express it, an even greater gift.  I am in awe of you today, good poet.

Hey thank you so much Regan for reading and adding me again. Your comments always mean so much to me.

Thank you very much for your lovely comment holdit. I am glad that you enjoyed reading this piece. And thank you so much for sharing the other beautiful composition, East and West, You are also a brilliant poet dear.

Im so happy to have come across this one..this is short, simple and so moving...I agree with heslop here...the last line is actually amazing...very well articulated...very well written....
:)

Hey Hey...I have come across so many praisers for this one...but the least effort I put into this one...kinda straight from the heart...like Kolaveri D...I am glad you read this one.

:P kolaveri dee.....
ha ha, yeah right...infact..i feel that the most effortles of all things can actually do wonders...u have already illustrated its example...ppl love kolaveri dee, though its something which the entire nation does not undertsand,...its almost gibberish...and look at 'chammak challo'...or 'chiggy wiggy' they brought in akon and kylie...just to produce such awefull numbers....(i mean, i personally didnt like both of them)
hence, ur effortlessly brilliant in this poem...wat Baldassare Castiglione calls 'sprezzatura'
:P

Thanks a ton for comparing me to such great artistes in the world. I have forgot to compose like that one again. Maybe motivated with this one...he he...

thanks to orphie
this was on her RL
it brought back memories  
some happiness
some one also called me dear

you are a poet hope
by now you would have got married
I can't forget your pops @ 16 fucking poem
its a worthy of  at least a daily ,masturbation